Fic Update

Jan. 22nd, 2009 05:50 am
amberfocus: (A Sky Without Zeppelins 2)
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I just sent ch. 33 of A Sky Without Zeppelins to Amy to beta.  It's a long one, too, 4300 some odd words.  And smutty towards the end.  Making love in a limousine on the way to Paris smutty. Not balcony smutty.  Not yet.  *smiles*

Sneak peek:

When he releases her she rocks into him, beginning a slow, swaying rhythm that builds slowly. She wants this to last, doesn’t want him to come too quickly, so she fights against the desire to simply ride him hard and fast. He murmurs her name over and over, his hands resting on her hips, his eyes closed. When she can stand it no longer she raises herself and begins a steady rise and fall, interrupting her rhythm occasionally with a figure eight motion when the urge to race to the finish becomes too strong.

He holds back, trying hard not to thrust up into her, allowing her to maintain control, to make love to him at her own speed, for as long as possible. “Rose,” he whimpers. “Need…need to come…please…Rose.” His fingers slip between their bodies and he strokes at her clit, his fingers becoming rapid and frantic and she twinges at the new sensation, the slow build suddenly interrupted by a roaring into life of a violent need to orgasm.

 

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