Zeppelins So Far...

[amberfocus]

...2002 words worth of pretty much solid making out.  Erm...quite a bit like foreplay really...and I still have to write 1000 more, at the very least.  1500 if I can manage it.  Can Rose hold out?  Can I?  Guh.  Did someone turn up the heat in here?

 

Rose parts her lips and meets his tongue with her own gentle, dancing strokes.  She can feel her heart picking up its beat, the syncopation becoming more and more wild as the kiss deepens, as passion flares to the surface and pulses between them.  His knee pushes against her and inveigles itself between her thighs as he leans into her and there is no longer any space between her body and his.

The kiss breaks and her eyes fly open to meet his heavy gaze again.  She takes a breath and he is capturing her mouth once more, his tongue insistent in its need to discover every secret she has not yet revealed to him in his heady explorations.  His hand leaves her hair and trails down her arm and over onto her waist where he rests it lightly, his thumb just barely in contact against her stomach.
 

Comments

[taliah-rose.livejournal.com]

stop torturing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chapter 14 would be a lovely birthday suprise for me!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Oh, is it your birthday. *grins* Well, maybe...when I finish...I could always post it early without a beta...maybe. *grins* Happy Birthday. Oh, and I just added a teaser to the post. Don't know if you saw it or not.

[taliah-rose.livejournal.com]

Oh I've seen it, the heat has blinded me, temporarily. It also melted my brain.

[amyo67.livejournal.com]

But, I am the beta, and next Mon is my bday. *Puppy eyes* Just kidding. Happy birthday to you, taliah_rose. have a great one.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

I might just be able to eek out a smutty drabble.

[hezmanagirl.livejournal.com]

I'm sure you heard the explosion so I don't have to tell you my brain seems to have trickled out my ear.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Oh, poor you. *hands over shovel for brain scooping duties*

[ehmi.livejournal.com]

Didn't you say that Rose started her monthly? So...no actual sex yet. :( Ah, well. We'll take what we can get. XD

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Exactly.

[crimedoc1.livejournal.com]

Guh.

Thud.

And this is just the TEASER?? I shudder (with anticipation) to think what the entire chapter will be like. ;-)

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Yep.

[mkejenkins.livejournal.com]

.......oh dear......

I think I just broke my husband. And this is only the teaser?????

My bday is next week.....Can I have a hot chappie too?????*gives huge puppy dog eyes*

Pretty please????? With sugar and tea?????

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Oh, poor husband. Hmm...I dunno...I may be writing some smutty drabbles...

[wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com]

*Gurgle*

I, too, *recently* had a birthday ... and sure would like to read that chapter early!! *Also does puppy eyes routine*

*Hugs*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*snorts* Retroactive birthday smut? *sighs*

[lady-dree.livejournal.com]

I fear for the next man that I date. I'm going to have such high expectations, and they are completely un-meet-able. because of your JONATHON! You've ruined me for real men, you know. Now i'm going to end up a crazy cat lady. *ignores the fact that she's half way there*

You rock. Simple as that.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Well, Jonathon is partially based on how my husband was when we first started dating so men like him do exist...