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[amberfocus]

I really, really, really don't like chapter eleven of Zeppelins. I think I may have to toss it out and start from scratch. *grumble grumble* 2000 words of crap. *sighs*

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[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I'm glad I was able to get past what was bothering me and turn it around, because it's a much, much better chapter now and the pacing is on track instead of being rushed, which it would have been if I went the other way. It just turned out so well, and I'm really happy with it now.