Happy Birthday Drabble for mkejenkins

[amberfocus]

Happy Birthday to mkejenkins!

Title: Only Him
Author: amberfocus
Pairing: Nine/Rose
Genre: Romance , Drabble
Rating: PG
Disclaimer:  You know it's not.
Summary:  This is what she wants.  Him.  Only him.


 

His eyes darken as he turns to her and her breath stutters to a halt. She’s never seen such longing from a man before, such open, honest need. Her fingers reach up, graze his lips and they part, drawing in exploring fingers. “We can’t,” he says, voice just above a whisper. She shakes her head, denial clear in her stance, her expression, her eyes. He catches her hand, draws it away, holds her at arms length. She stares at him harder, lets him truly see her, see what she wants. Him, only him. Always. Forever. “Yes,” she says. “We can.”
 

Comments

[maniacalshen.livejournal.com]

Lovely and heated. Impressively so, for a drabble that isn't straight smut. :D

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Straight smut was a bit illusive. I tried but it wanted to come out tender instead and who was I to argue with my muse?

[salimali.livejournal.com]

Hot ans sensual x

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

[solarflar3.livejournal.com]

Hmmm lovely!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[mkejenkins.livejournal.com]

Awwww.....A drabble all for me??????

And a HOT one too!!!!!!

You are the best!!!!!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Yep. Happy Birthday. Thanks.

[wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com]

This is SO Nine/Rose. You convey so much emotion in so few words; just ... lovely!

*Hugs*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I love the challenge of doing it all in 100 words. Every word has to be weighted, has to count for something.

[np-complete.livejournal.com]

Yes; his need for her was always so obvious, even before she could see it. A lovely little drabble of the moment things change.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Definitely. He needed her. Which is what always bugs me when people talk about how needy Rose was. *sighs* Thank you.

[prchung.livejournal.com]

Short and angsty, very nice.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*grins* Thanks.

[dragonmom64.livejournal.com]

Oooh...I can feel the heat from here!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*grins* Thanks.

[nina-ds.livejournal.com]

Lovely! I think the summary is just about as hot as the drabble. (And I'm trying not to hear the political slogan at the end there, but it just made me smile anyway!)

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it. What campaign slogan? *is confused* I don't watch American television really, or if I do I download, so I guess I'm out of the loop on whatever they are saying on commercials as far as slogans go. Don't like either of the choices and am hiding my head in the sand for another couple of weeks before I have to figure things out.

[nina-ds.livejournal.com]

Obama's call-and-response line is "Yes, we can." But then, I am a political junkie (I even have a pundit icon; yes, I do - even if he's South Parkified).

[nina-ds.livejournal.com]

...and I'm not entirely sure why that ended up as a new post rather than a reply!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Probably an LJ glitch again.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Ah. Well, totally unintended.