Psst...

Oct. 15th, 2008 08:43 pm
amberfocus: (A Sky Without Zeppelins 2)
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I just sent ch. 21 of Zeppelins off to Amy to beta.

Sneaky peak?  Yes?  Yes?

He swallows hard and his eyes are naked emotion when he looks at her. “No,” he says honestly. “Not even with her. I loved Elisabeth, but…it wasn’t like this. It wasn’t…Rose, it’s so much more with you. So much more that it scares me to death, because I’ve already…I’ve already lost so much and now there’s you and you already fill every gap in my life I didn’t know I had before I met you, it’s consuming and, and…and I shouldn’t be telling you this, not so soon.”

“But you should,” she says and he can see her heart in her eyes. “Jonathon, I love you. And it scares me to death, too, because I’ve never felt so out of control in my thoughts and deeds and emotions. I’ve always thrived on control and now…when I’m with you, I don’t want control. I want to surrender it all to you and just…just…be yours.” She gulps. “It should be too much, it’s overpowering, but I don’t want it to stop. I don’t ever want it to stop because I…because I--.” She can’t even think how to finish her sentence so instead she pushes herself snuggly into his body and kisses him with desperate passion.

Date: 2008-10-16 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apurplepatch.livejournal.com
OMG... now I'm not going to be able to concentrate the rest of the day.

*smacks self on hand*

Bad naughty APP sneaking on to the internets from work.

Date: 2008-10-16 05:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*laughs* Sorry, but at least you have it to look forward to.

Date: 2008-10-16 05:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hermya.livejournal.com
Coooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllll!!! Shame I'm work bound!

Date: 2008-10-16 05:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, it'll be waiting for you when you get home.

Date: 2008-10-16 05:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com
Oh, my. Just ... *GUH*

So, when do you think Amy will finish so you can post??

*Hits refresh. Hits refresh. Hits refresh*

Date: 2008-10-16 05:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
We're discussing it on YM right now.

Date: 2008-10-16 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com
Waiting VERY patiently, willing to stay up to a godforsaken hour just to read next chapter of beloved Zeppelins.

*Hits refresh. Hits refresh. Hits refresh"

Date: 2008-10-16 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
I'm doing the final proofread right now.

Date: 2008-10-16 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com
WHOO HOO!!!!

*Sits and stares at computer ....*

Date: 2008-10-16 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
It's up, it's up, it's up! Go, read, now. *laughs8

Date: 2008-10-16 06:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bellydancerakn.livejournal.com
Is it twisted that I'm happy I don't have a job so I can stay up as long as I want waiting for a fic update?


*Wanders to kitchen for tea and leftovers to tide herself over till ficcy comes in*

Gawd I have no life...except DW...actually thats a fine life nevermind

Date: 2008-10-16 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com
Even with a job, I'm planning on staying up late to wait for the next chapter! Rather read than sleep!!

Date: 2008-10-16 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bellydancerakn.livejournal.com
Almost wish I was a timelord or something so I didn't need to sleep just stay up a read all the time. Oh well Time to sleep when I'm six feet under.

Date: 2008-10-16 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Dunno about twisted, but it's certainly very flattering that you want to.

Date: 2008-10-16 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bellydancerakn.livejournal.com
A sure sign that I'd gotten a new book was when I was late for class because I slept in so late cause I stayed up all night reading.


Yeah I need a BF. Ironically there is a guy I know who looks I swear to god like David Tennant...He could be his brother or something it's freaky but in a fabulous hot day dream in the middle of math kinda way. He even if hyperactive and smart like the doctor.

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