amberfocus | Fic Update

I sent ch. 24 of Zeppelins off to Amy to beta. And now I'm off to bed. Hopefully I'll have it back and can post it in the morning before we take the kids to see High School Musical 3. Otherwise, late afternoon, early evening Pacific time.

Sneaky peak:

Jonathon bites his lip and looks back at Rose. He should have brought her in when she first started thinking there was something wrong with her, first started being suspicious that it was the cloud that had done this. But he had been so caught up in making love with her that he’d pushed it aside. He could have killed her in his carelessness. His Rose, his beautiful loving Rose could be dead right now and all because he couldn’t keep his libido in check.

“It’s my fault,” he whispers.

“Oh, no you don’t!” Donna says sharply. His head snaps up and he turns to glare at his friend. “Don’t you dare even think about blaming yourself for this, Jonathon!” Donna tells him. “There is no way you could know, and considering the plans the two of you had, of course you’d not think it was more than exhaustion until it got serious. Rose was up ridiculously early yesterday on top of everything else. You’d not be able to tell. Don’t you dare blame yourself for this!”