I really, really, really don't like chapter eleven of Zeppelins. I think I may have to toss it out and start from scratch. *grumble grumble* 2000 words of crap. *sighs*
Well, I've obviously not read the chapter in question, but I honestly do not think you are CAPABLE of writing 2000 words of crap. Seriously. Sleep on it and then re-read it in the morning, see if you dislike it as much after taking a break from it.
Okay, the first 1200 words were actually quite good and salvagable. *smirks* The others were just rushing the plot and I pulled them aside for later. Thank for the kind words.
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Date: 2008-09-02 10:46 pm (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2008-09-05 02:32 am (UTC)