Fic Update

[amberfocus]

I just sent ch. 17 of Zeppelins off to Amy to beta.    A bit of revelation, a bit of angst, an unforgiving cat, a bit of romance, a bit of teasing, a bit of touchy feely, a bit of happy, and some more revelations leading to the set up for the action of the next chapter.  And almost 4000 words.  So it'll be up sometime within the next six hours or so, well before midnight PDT.

Teaser?  Yes?  Okay:

 

“Oh, poor, Jonathon.  Guess you’ll have to stay here for a bit until that rather noticeable problem dies down a bit, won’t you?” she teases.  With a quick glance out at the store floor she angles her body to block any view of her actions and reaches out.  With a courage she can hardly believe she has she dares to stroke the bulge in his jeans and he shudders against her, pushing into her hand and whimpering.  “Tonight,” she promises.

“Minx,” he growls.  He pulls her back in for one more kiss, his tongue frantically claiming ownership of her mouth as she tries to step away, and when he releases her she is dizzy and full of as much desire as he is, her knickers soaked.  Well, she rather deserves that for being such a deliberate little tease.

 

Comments

[tardismate.livejournal.com]

Yay! *does happy dance*

Are we there yet?are we there yet? are we there yet?...*sorry, descended into child mode in my impatience* lol

Oooh,the teaser...not just Rose being a deliberate little tease, methinks *Grins and points at amberfocus*

Can't wait love :D

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Yes, but you already knew I was a deliberate little tease. *grins*

[ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com]

Ch 20 is still the Official Story-Appropriate Smut!tiem, right? :D Not that I'm, uh, keeping count or anything...

*checks Official Story-Appropriate Smut!tiem calendar and ticks off another day* ;)

*adjusts halo* ;) Looking forward to the next chapter, as always! :D ♥!

ETA: And you know, my icon choice didn't look QUITE so naughty until I actually saw it here, lol! *blush* ;)

[maniacalshen.livejournal.com]

LOL at your icon.

And amberfocus, lol, I hope they aren't in the HBC aisle, because you know someone's watching that camera. XD

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Nope, they're in a little alcove that leads to a supply closet. No cameras to see them and a strategically placed rack to hide them mostly from the view of curious eyes. *smiles* What is the HBC aisle? I'm thinking possibly hygiene and birth control?

[maniacalshen.livejournal.com]

Sort of. It's short for Health and Beauty Care, so hygiene, yes, and OTC medicines, and condoms, and all that other good stuff people like to steal and resell to buy drugs.

This is why we put a whole bunch of stuff behind the kiosk at our store (nicer razors, Prilosec, 100-ct Advil...), and we put cards in the aisle itself to represent the product. It's a pain, but what're you gonna do?

[ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com]

Hee, thanks! It's made by chambodia! ;) And I love your icon! The *angst* is what just really sells it for me, I think... ;) ♥!

[maniacalshen.livejournal.com]

Why thank you! Made it myself.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

It's appropriate to the chapter, though! *grins*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Just realized I didn't answer your question about the smut. 20 is the planned chapter for them to finally make love, but um...it's entirely possible, but don't hold me to it, things may end up in ch. 19 that I hadn't planned on. It really depends on how the action part of the story plays out. Um...so ch. 19 might have more than foreplay, I just can't tell at the moment. I'm trying to push it all the way to ch. 20 though, just on the principle of the thing. *grins* But not at the expense of the story.

[qtrhorserider.livejournal.com]

An..tis.apation..

Antisa..pay..yay..shun

is makin' me wait..

with apologies to Carly Simon, but dang it, it fit

[ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com]

Well, I personally wouldn't mind the ball getting a nice push rolling by Chapter 19, you know... ;) *never used to be such a perv, I swear!* :P And I do of course love all the other parts of your stories, not just the smutty parts. I just love them a weeeeeeee li'l bit more. Just slightly. On one side. ;) :D

Anyway, thanks! :D ♥!

[crimedoc1.livejournal.com]

Oooh... you are an EVIL TEASE!

And you know we love it, don't you? *grins madly*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Oh, yes! *grins*

[crimedoc1.livejournal.com]

*refresh*

*refresh*

*refresh*

*glares at computer*

[ehmi.livejournal.com]

Oh! Naughty Rose! Is it up yet?

*refreshes repeatedly*

GIVE IT!!!!!!

[apurplepatch.livejournal.com]

Heh... deliberate little tease...

[katydidto.livejournal.com]

Eeekkkk!!!!
but i live on the east coast....

[apurplepatch.livejournal.com]

*wanders in to see if it's midnight yet*

darn...