Inflame (2/2)
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Chapter Two: Burn
Rose cuddles into the Doctor’s naked body, her fingers drawing patterns on his chest and then dipping lower to create them on his belly, occasionally drifting down to play with the line of hair below his navel that leads her towards temptation, a temptation that for the moment she resists, her fingers barely touching the top of the patch of curls before meandering back up to the hair of his chest. She runs it through her fingers, enjoying the little sounds of happiness it brings forth from the man beside her.
He turns on his side facing her and she does the same and his eyes look into hers so deeply that she feels suddenly naked before him, which is silly because she is naked before him, but this strips her even more completely and makes her body start to ache as heat begins to fire in her pelvis. If he can do that with a look what can he do when he actually starts touching her?
She holds his gaze until she has to blink and when she does he moves with lightening speed, his hand moving to the back of her neck and his lips rushing to hers and his tongue pushing insistently into her mouth and she is opening for him without hesitation as he darts and bobs and weaves about her tongue, circling and moving in such a crazy frenzy and every single thing that he has been holding back until now comes out in the movement of mouths and tongues and teeth and souls and she knows now that he will no longer be a hesitant lover and it simply takes her breath away.
He breaks the kiss and she gasps in air as he pushes her down and onto her back again and he’s half over her and his lips are moving from her lips to her jaw line and his tongue is swirling against her skin there and then onto her neck where he sucks against the pulse point for several long minutes and she knows that it will leave a mark that will be visible for days and she doesn’t even care. The whole world will see that her lover has marked her as his and she will revel in it.
He pulls away from her neck with an audible pop then finds the little indentation of her collarbone with his tongue and his hand is on her thigh and without thought or voice or hesitation she is opening her legs to him and his fingers slide between her thighs and up, up, up until he cups her sex and one finger dips between her folds to find her opening slick and hot and oh, so ready.
She hisses as he pushes one of his long, slim fingers inside her body and she whimpers when he pulls it out after only one deep stroke. His finger teases up between the folds and as he brushes against her clitoris she cries out at the sudden intense pleasure it brings her. His lips are moving downwards then and his tongue suddenly finds her left nipple and he takes it into his mouth, flicking frantically at the hardening little bud and his other hand abandons her clit to reach up for her right breast and the sensation of his fingers rolling her other nipple while he laps at the first stills any thought of protest from his abandonment below.
He moves his body between her legs but he is far, far too low to do her any kind of good, for hips to meet hips, for bodies to join together. But he has no intention of doing that now, supports his weight somewhat on his elbows and licks outwards from her nipple in long, patient rounds until he is nipping at the tender flesh beneath and she is squirming in anticipation of things to come. His mouth returns to her nipple and he sucks hard, causing her hips to buck upwards and him to laugh in delight at her involuntary response.
The Doctor finally releases it and smiles at the height it has achieved under his ministrations before kissing his way across the divide of her chest and to the delicate underside of her other breast where he leans in and runs slow and languorous licks across her skin, before biting gently into the roundness and she can’t help but bring her hands up to run through his beautiful brown hair, her fingers caressing and scrabbling against his scalp and for a minute he lets go, throws his head back and she’s sure any minute now he’s going to start purring as a low rumbling sound emerges from his throat at her actions.
Then he is back, his mouth making a slightly elliptical orbit of her breast while the fingers of his hand begin to fondle the other and she can feel his growing hardness against her leg as he shifts. His second hand replaces his mouth as he begins to layer kisses between her breasts and then he is scooting backwards a little at a time while his lips trail across her abdomen and stomach and down to the top of her little patch of damp curls.
He kisses his way over to her hipbone and finally lets go of her breasts reluctantly. He nibbles just inside the join of thigh and pelvis and she feels her legs spreading further apart, granting him full access to the apex of her thighs. His tongue trails down and he moves backwards yet again and then he is parting her folds with very gentle fingers and he pauses at last in his frantic movements and she has to prop herself up on her elbows to see why he has stilled.
The Doctor is simply looking at her with wonder and admiration and lust. The expression on his face and the way his eyes are glittering send a huge wave of arousal through her and she can feel the let down of copious amounts of moisture as her body seeks desperately to welcome him inside her. “You’re beautiful,” he tells her and in that moment she wants him to abandon everything else and just make love to her right this second.
“Take me,” she whispers.
But he shakes his head no, gives her a hooded look that makes her burn from breasts to groin and says, “Patience. I’m not done yet.” She groans but he is moving his mouth closer and she feels the sensation of cool air as he blows lightly against her clit. The effect is instantaneous as the little bud rises up tall and he grins with masculine pride that he can bring her so easily to this.
He sticks his long tongue out, the tongue that she has dreamed about for years, even before he became the skinny man who licked everything, and ever so gently touches it to her tiny bundle of nerves and it rockets through her like a shot. His rapid, manic movements of before are gone and he takes his time, curling his dexterous tongue about the tiny nubbin, his intense stimulation of her almost too much to bear.
When she thinks she will go mad from the slow circling he slips down a couple of inches, dragging his way to her entrance and pushing his tongue inside her. His incursions are tiny at first, just little flits in and out and then he’s pushing deeper inside her, searching for her fluids and groaning as she releases more for him. He laps incessantly and as he pushes further inside her she has to wonder just how long his tongue really is.
With a sudden, swift movement he withdraws and his tongue is back swirling around her clit while he pushes two fingers into her opening and starting up a steady rhythm that gradually increases with the pressure of his tongue. Her clit is rising up again and she can actually feel it as it comes to a head against the force of his movements against her.
Rose’s hands fall to the bed, fisting in the linens as the sensation spirals higher inside her pelvis, wrapping her tighter and tighter like a coil under compression. He drives his fingers harder into her and his tongue is manic once again and she is losing the ability to breathe properly, rapid little pants being all she can draw forth from her lungs. And then the coil snaps, the pressure blows, she springs free and high and she is thrashing about so wildly that the Doctor wraps his arms around her thighs, but he never lets up on the pressure as the contractions begin, her walls clamping down in violent spasms against his fingers and he carries her through the orgasm to it’s completion.
As soon as it’s finished he is climbing up her body and she helps guide him to her entrance and he pushes hard, sheathing himself fully inside her in that one thrust and she cries out at the sudden fullness and oh, he’s so damn hard and then he’s moving and for a man who claims not to know what to do he’s doing everything right.
Rose raises her hips to improve the angle and he slides yet deeper and then she wraps her legs around his narrow waist and locks her ankles and then all she can do is hold on for dear life as he’s suddenly plunging and thrusting and taking and pounding and she can already feel the start of another orgasm assembling deep inside her core and then damn it, damn it, damn it, “Doctor, stop!”
For a moment he doesn’t hear her and she has to bang him on the shoulder to get his attention. “Doctor, stop!” she repeats and the glazed look leaves his eyes and he’s looking hurt and scared and uncertain and she says, “Condom. We forgot to use a condom!”
“I thought…aren’t you taking pills?”
“Well, but when it didn’t look like anything was gonna happen…I don’t like them and…so I haven’t been.”
“I…I don’t have condoms, Rose.”
“I do. In my purse.”
“I thought you thought…”
“Well, yeah, but I hoped…” He leans over and snags her purse off the floor and pulls it up onto the bed and dumps it out, scrabbling through the contents until he finds the little packet. He rips it open and withdraws from her body and starts to put it on but she stops him. “That’s inside out.” She takes it from him and turns it about and rolls it onto him and then lies back down.
He finds his way back inside her and before he starts again he kisses her long and hard and then they resume their former positions and he is driving into her again, pounding hard and fast and furious and his body is tensing and he asks her, “Are you close?”
And she bites her lip in frustration because she is, but not as close as he is and he lifts from her a bit, reaches his hand down between them and starts stroking at her clit and he has slowed down his movements to hold back for her until she is closer and then when she nods at him he is off again like a shot rabbitting into her body and if she thought the orgasm before was good it is nothing compared to the one he gives her now as every muscle in her body clamps down and her arms flail about in spasmodic rhythm with the rest of her body and her vision goes black and a wave of white noise rushes through her head and there is nothing but this, wave after wave of clench and release and it’s brilliant and it almost hurts but it feels so wildly amazing she almost can’t stand it. He stiffens against her and shouts her name and thrusts erratically inside of her.
At last her body lies limp and sated and he collapses on top of her and she wraps her arms tightly around him not wanting to ever let him go. “I love you,” he murmurs, nuzzling into her neck. “So much.”
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Date: 2008-07-28 05:56 am (UTC)Incidentally, your lj-cut has gone all funky. Might wanna check it.
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Date: 2008-07-28 06:25 am (UTC)Thanks. Well, Rose did challenge him with her focus comment about oral fixation and he wasn't going to be outdone even if he was a bit unsure of himself at first.
Yep, nearly had a big oops, because I nearly forgot about it, so I thought why not have them forget about it, too and then remember at the last minute. Like that doesn't ever happen in real life to newly active couples... *grins* And I don't want them having a baby this early in the series, that's got quite a ways to go for them. They've still got a lot of growing as a couple to do.
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Date: 2008-07-28 06:07 am (UTC)WOW that was hot and just so beautifully written.
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Date: 2008-07-30 06:35 am (UTC)Long!pointless!story is long and pointless. :D Yeah, I could've just agreed with you and been done with it but what would've been the fun in that? Lol! ;) ♥!
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Date: 2008-07-28 06:20 am (UTC)Just,
Wow.
Must go now, and find where husband is hiding ....
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Date: 2008-07-28 06:38 am (UTC)Fantastic work!
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Date: 2008-07-29 08:48 am (UTC)Gulp
Date: 2008-07-28 06:46 am (UTC)HOTTTTTT! Totally HOT! Wow good stuff!
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Date: 2008-07-28 07:13 am (UTC)More, please? *eyes innocently*
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Date: 2008-07-28 08:19 am (UTC)Wonderful completion to this installment!
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Date: 2008-07-28 06:05 pm (UTC)And now I have to go back to work. Dammit.
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Date: 2008-07-28 10:22 pm (UTC)Beautiful ending too.
It's the night before the bar exam and I'm supposed to be relaxing, but I'm not sure that created relaxing. I'm gonna have to go find Scarfman, or a shower, or Scarfman in the shower *wiggles eyebrows*
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Date: 2008-07-29 12:26 am (UTC)really liked the last part, gives them so much hope :D
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Date: 2008-07-29 08:49 pm (UTC)Yes, I like to think these two will go off and live happily ever after. A few roadblocks along the way but happy nonetheless.
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Date: 2008-08-05 01:45 am (UTC)And my husband's out of state!
Waaaah!!
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Date: 2008-08-09 05:48 am (UTC)Ahhh Much better :)
Date: 2008-08-07 06:15 am (UTC)Re: Ahhh Much better :)
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