Psst...

Oct. 5th, 2008 05:21 pm
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Guess who just sent the 2nd draft of Zeppelins ch. 19 off to Amy to be beta'd.? And it's over 4000 words. 

Teaser?  Yes?  Yes?  Okay:


She meets his gaze, but doesn’t say anything else and hesitantly he reaches out for the bottom button, waiting for her to stop him.  She doesn’t.  He undoes the first button, his fingers slowly working their way up her abdomen, fingertips grazing the smooth pink skin of her stomach.  He stops just beneath her breasts and raises his eyes to hers.  Her beautiful brown eyes are enormous and infinitely trusting and she gives him the tiniest nod and a brief little smile that quickly fades away as she closes her eyes and breathes deeply and he can’t help but admire the rise and fall of her chest.

Date: 2008-10-06 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
They will not make love until chapter 20, and then boy, howdy, they will make sweet luuuuuuurve. However, that being said, there are 1269 words following the teaser. I don't think I'm evil here at all, but I am very firm about the no doing it until chapter 20. When you read ch. 19 I think that you will see why it plays out the way it does. And no, there is no meanness in this fic. A bit of peril, yes, but it is my happy/happy fic. Jonathon and Rose will beat all the odds that the Doctor and the other Rose never seemed to be able to beat. Because I say so! *laughs*

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