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Title:  Just Another Shop Girl (10/18)
Author:  amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose, Jack Harkness, Tessa Morgan
Genre:  action/adventure, tease/flirt, bit of romance
Rating:  PG-13 (Teen)
Beta:  Amyo67
Summary:  After acquiring an accidental passenger while escaping from an alien attack, the Doctor, Rose and Jack find themselves on the planet Tir in the middle of its population's uplifting to full sentience as they come fully into their pyschic gifts.  But there is evil in the mix as a man named Harrington Conrad tries to use the creatures' unique abilities for his own ends.  It's up to our trio plus one to stop him.
A/N:  If you have read this before on Teaspoon, this is an extensive rewrite adding anywhere from 500 to 1000 words per chapter.
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Chapter Ten: Decisions

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amberfocus: (Nine Rose Together Invincible)
Title:  Just Another Shop Girl (10/18)
Author:  amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose, Jack Harkness, Tessa Morgan
Genre:  action/adventure, tease/flirt, bit of romance
Rating:  PG-13 (Teen)
Beta:  Amyo67
Summary:  After acquiring an accidental passenger while escaping from an alien attack, the Doctor, Rose and Jack find themselves on the planet Tir in the middle of its population's uplifting to full sentience as they come fully into their pyschic gifts.  But there is evil in the mix as a man named Harrington Conrad tries to use the creatures' unique abilities for his own ends.  It's up to our trio plus one to stop him.
A/N:  If you have read this before on Teaspoon, this is an extensive rewrite adding anywhere from 500 to 1000 words per chapter.
Previous Chapters )

Chapter Ten: Decisions

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Title:  Just Another Shop Girl (9/18)
Author:  amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose, Jack Harkness, Tessa Morgan
Genre:  action/adventure, tease/flirt, bit of romance
Rating:  PG-13 (Teen)
Summary:  After acquiring an accidental passenger while escaping from an alien attack, the Doctor, Rose and Jack find themselves on the planet Tir in the middle of its population's uplifting to full sentience as they come fully into their pyschic gifts.  But there is evil in the mix as a man named Harrington Conrad tries to use the creatures' unique abilities for his own ends.  It's up to our trio plus one to stop him.
A/N:  If you have read this before on Teaspoon, this is an extensive rewrite adding anywhere from 500 to 1000 words per chapter.

 

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Chapter Nine: Choices

 

“You have got to be out of your mind!” Tessa’s eyes were flashing with anger and her hands were firmly on her hips, staring down the Doctor with an expression on her face that almost matched his at his most stubborn. She was not reacting well to the Doctor’s plan and Rose wasn’t entirely sure the girl wasn’t right. It wasn’t that the plan was bad in the sense that it would fail. She was pretty sure it would work just as the Doctor intended. But…well, the part that involved the Tirawls was making Rose uneasy and since Tessa had developed such a huge attachment to the gentle creatures, she would not be fast to accept that it might be the only way.

 

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Title:  Just Another Shop Girl (9/18)
Author:  amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose, Jack Harkness, Tessa Morgan
Genre:  action/adventure, tease/flirt, bit of romance
Rating:  PG-13 (Teen)
Summary:  After acquiring an accidental passenger while escaping from an alien attack, the Doctor, Rose and Jack find themselves on the planet Tir in the middle of its population's uplifting to full sentience as they come fully into their pyschic gifts.  But there is evil in the mix as a man named Harrington Conrad tries to use the creatures' unique abilities for his own ends.  It's up to our trio plus one to stop him.
A/N:  If you have read this before on Teaspoon, this is an extensive rewrite adding anywhere from 500 to 1000 words per chapter.

 

Previous Chapters )

 

Chapter Nine: Choices

 

“You have got to be out of your mind!” Tessa’s eyes were flashing with anger and her hands were firmly on her hips, staring down the Doctor with an expression on her face that almost matched his at his most stubborn. She was not reacting well to the Doctor’s plan and Rose wasn’t entirely sure the girl wasn’t right. It wasn’t that the plan was bad in the sense that it would fail. She was pretty sure it would work just as the Doctor intended. But…well, the part that involved the Tirawls was making Rose uneasy and since Tessa had developed such a huge attachment to the gentle creatures, she would not be fast to accept that it might be the only way.

 

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                                        Chapter Eight: Base Camp

As the Doctor and Jack dossed down for the night in one of the survivors’ spare tents, Jack was quiet, utterly lost in thought. The Doctor brought him back to reality rather abruptly with a terse, “Do you really think you should have told them so freely that you’re a time agent?”

Jack shrugged, unconcerned. “Does it matter?”

“Might do. Seems to me you’re showing off a bit.”

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                                        Chapter Eight: Base Camp

As the Doctor and Jack dossed down for the night in one of the survivors’ spare tents, Jack was quiet, utterly lost in thought. The Doctor brought him back to reality rather abruptly with a terse, “Do you really think you should have told them so freely that you’re a time agent?”

Jack shrugged, unconcerned. “Does it matter?”

“Might do. Seems to me you’re showing off a bit.”

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                                              Chapter Seven: Horror Story

 

“It was simple enough when it began,” Vincent told them that night while they gathered around the solar heater that was now reflecting back all of the warmth that it had gathered from its long day under Rukbat’s strong rays. “We’re scientists. Well, most of us are, anyway.”

 

He looked down at his feet then back up at the Doctor. “We were hired by a very rich and very powerful man named Harrington Conrad. He wanted us to crack the intricacies of a device that was…well, I know this is hard to swallow but it was extra terrestrial in origin.” He paused again as if waiting for someone else to speak. It was obvious that the role of leadership that had fallen on him was not one he was comfortable with.

 

 

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                                              Chapter Seven: Horror Story

 

“It was simple enough when it began,” Vincent told them that night while they gathered around the solar heater that was now reflecting back all of the warmth that it had gathered from its long day under Rukbat’s strong rays. “We’re scientists. Well, most of us are, anyway.”

 

He looked down at his feet then back up at the Doctor. “We were hired by a very rich and very powerful man named Harrington Conrad. He wanted us to crack the intricacies of a device that was…well, I know this is hard to swallow but it was extra terrestrial in origin.” He paused again as if waiting for someone else to speak. It was obvious that the role of leadership that had fallen on him was not one he was comfortable with.

 

 

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                                    Chapter Six: Bullet Wound

“Quickly, you’ve got to come with us!” The urgency in the man’s voice, if he could be called a man, to Rose’s eye he didn’t look much older than her really, was very strong.

“And why would we want to do that?” the Doctor asked, no emotion other than curiosity audible in his voice but Rose could tell he was already thinking, assessing the situation, looking for possible escape routes and thinking up and discarding possible fabrications to explain their presence before he lit on one he might find believable.

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                                    Chapter Six: Bullet Wound

“Quickly, you’ve got to come with us!” The urgency in the man’s voice, if he could be called a man, to Rose’s eye he didn’t look much older than her really, was very strong.

“And why would we want to do that?” the Doctor asked, no emotion other than curiosity audible in his voice but Rose could tell he was already thinking, assessing the situation, looking for possible escape routes and thinking up and discarding possible fabrications to explain their presence before he lit on one he might find believable.

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                                                     Chapter Five:  Tirawls

“Interesting creatures, the Tirawls,” Jack said dropping into the tone of voice Rose recognized as his story-telling mode. “In my century they are extremely intelligent beings. They’re telepathic and telekinetic, but most of all empathic. Abilities like these are a very useful adaptation for creatures that don’t have fingers or toes on their limbs or even suckers to help them pick things up. It’s what helped them develop a written culture even though they don’t speak. Although most traditions are passed on through dreamsong.”

 


 

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                                                     Chapter Five:  Tirawls

“Interesting creatures, the Tirawls,” Jack said dropping into the tone of voice Rose recognized as his story-telling mode. “In my century they are extremely intelligent beings. They’re telepathic and telekinetic, but most of all empathic. Abilities like these are a very useful adaptation for creatures that don’t have fingers or toes on their limbs or even suckers to help them pick things up. It’s what helped them develop a written culture even though they don’t speak. Although most traditions are passed on through dreamsong.”

 


 

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                                  Chapter Four:  Safari

“Wait, Tessa,” Rose said. “You don’t want to go out there in sandals. What size are your feet? I’ll get you some trainers from the wardrobe room.”

 

“I don’t know.  I just get whatever’s in the thrift stores that fits. Can’t remember if I’ve ever had shoes where the size marking hadn’t been rubbed off first,” she said. Rose made a moue of sympathy. She well remembered a few years like that when things were tough for her and her mum.

 


 

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                                  Chapter Four:  Safari

“Wait, Tessa,” Rose said. “You don’t want to go out there in sandals. What size are your feet? I’ll get you some trainers from the wardrobe room.”

 

“I don’t know.  I just get whatever’s in the thrift stores that fits. Can’t remember if I’ve ever had shoes where the size marking hadn’t been rubbed off first,” she said. Rose made a moue of sympathy. She well remembered a few years like that when things were tough for her and her mum.

 


 

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                             Chapter Three:  Halfway Across the Universe

“I don’t really think we need to take her to the hospital,” the Doctor said looking the girl over and shining the sonic screwdriver’s light into her eyes to see if her pupils dilated. “Her pupils are reactive. I think she just fainted from the fright. It’s not every girl who can take weird creatures bursting into her workplace and tearing the place apart,” he said smiling fondly at Rose.

 

 

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                             Chapter Three:  Halfway Across the Universe

“I don’t really think we need to take her to the hospital,” the Doctor said looking the girl over and shining the sonic screwdriver’s light into her eyes to see if her pupils dilated. “Her pupils are reactive. I think she just fainted from the fright. It’s not every girl who can take weird creatures bursting into her workplace and tearing the place apart,” he said smiling fondly at Rose.

 

 

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                                   Chapter Two:  Monsters and a Shop Girl

“What was that thing?” Rose demanded the minute they were safely within the confines of the TARDIS. She rested against the locked door, panting hard. A moment later she jumped forward in fright as the monster banged into the doors of the TARDIS actually making it shake. She turned around and stared at the door hoping desperately that it would hold under the violent attack.

 

 

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                                   Chapter Two:  Monsters and a Shop Girl

“What was that thing?” Rose demanded the minute they were safely within the confines of the TARDIS. She rested against the locked door, panting hard. A moment later she jumped forward in fright as the monster banged into the doors of the TARDIS actually making it shake. She turned around and stared at the door hoping desperately that it would hold under the violent attack.

 

 

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A/N:  This is a rewrite of my first Nine/Rose story and Jack is in it, too.  It takes place right after Boom Town.  There is no smut because it was meant to occur in canon and I didn't know I could write smut back then, but there is a lot of flirting and teasing and hints of romance.  Events in this story are referred to in my Time Eternal Series and in Jack's Path (but you need no knowledge of those stories) and it is where we first meet the Tirawls.  Even if you have read the story before, I am adding about 500 to 1000 words per chapter to flesh it out and change things I didn't feel were quite right from before I really learned how to write Nine.  Sorry, no banners for this one.  I don't even have any pictures of Rose, Jack and Nine together and certainly no Tirawls or Tessa (who sorta looks like Anna Pacquin from True Blood).

Chapter One: Never Boring

 

“I honestly don’t know, Rose,” the Doctor sighed. “All these shops look the same to me.”

 

“I thought that was my line.” Rose Tyler shook her head in frustration and not a little irritation. “Least it’s not corridors or tunnels,” she muttered. “Are you sure you left it in Canonbury?” she asked hands on her hips and a challenging look in her eyes.

 


 

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amberfocus: (Nine Rose Together Invincible)
A/N:  This is a rewrite of my first Nine/Rose story and Jack is in it, too.  It takes place right after Boom Town.  There is no smut because it was meant to occur in canon and I didn't know I could write smut back then, but there is a lot of flirting and teasing and hints of romance.  Events in this story are referred to in my Time Eternal Series and in Jack's Path (but you need no knowledge of those stories) and it is where we first meet the Tirawls.  Even if you have read the story before, I am adding about 500 to 1000 words per chapter to flesh it out and change things I didn't feel were quite right from before I really learned how to write Nine.  Sorry, no banners for this one.  I don't even have any pictures of Rose, Jack and Nine together and certainly no Tirawls or Tessa (who sorta looks like Anna Pacquin from True Blood).

Chapter One: Never Boring

 

“I honestly don’t know, Rose,” the Doctor sighed. “All these shops look the same to me.”

 

“I thought that was my line.” Rose Tyler shook her head in frustration and not a little irritation. “Least it’s not corridors or tunnels,” she muttered. “Are you sure you left it in Canonbury?” she asked hands on her hips and a challenging look in her eyes.

 


 

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