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A/N:  Ding. The Timey Whimey Detector has just gone off because there's STUFF. And it's about to get complicated.

Chapter Fourteen:  Two Hundred Fifty-Six Days

The Doctor paced the confines of the little room he’d been locked up in for the past week. He ran his hands through his hair in frustration trying hard to keep his temper under control. The arrogance of that man, having him locked away like this! Who’d he think he was anyway? The Doctor kicked the wall. Uppity king of France. He’d just suggested a slightly better way of doing something for only the two hundred and twelfth time and apparently two hundred and twelve was one time too many for his royalness.

Louis was always suggesting he be on his way, had pretty much suggested it from the moment he’d gotten stuck here, but where was he to go, really? He knew that in another four months his eighth incarnation would be showing up to court and he could hitch a lift back to the 51st century with him. Meanwhile he had patiently bided his time. Reinette had insisted that Louis allow his presence because he had saved her life but she was busy most of the time and even her friendship was little consolation for him.

Reinette was charming, intelligent, cultured, and beautiful. She was also one of the most scheduled, structured, scheming, gossipy, social-climbing, back-stabbing people he’d ever had the chance to know. How he’d ever been charmed by her to begin with he didn’t understand. Little glimpses into her life had given him an illusion that had easily been shattered upon his first week stuck in this century. She certainly had had no intention of taking up a life with him when it would have meant giving up her life with the crown.

Not that he’d wanted her to, not really. Not just because he's had a silly crush. He hadn’t thought beyond saving her life and having her be eternally grateful. To be truthful, he hadn’t really thought that far either. He’d grabbed Arthur, sailed through that mirror, saved the woman’s life and forever destroyed his chance of returning to the TARDIS and Mickey and…Rose.

Even as he thought the name he cursed himself. He didn’t have any right to even think her name at this point. He had promised her in one breath that he’d never leave her, never abandon her and in nearly the next breath he had done precisely that. At least she’d never know it, though. He’d get himself to drop him off within hours of his departure and Rose would never have to deal with the fact that he’d been an unthinking idiot.

And he had been. What had been going through his head that he ever thought saving history was worth losing Rose? He could easily have done both. He was a Time Lord. There had been enough room on the back of that horse for Rose, too. Although it might have been a crowded fit with Mr. Mickey, but the Doctor wouldn’t have thought too much of leaving Mickey alone with only the TARDIS for company until his future self had come round and rescued the two of them.

Hopefully, Rose would never know just how badly he’d blown it. He could convince her that he’d had a plan all along, that he’d known he could get back to her even if it meant a bit of time apart. Rose cared about him enough to forgive him anything. He was pretty sure the girl even loved him. Bad idea that. Of course, he’d been having a lot of bad ideas when it came to Rose lately and he was pretty sure he loved her, too.

“Stupid,” he muttered to herself. “You’re not pretty sure. You do.” And he should have told her. He should have told her before he’d jumped through that mirror. Then she’d know he was coming back. What if she thought he wasn’t coming back?

Perhaps he shouldn’t have rested on his laurels and waited for his eighth self. He might have been able to figure something out. It wasn’t like he hadn’t tried at first. He’d travelled to England and then on to Cardiff, hoping for the hint of the Rift that would open more fully later on, wondering if he could harness any leakage of energy. But it had been fruitless really. He might have been able to do something if he’d had more than just his sonic screwdriver and a ball of twine. But he didn’t. Nor did he have the resources he was used to.

Basically he was a kept man. Reinette gave him coin and expected nothing in return. Not making his own way in the universe, or France, chafed at his pride. Rose would have figured out a way for them to survive together, earn an income, and be self-sufficient, he was pretty sure. She was clever like that. Without her there to see the obvious for him, he was blinded to it.

He threw himself down on the bed and closed his eyes. That just conjured up the image of her that he didn’t want to see. Reproachful brown eyes hurt that he’d left her behind. Shoulders hunched over in that way she had of drawing in on herself when she felt he was neglecting her opinions. A look of distrust because he’d done something that put her in jeopardy. He teased her so often about being jeopardy friendly, but it was him that put her in it far too often.

A faint scent of ozone sizzled in the air. “So are you just going to lie there all day feeling sorry for yourself, Dad? Or are you going to get up off your sorry arse and find a way back to Mum?”

The voice was Jackie Tyler’s, but when he opened his eyes he saw his own looking back at him. She shoved a long strand of her chin length bangs out of the way. Her hair was his shade of brown as well and fell to the nape of her neck in a classic bob that he knew became popular again in the middle of the 21st century. The woman looked young, maybe twenty-five years old, but he had a feeling she was at least a good ten to twenty years older than that. She had a look of experience and competence about her that showed age far greater than her face did.

He took in her futuristic clothing. And the shape of her eyes, her nose, and her mouth, which were Rose’s. Then he realized with shock what she’d just said.

“Did you…did you just call me Dad?”

“Bit slow on the uptake, aren’t we?”

“Oi, don’t talk to me like that. If you’re my daughter, show a little respect.” The woman rolled her eyes just exactly the way Rose did when she thought he was being pompous.

“No ifs about it. Listen, Mr. Mighty Not So Last of the Time Lords, you’ve cocked things up. Big time. I don’t have the time to explain it all to you at the moment so you’re just going to have to come with me, unless you want to remain last of the Time Lords.” She held out a hand and hauled him up off the bed. “I’m Cassi, by the way.”

“Cassi?”

“Cassiopeia Andrea Tyler Harper if you want the full introduction, Dad. Not afraid of my own name, am I? Don’t put on airs and titles, do I?”

“Did I do something to make you hate me?” the Doctor said, completely flummoxed.

“Oh, I don’t know,” she began to speak rapid-fire. “Other than standing between me and Daniel when we wanted to get married, sabotaging my TARDIS the night we eloped, or abandoning my mother for two hundred days to nearly starve to death on that stupid space ship before she’s rescued by the wrong person while you popped back here to play hero and upset every future time line between here and doomsday, not to mention what happened to Uncle Mickey--.” Cassi slapped a hand over her mouth in a gesture very much like one of Rose’s. She visibly pulled herself under control. “You always could get me to talk too much.”

“I think that’s a genetic trait from your gran, not me.”

“Ha!” snorted Cassi. “Look, Dad, I love you, but we’ve never gotten on well. And I’m not that happy big brother sent me on this particular mission. But someone’s got to bail you out of this mess or none of us kids will ever be born and Mum will make the biggest mistake in her life.”

A loud popping sound filled the room and a much stronger rush of ozone ran at his nostrils. “Oh, great, and here’s trouble without a shirt. Jack bloody Harkness!” The Doctor was almost relieved that her acid tongue had turned on someone else.

He stared in shock at the young man before him. It was Jack all right, but a very young Jack. He was dressed in an electric blue uniform that made his eyes pop right out of his head. He was happy to see that Cassi seemed to be immune to the man. The last thing he wanted was a child of his reacting to Jack Harkness.

“Well, hello,” said Jack to Cassi. “I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure.”

“And you’re bloody well not going to. Don’t think for one minute I don’t know what you’ve been up to with my mother!” she snapped in annoyance. “Or my daughter!”

Jack, looking slightly confused and somewhat proud of whatever the woman was implying, turned his eyes on the Doctor instead. “I’m here to rescue you. There’s a girl in the future that you owe a very big apology to. But first,” and Jack strode forward rapidly, pulling back his fist and plowing it into the Doctor’s jaw, “You have to deal with me.”

As the Doctor lay stunned on the floor, Cassi turned to give him a speculative look. “Maybe I haven’t given you enough credit,” she muttered.

11.  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/42217.html

Date: 2008-04-22 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clarice-cat.livejournal.com
Lolz! Made of win! Poor Doctor, *shakes head* he really is a bit of an idiot sometimes. And yay for mini Jackie! I like her already.

Date: 2008-04-22 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks. For a genius he's an idiot. Cassi's fun, if abrasive, very much like a cross between Jackie and Nine, really.

Date: 2008-04-22 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pherber-m.livejournal.com
LOL - poor Ten! He's gonna take it on the chin in all sorts of ways, isn't he?

Date: 2008-04-22 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Pretty much, yeah. *grins* Nice icon, I love it.

Date: 2008-04-22 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bippy24.livejournal.com
HA! Ten needs some sense knocked into him, and it looks like Cassi is up for it. And Jack, hee! The Doctor deserved that.

Date: 2008-04-22 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
In so many ways, he really did!

Date: 2008-04-22 09:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tanzachick.livejournal.com
Yes he punched him!!! Go on Jack! I love him!!!.....ok I know I'm supposed to be backing the doctor here but that episode made me very angry at him!

Date: 2008-04-22 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yeah, it did me, too. Because it was so out of character for him. I punish him for that in this, even if...well, I won't spoil it.

Date: 2008-04-22 11:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cindergirlgrimm.livejournal.com
I am officially delurking to call you God. I'm loving this story and can't wait for the rest! Seriously, I keep checking to see if you've updated and I almost never do that!

lskdfjlskdfjsidfjlskdfjpsodf;lfk you must continue before I have a breakdown

Date: 2008-04-22 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. *smiles* I'm glad you are enjoying the story. *grins*. I'll have two more chapters up pretty soon.

Date: 2008-04-22 12:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] np-complete.livejournal.com
I have to admit I'm rooting for Jack right now. I'd rather she spent time with a devoted, idealistic young man than an impulsive f*ckup like the Doctor. (Then again, you'd think I'd be rooting for Mickey. Where's he been while Jack has been courting Rose?)

Date: 2008-04-22 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
It's hard not to. Mickey is still in the infirmary. He spent months in a coma and is going through physical therapy and he's still recovering from the tetanus and simultrux blood poisoning. They will have an important talk pretty soon when she visits him in the infirmary to talk about her feelings for Jack.

Date: 2008-04-22 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com
"Reinette was charming, intelligent, cultured, and beautiful. She was also one of the most scheduled, structured, scheming, gossipy, social-climbing, back-stabbing people he’d ever had the chance to know. How he’d ever been charmed by her to begin with he didn’t understand." --- HA! Serves him right!

And Cassi...who mentioned a brother...the Doctor didn't seen too surprised, or joyful, that he'd have children with Rose!

As far as Jack is concerned: hubba-hubba!

Date: 2008-04-22 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Really does. *grins* The Doctor is just stunned, shocked that it's even possible. As far as he knows he and Rose are not biologically compatible, so he knows of no way Dare and Cassi can exist, even though Cassi is clearly there. After all the events of A Place in Time haven't happened to him yet and he doesn't peak into his own timelines that much.

Date: 2008-04-22 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grissom500.livejournal.com
BWAHAHA! TIME TOT TO THE RESCUE... :D I love it. I knew I wouldn't hate him quite so much when I saw the Doctor's side. -_- still mad at him though.

Date: 2008-04-22 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, he's still going to have to go through some painful stuff before we get to the ending, I do punish him quite a bit.

Date: 2008-04-22 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solielle.livejournal.com
“And you’re bloody well not going to. Don’t think for one minute I don’t know what you’ve been up to with my mother!” she snapped in annoyance. “Or my daughter!”

*snorts coffee*

Ah, time travel. Poor Doctor. It looks like he'll be getting it coming and going. (Err....that's....not as naughty as it sounds? Really.)

Date: 2008-04-22 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*giggles* Pretty much, yeah. That's life when you tick off your daughter in the future and your future friend in the past, I think.

Date: 2008-04-22 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maniacalshen.livejournal.com
Hahaha, poor Doctor's been beset by all kinds of aggression. XD

Don’t think for one minute I don’t know what you’ve been up to with my mother!” she snapped in annoyance. “Or my daughter!”

Er, can you remind me of the timey-whimey details of this one? I remember it was a bit of a headache, but I can't exactly remember why. >_> A non-spoilery hint would do, to protect the other reviewers.

Date: 2008-04-22 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Do you remember the Time Storm in To Call Our Own? With the four women coming to Rose's rescue when she's pregnant with Dare and one of them being Cassi's daugher Andromeda who...? If not it's in chapters 21 and 22.

Date: 2008-04-22 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ambrosia-1.livejournal.com
Oh awesome awesome awesome *happy dance*

Date: 2008-04-22 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Glad you liked! And oh, Peter Carlisle eating ice cream, not that's just too sexy for an icon, really!

Date: 2008-04-23 01:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ambrosia-1.livejournal.com
Peter Carlisle's too sexy to be allowed to walk down the street!

Date: 2008-04-23 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yes, he is. And now I'm just giggling at your Ten/Master icon.

Date: 2008-04-23 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ambrosia-1.livejournal.com
It's from [livejournal.com profile] 45eugenia. I spent 10 minutes one day just staring it and giggling.
I you liked that, check this out:
http://gene.aikamuna.org/timecock/incubus.html

Date: 2008-04-24 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*sporfles* I think some people have far too much time on their hands!

Date: 2008-04-22 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slvrcrystalc.livejournal.com
"Cassiopeia Andrea Tyler Harper if you want the full introduction, Dad. Not afraid of my own name, am I? Don’t put on airs and titles, do I?”

Isn't that causing a tiny little paradox within an already larger paradox? She should be a bit more careful!

upset every future time line between here and doomsday,
So bad even their children call it doomsday? Shouldn't they call it Bad Wolf Bay? Or The Battle of Canary Wharf? No need for them to go inventing new names or it when there's more descriptive terms already in use.

Jack, looking slightly confused and somewhat proud of whatever the woman was implying, turned his eyes on the Doctor instead. “I’m here to rescue you. There’s a girl in the future that you owe a very big apology to. But first,” and Jack strode forward rapidly, pulling back his fist and plowing it into the Doctor’s jaw, “You have to deal with me.”

*grins* Glass jaw!

It's to bad the Doctor never made it to his previous incarnation. Then none of this would've happened. Unless, of course, the TARDIS missed. Not really unlikely, he shouldn't be relying on it so much!

Date: 2008-04-22 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Cassi's not exactly careful, she lets her emotions run away with her a lot, more so in other stories than this one, even. She's done a lot of timey whimey stuff and she lets things slip out a lot. She's using doomsday generically like kingdom come, it's just sort of a play on it for the readers, that's why it isn't capitalized. Well, by the time I'm done we'll be firmly back in canon so...

Date: 2008-04-23 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamsofoctober.livejournal.com
*jaw drops* What? What?!...*Sputters* Bah...*spills tea over herself* WHAT?

So....seriously. Did not see that one coming. It hit me like a brick. In the side of my head. "Hello brick, how are you?" "very hard and apparently your daughter thanks" WOT!? AH....very nice.

Seriously. Loving this story.
*

Date: 2008-04-23 09:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Your reaction gave me a good giggle. I'm glad it was unexpected. I'm fond of that sort of plot twist. *grins*

Date: 2008-04-24 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gate-ship.livejournal.com
OMG! Holy crap! I'm thinking this was the best chapter yet! Doctor finaly, Jack hits the Doctor, the Doctor and Rose HAVE KIDS (just when I was beginning to wonder no less), Cassi's last name is Harper (which makes me think that Owen may have kids because she said Daniel, but I could be totally off), she has a TARDIS, she has an older brother, the Doctor gets to be a grandfather, poor Mickey still gets shunted off (Boo but it had to happen), AND apparently she stole Jack's Vortex Manipulator. Or something of the sort for her to come back in time sans a TARDIS.

Date: 2008-04-25 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks! *grins* Daniel is Owen's son with Diane Holmes, the pilot from the past that flew away into the mists. He doesn't even meet his Dad until he's an older teenager, the year Cassi interns at Torchwood. I have a fully developed backstory for them. *smiles* And as for the vortex manipulator, Cassi and her older brother Dare have infiltrated the Time Agency to keep an eye on it, but it's about 40 years ahead of the time of this story, so it's her own device. And she has a TARDIS, she is just using the (much more advanced) manipulator for short hops.
Edited Date: 2008-04-25 03:00 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-04-25 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com
Jinkies! (To borrow a Scooby-ism! ;) ) Did NOT see that one coming! Hello, daughter of Doctor and Rose!

Jack, looking slightly confused and somewhat proud of whatever the woman was implying, turned his eyes on the Doctor instead.

Hee, I loved the "and somewhat proud" part! That's our Jack, lol! ;) *pets him* ;) And yay for the punch, which is pretty much the only time you'll ever hear me happy that somebody punched out the Doctor. ;) I think we can all pretty much agree that after GitF, the Doctor/Rose fandom kinda owed him one... ;) ♥!

Date: 2008-04-26 06:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, that's the fun of my fics, I do try to do the unexpected. That's definitely our Jack. Yeah, I don't much go for the Doctor getting slapped or punched, but GitF is the one where he deserves it! Definitely.

Date: 2008-05-11 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azriona.livejournal.com
Procrastination comes in many forms. For me, one form is reading fanfic. Specifically this one, which I've been putting off for...oh, a while.

I was going to save the comment to the end, but I have to comment here, because I'm going to forget this part otherwise:

here’s trouble without a shirt. Jack bloody Harkness!

Cassi turned to give [Jack] a speculative look. “Maybe I haven’t given you enough credit,” she muttered.

LOL. I like Cassi already. She reminds me a little of Donna.

Reading on, now....

Date: 2008-05-11 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yeah, there are some similarities, though Cassi's more abrasive and unyielding at times. She's got her reasons, though.

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