Fic Update

Nov. 27th, 2008 09:19 pm
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I've finished chapter 3 of Doubt and shipped it off to Amy for beta.  She's in Vegas, though so it might be a while.  She says she can still beta but she might be having too much fun.  Hope you're having fun, Amy!  Anyway, Rose's anger builds up and she gives the Doctor a piece of her mind.  She really lets him have it.  And no, guys, I'm not having her get an abortion.  I said that yesterday to anyone who was listening. *sighs*  And the truth will finally come out in this chapter.  It's even a good 1300 words or so longer than the last one.

Sneaky peaky?  Y/Y?:


 

Comprehension dawns on her and then something else that she doesn’t recognize at first because it is pure fury and she’s never felt it before in her life. She’s seen it though, coming from him. They call him the Oncoming Storm when he’s like that. This is different. The wolf rises within her. She locks her gaze on his. “No,” she bites out. “I told you a long time ago. Mickey and I are over. How could you think that?”

 

“I heard you, on the phone, what you said to him. He was urging you to tell me something. You said it wouldn’t change anything between you and him when you told me so why was he so anxious for you to tell me?”

 

“You were eavesdropping?” she grinds out.

 

“Yes.” He doesn’t even bother trying to deny it.

 

 

“And from what I said, you got that I had an affair with Mickey? That I betrayed you?” Her rage is barely veiled now. It pulses through her bloodstream like liquid fire. 


 

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Date: 2008-11-28 05:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com
Yea! You go, Rose!!

*Hugs*

Date: 2008-11-28 05:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com
Okay this would be a good time to duck and cover doc!

Date: 2008-11-28 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelfireeast.livejournal.com
You're making me more and more and more and more and more and more excited!!!! I can't wait for the next update (thought I'd say that just in case you couldn't tell:p)

Date: 2008-11-28 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] corusca.livejournal.com
The offer to pinch-hit beta remains if Amy is busy. And I say that only in the spirit of giving, not remotely in the spirit of impatience.

*halo*

Date: 2008-11-28 06:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soniced-up.livejournal.com
YAY! I'm almost (but not quite)feeling sorry for the poor bastard. But he deserves it all.

*gets out the pom poms*

GO ROSE! GO!!!

Date: 2008-11-28 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tardisblue.livejournal.com
GO ROSE!!! YEAH!!!!

*cheers*

Date: 2008-11-28 06:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pncwho.livejournal.com
Oh, wow, I hope Rose gives him the verbal lashing he so richly deserves. Send the Oncoming Storm slinking away with his tail between his legs.

I wonder if she's going to punch him in the nose for good measure? I know I'd be tempted to!

BTW, I love your writing. I don't mean to rush you or sound impatient, I'm just eager for the next installment. :)

Date: 2008-11-28 06:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salimali.livejournal.com
Oh quick Amy, I have to go to work in an hour!!! I'll be on tenderhooks if I have to wait.

I bet that's the last paragraph isn't it ;o)

Date: 2008-11-28 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctor10-crazt.livejournal.com
AMY!!!!! BETA FAST!!! PLEASE!!!! *gets down on hands and knees and begs*

I just watched "Journey's End," and I could use a cheering up!

PLEASE!!!!

Date: 2008-11-28 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com
These kids need to work a few things out before they start with the boinking again. Really, really need to work things out. If he could think she's having an affair and she could think he'd be so repulsed by the idea of them having a child that he'd order her to get an abortion--I'm honestly not sure which of them should be more offended at this point. But they need to spend some time getting to know each other again before they re-start their physical relationship. Fr srs.

Date: 2008-11-28 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ehmi.livejournal.com
Aww, crap, and here I was wanting to go to bed!

I still need to, though. *cries* At least I have something to look forward to tomorrow after work. :)

Date: 2008-11-28 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ehmi.livejournal.com
Haha! What are you new here? EVERYONE rushes her! XD But she's a good sport about it, aren't you, amberfocus? She even appeases us once in a while, for which we give her lots and lots of cookies (and more recently, smut)! :D *huggles and cookies*

Date: 2008-11-28 08:00 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ladychi.livejournal.com
Yeah, Doctor, you're toast.

I'd get padding for those knees. You're going to be on them for a while...

Date: 2008-11-28 10:02 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-11-28 10:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
As has been pointed out to me, he does have a glass jaw.

Date: 2008-11-28 10:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
It should be up tomorrow some time between 10 and 11 a.m. Pacific time.

Date: 2008-11-28 10:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Okay. Thanks. She was available this time. Had internet in her hotel room and wanted to know what happens next.

Date: 2008-11-28 10:04 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-11-28 10:04 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-11-28 10:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Bad Wolf may howl a bit on this one. Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it. And everyone does it, don't worry about it. *grins* I just happen to have some time this holiday weekend to give in to the requests is all.

Date: 2008-11-28 10:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*laughs* Yep, usually I am and sometimes I do.

Date: 2008-11-28 10:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Sorry, it won't be up until between 10 a.m. and 11 a.m. Pacific time. And no it's not the last paragraph. I think it starts around word 1200 out of 3562.

Date: 2008-11-28 10:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Sorry, it won't be back to me until morning and then I will need to do the final proofing. I'll post it in about 8 to 9 hours.

Date: 2008-11-28 10:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Oh, go to sleep definitely.

Date: 2008-11-28 10:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Why did my mind go to a totally dirty place with that comment?
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