Fic Update

[amberfocus]

I just sent ch. 17 of Zeppelins off to Amy to beta.    A bit of revelation, a bit of angst, an unforgiving cat, a bit of romance, a bit of teasing, a bit of touchy feely, a bit of happy, and some more revelations leading to the set up for the action of the next chapter.  And almost 4000 words.  So it'll be up sometime within the next six hours or so, well before midnight PDT.

Teaser?  Yes?  Okay:

 

“Oh, poor, Jonathon.  Guess you’ll have to stay here for a bit until that rather noticeable problem dies down a bit, won’t you?” she teases.  With a quick glance out at the store floor she angles her body to block any view of her actions and reaches out.  With a courage she can hardly believe she has she dares to stroke the bulge in his jeans and he shudders against her, pushing into her hand and whimpering.  “Tonight,” she promises.

“Minx,” he growls.  He pulls her back in for one more kiss, his tongue frantically claiming ownership of her mouth as she tries to step away, and when he releases her she is dizzy and full of as much desire as he is, her knickers soaked.  Well, she rather deserves that for being such a deliberate little tease.

 

Comments

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

It's appropriate to the chapter, though! *grins*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Just realized I didn't answer your question about the smut. 20 is the planned chapter for them to finally make love, but um...it's entirely possible, but don't hold me to it, things may end up in ch. 19 that I hadn't planned on. It really depends on how the action part of the story plays out. Um...so ch. 19 might have more than foreplay, I just can't tell at the moment. I'm trying to push it all the way to ch. 20 though, just on the principle of the thing. *grins* But not at the expense of the story.

[qtrhorserider.livejournal.com]

An..tis.apation..

Antisa..pay..yay..shun

is makin' me wait..

with apologies to Carly Simon, but dang it, it fit

[ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com]

Well, I personally wouldn't mind the ball getting a nice push rolling by Chapter 19, you know... ;) *never used to be such a perv, I swear!* :P And I do of course love all the other parts of your stories, not just the smutty parts. I just love them a weeeeeeee li'l bit more. Just slightly. On one side. ;) :D

Anyway, thanks! :D ♥!