Happy Birthday Othermewriter--Smutty Double Drabble for You

[amberfocus]

Title:  Taking Turns
Author:  amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose
Genre:  Smut, Romance
Rating:  Adult, R
Beta:  JeopardyFriendly
Summary:  The Doctor and Rose take turns.


                                                                            Taking Turns

Rich gold silk swathes her body, clinging to every curve and revealing much more than it seeks to hide, or so he thinks until it flutters from her torso and pools to the ground at her feet. She tilts her head slowly to one side, her eyes dark and open as he sweeps the length of her with a gaze that no longer holds back his longing. His eyes linger on the rise and fall of her breasts, drift down to the swelling of her hips, center on the apex of her thighs. She looks at him. “Now you, Doctor.”

His clothes follow slowly, piece by piece, leather and wool and denim making heavy thuds against the floor. Her eyes appraise him with open admiration as each new bit of flesh is revealed to her. Finally the last barrier, thin, black cotton, is lowered and he cannot hold back the smile of masculine pride at her gasp when he stands free before her. His fingers find her ready before he’s even had the chance to touch her. He lifts her up, backs her against the wall and positions her gently, firmly. “Now you, Rose,” he whispers back. He slides home.
 

Comments

[lillibetm3.livejournal.com]

Okay, I don't often say this, but.. 'Guh'.

That was just too hot for something so short! I don't know how you do it. ;)

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Well, a "Guh" from you is worth a thousand words. *smiles* I'm glad you liked it. I had this really evocative image in my head of dark gold silk sliding to the floor and then the sounds of heavy clothes thumping in slow succession playing like a sound file in my brain. This was the result when transferred to the computer screen.

[lillibetm3.livejournal.com]

Ah yes, now this is in my opinion one of the hottest lines:
His clothes follow slowly, piece by piece, leather and wool and denim making heavy thuds against the floor.
*loves* :)

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*grins* Because you can hear it as it happens and kind of see it, too, sense the dimly lit room with just enough light bathing him to make it heartstoppingly erotic. Oh, yes, welcome to my mind...

[wildwinterwitch.livejournal.com]

Very erotic.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you. *smiles*

[soniced-up.livejournal.com]

Hot!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thanks. *grins*

[salimali.livejournal.com]

Woah! Hot!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[dragonmom64.livejournal.com]

It's hot in here!

Really though, how do you do it? Nothing's really happened yet...just stripping....and it's so damn hot!

*wanders off outside to get cool*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*giggles* I think it's a bit of taking you on a journey of sight and sound and of mind. Oh, that came over a bit Twilight Zone there. Would you believe it only took five mintues to write? It just came out this way.

[amyo67.livejournal.com]

FANTASTIC!!!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you. *smiles*

[amyo67.livejournal.com]

By the way, if you go to Teaspoon right now, you are on the top of the page. WooHoo

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

And I still actually am. Wow. That usually only happens when I complain. *grins* Maybe I should complain more often? *laughs* Nah.

[corusca.livejournal.com]

Why is it that SO MANY of your stories make me use this icon?

Incredibly hot.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Because they're saucy? *laughs* Because I be smut writer? *grins* Thank you.

[honorh.livejournal.com]

Nine/Rose smutlets from both you and Lilli this morning? I must be a good girl!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Oh, Lilli did one. Must find now. *runs off to read*

oh yeah

[othermewriter.livejournal.com]

She did?

*Runs off to read that yum too.*
thanks!

[doctor10-crazt.livejournal.com]

I-- I-- *utterly speechless*

Wow.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*grins* Thank you.

[ehmi.livejournal.com]

Woohoo! Nine! (and Rose, too) *loves SO much*

Thank you my dear, you do know what I like. ;D

[ehmi.livejournal.com]

By the way, I really love the summary. I looked back at it after I read the fic and laughed out loud. Thought you should know.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Sometimes I can't help myself. Summaries can be so annoying, especially with drabbles.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*grins* It's what we all like around here!

[tardismate.livejournal.com]

Em....yeah....*wibble*

Is it hot in here or is it just me *fans self furiously*

Dear God, how can you do that with so few words...*runs off to wake handy fiance...* *smirks*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Oh, it's definitely hot in here. *smiles* I love writing drabbles. It's narrowing everything down to one sharp, effective focus and putting the full force of imagination behind it. It's like minimalist art in a way, evoking the fullness of emotion with the minutest of brushstrokes.

[tardisblue.livejournal.com]

Wow.

I absolutely love your opening line, the description is beautiful.

And again. Wow.

*nods*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you. The image from the first line and the sound effects of his clothes thudding to the floor are what this sprang from.

Guhhh gurgle

[othermewriter.livejournal.com]

Oh now that is just too lovely! Thank you thank you thank you!! Best present I have received today!

Re: Guhhh gurgle

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

You are so welcome. I do try to write them for all of the writer's on my f-list, espcially the smut writers, and for all of the reviewers who have been with me since my earliest days at Teaspoon or the ones that have shown me tremendous and consistent support since coming to LJ. At least if I get the birthday alerts.

[maniacalshen.livejournal.com]

Nice!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

[wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com]

*Am proud of you*

You've evolved SOOOOOO much as a writer of fine smut!!

*Hugs*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*grins* Thank you.

[angel932.livejournal.com]

oh, baby! *fans self*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*giggles*

[rowofstars.livejournal.com]

*thud*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*smiles* Thanks.

[yenly-gozal.livejournal.com]

Love it!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you.