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Title: Coat, Oncoming
Author: [livejournal.com profile] amberfocus
Characters/Pairings: Ten2/Rose
Genre: Fluffity Fluff, Romance, Bit of Adventure
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] amyo67
Rating: Teen
Summary: Rose Tyler had to remind herself that there were reasons, very important reasons, for the fact that she was standing in the dark, in the middle of a snowstorm, on a freezing cold December night, outside a rather sketchy looking warehouse, with a torch and entirely the wrong sort of shoes for this occasion.
Author's Notes: Written for the Doctor/Rose Holiday Fixathon 2011 going on over at [livejournal.com profile] doctor_rose_fix and for [livejournal.com profile] firstofoct's prompt: Something about The Coat. Either they find a replacement or it falls through a crack in the universe.


Coat, Oncoming


Rose Tyler had to remind herself that there were reasons, very important reasons, for the fact that she was standing in the dark, in the middle of a snowstorm, on a freezing cold December night, outside a rather sketchy looking warehouse, with a torch and entirely the wrong sort of shoes for this occasion. Reasons that, should she and the Doctor accomplish their current task without getting arrested, she might be able to explain to her mother, but reasons the police, Torchwood, and likely the paparazzi, would simply never understand. Hopefully, they wouldn’t be involving any of them.

“Found a way in.” The soft murmur in her ear made her shriek, though she quickly stifled it. She hadn’t heard him coming. Crap lookout she was. “Sorry,” the Doctor breathed against the back of her neck, sending little radiations of pleasure down her spine. “Didn’t mean to scare you.”

She nodded and he took her hand, pulling her along behind him down the alley. She stumbled on the stupid high heels, really wishing she’d been able to dress for the occasion. Breaking and entering and ₤1000 Manalo Blahniks that she’d never be able to wear again did not mix, though she rather thought frostbitten toes might be more of a problem before the night was over. They’d been at a charity event when the Doctor had heard the news and he’d gotten so excited he’d had to go and find out for himself right that minute if it were true or not and he’d not wanted to wait for Rose to change.

He stopped suddenly and Rose ran straight into him, painfully bumping her nose against his shoulder. “Ow,” she said indignantly.

“Shh,” he said. She glared at the back of his head and rubbed her nose gingerly. “Up there,” he said, pointing. A small window was ajar.

“How are you going to get up there?” Rose asked.

“I’m not. You are,” he said.

“What?”

“I’ll boost you up,” the Doctor said nonchalantly.

“I’ll never fit.”

“Sure you will.”

“Your hips are narrower than mine,” she pointed out.

“But are you strong enough to lift me?”

“Fair point.” She glanced up at the window more critically this time. “Remind me again why I married you?”

“It was either me or Fred in Accounting,” he said promptly.

Rose laughed and he leaned forward and brushed a quick kiss across her lips. “Oh, right,” she said with a contented smile. “Okay, I’ll try.”

He cupped his hands together and she stepped into them. “Ouch,” he grumbled as the ornamentation of her shoe poked him and she tried not to feel a small bit of satisfaction. She gripped the windowsill with her fingers. “Damn sequins,” he said as her dress scratched his face.

“I’m the one who wanted to change clothes, remember?” she said in a voice devoid of sympathy. “Lift me higher.”

The Doctor grunted. “Are you putting on weight?”

“Is now a bad time to tell you I’m pregnant?” she shot back.

“You—who—I—what?” The Doctor stumbled over his words and lost his footing.

“Don’t drop me!”

“But, but—.”

“I was kidding! Settle down!”

“Not nice, Rose,” the Doctor grumbled, but he did settle down and heaved her upwards. She pushed the window further open with one hand and managed to get her elbows over the sill. She looked around the deserted warehouse. “There’s a bin under the window. Looks safe enough to tumble into,” she told him.

“Ready?”

“Yeah.” He boosted her up until she got her waist through the window and was able to tilt her weight forward enough so that gravity did the rest, though not without a loud ripping sound that told her the evening gown was not going to survive the night, either. She dove head first into what turned out to be packing peanuts. It wasn’t the softest landing, but it wasn't the worst she'd ever had. She sorted herself out and sat up.

“You okay?” The Doctor’s voice was soft, but insistent.

“I’m fine,” she called. She crawled out of the bin. The slit in the side of the dress that had previously only gone to her knee, now went to an almost indecently high part of her thigh. Well, maybe later she and the Doctor could take advantage of that fact, but right now she just had to hope the thing would hold together long enough to get through the night.

She moved to the door that was several yards away and stared at the alarm system. She pulled off her watch and pressed hard on the sapphire. A thumb drive emerged from the bottom of the watch and she plugged it into the alarm box’s data portal. Two minutes later she was safely opening the door for her husband.

“Good job,” he told her. “Now, according to my information, what we’re looking for is in the southeast corner in a box labeled lot 14C,” he said. That was, of course, the furthest corner from where they were currently standing.

Rose slipped off her shoes. “My tights are ruined,” she said, noticing ladders on both legs. The warehouse floor was cold, but it was better than trying to walk much further in her shoes. As much as she’d admired them when her mother had given them to her the previous weekend, she’d never planned on adventuring in them. She really wished someone would invent fashionable footwear with comfort in mind.

They made the trek across the warehouse and when they arrived at the other end, they started hunting amongst the boxes. “I think I see 14A,” said Rose pointing it out.

“It is!” said the Doctor triumphantly. “Here’s B, and D and F. Where’s C?” His excitement had turned to consternation, and then as he searched frantically, disappointment.

“Maybe someone beat us to it?” Rose suggested.

“But how?” he said. “The shipment just came in today and I hardly think that anyone in this universe cares enough about the contents of an old American singer’s estate to do what we’re doing. It’s not like she caught on here like she did over there. Maybe because she lived.”

“No 27 Club here,” Rose said.

“No.” He sighed. “Maybe it was too much to hope for.”

“What? You’re giving up already? After you made me climb through that window? I don’t think so, Mister. Keep looking.”

“Rose,” he began in a discouraged voice.

“Nope. Not letting you give up. Did I let you give up when you couldn’t figure out the solution to grow the baby TARDIS in?” she asked.

“No.”

“Did I let you give in when Mum tried to bamboozle you into running Torchwood so she and Dad could go on that one year world tour?” she wanted to know.

“No.”

“Have I let you give up on your quest to manufacture a functional facsimile of a sonic screwdriver until the ship is big enough to grow a real one for you?”

“No.”

“So what makes you think I’ll let you give up on finding Janis Joplin’s coat?” Her eyebrows were raised, her hands were on her hips, and he was giving her that look that said he was turned on by her bossiness.

He smiled, reached out, pulled her into his arms and hugged her tightly. “Have I ever told you that you are the best thing that ever happened to me?”

“Yes, but a girl can never hear that enough,” she said. He kissed her neck and then let her go.

“All right, Rose Tyler, let’s see if we can find this thing.”

He shifted into action and a moment later she was helping him methodically move and restack boxes until the errant 14C finally showed up. Slowly and carefully they removed the packing tape and sorted through the contents. The coat was on the bottom and the Doctor removed it with reverence, his fingers lovingly stroking the soft, brown fabric. He shook it out and buried his face in it, inhaling the scent of it and hugging it to him.

Rose looked fondly on as he mumbled, “I thought I’d never see you again.” He shook it out to its full length and then unbuttoned it. Rose held it for him as he shrugged into it. He turned in a circle, then again and again. “It swishes,” he said happily.

Rose smiled and started repacking the box. “Do you two need a little time alone together?” she asked dryly.

He looked at her with a goofy grin and then swept her back into his arms. “The only person I want time alone with is you,” he said.

“Are you implying your coat is a person?” she asked.

“Well, they did grant it that status on the planet Monofia, if you’ll remember,” he said smugly.

“And they were quite horrified when we had a picnic on it,” Rose said.

“I don’t think it was having the picnic on it that horrified them. It was the—.”

“Yes, Doctor!” she said, blushing at the memory.

“Come on,” he said. “Let’s finish up and get out of here.”

With the packing tape carefully back in place and all boxes restored to their previous places, Rose put her shoes back on, and the two of them reset the alarm and exited the warehouse. Back at the limo, which had quietly idled several streets away, they woke up their driver and headed for home.

When they’d showered and changed and Rose was sure that her toes were as warm as they could possibly be, they slid into bed together. The coat was hanging on a coat rack that the Doctor had acquired from who knew where and the Doctor tossed it another loving look. “Thank you,” he said. “You are the only one crazy enough to have done that for me tonight.”

“You take me to all the best places,” she teased.

“You love it.”

“I love you.”

“Mmm,” the Doctor agreed, kissing her soundly.

“Do you think,” Rose asked when they finally came up for air, “that you have everything you need to be happy now?” She thought about the new TARDIS and the sonic and the coat.

“Oh, Rose,” he said softly. “All I ever needed to be happy was you.”

And then he showed her just how thoroughly he meant that.

Date: 2011-12-07 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firstofoct.livejournal.com
Oh my gosh that was adorable! It was the perfect mix of fluff, humor, and action/adventure! My favorite parts were definitely when Rose was giving the Doctor shit about his love for the coat. Particularly:

The coat was hanging on a coat rack that the Doctor had acquired from who knew where and the Doctor tossed it another loving look.

lol!

Thank you sooo much!!!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
I'm very pleased you liked it. I had a blast writing it for your prompt! This was much more fun than my other thought which was, "Rose finds Janis Joplin's coat on e-bay and buys it for the Doctor for Christmas," because they would totally steal it if they had the chance.

Date: 2011-12-08 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] firstofoct.livejournal.com
Oh totally! I love that you made a fun & cute adventure out of it!

Date: 2011-12-08 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
:D:D:D:D:D:D

Date: 2011-12-07 09:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fishface44.livejournal.com
A reward for my insomnia! So sweet & fluffy & very fun!!!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Sorry you've got insomnia, too. I've had a rough week with it myself. Glad you enjoyed the story.

Date: 2011-12-07 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fogsblue.livejournal.com
Aww, sweet (I may need a filling or 3) but so much fun. And disturbingly so very like something the Doctor would do.

“I don’t think it was having the picnic on it that horrified them. It was the—.”

And that sounds like an interesting story... ;)

Date: 2011-12-07 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yes, I did pile the fluff on a bit, but I was in the mood for sweetness for these, too! I definitely think the Doctor would break in and try to acquire it shiftily. More fun that way. *grins*

Date: 2011-12-07 09:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yumimum.livejournal.com
Loved it. Perfect morning fluff to start the day off :D

Date: 2011-12-07 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:20 am (UTC)
kilodalton: (10rose romance)
From: [personal profile] kilodalton
I *love* this!!! Fluffy and cute and sweet and adorable!! And just the right amount of sass and sweet sexiness!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I love to believe that they would act just like this.

Date: 2011-12-07 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mkejenkins.livejournal.com
D'awwwwwwwww......

That's adorable!!!!♥♥♥♥♥

Date: 2011-12-07 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks, hon!

Date: 2011-12-07 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] who-in-whoville.livejournal.com
Too many lines of perfection to pick a favourite. This was just one of many. I laughed out loud garnering a look from my daughter:

“Did I let you give in when Mum tried to bamboozle you into running Torchwood so she and Dad could go on that one year world tour?”

Your muse has certainly proved itself alive and well. Loved it!!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you. I felt a little guilty about wanting to do the same prompt, as you know, but I was just so inspired, so I'm glad you didn't mind. I saw you posted yours, too, so I will head over there after I finish my comments and see what you came up with.

Date: 2011-12-07 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyprydian.livejournal.com
“I don’t think it was having the picnic on it that horrified them. It was the—.”

“Yes, Doctor!” she said, blushing at the memory.

HA! A perfect way to start the day. Doctor/Rose fluff!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Fluff makes me happy.

Date: 2011-12-07 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sensiblecat.livejournal.com
Beautifully written and so in character!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I want to believe they would be just like this, bickering mildly, teasing, grumpy, and completely in love while stealing stuff.

Date: 2011-12-07 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] larxene-12.livejournal.com
The Doctor grunted. “Are you putting on weight?”

“Is now a bad time to tell you I’m pregnant?” she shot back.


Hahahaha. You know he was wishing she was telling the truth.

What an excellent way to start out on the fixathon, and a congratulations for being inspired to write! I'm glad your muse woke up enough to contribute. Hope everything else gets better soon, as well!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, he really shouldn't have commented about her weight when he was trying to push her through a window. *laughs* He deserved it a little bit. Though, sap that I am, the original ending was, "Now about that baby..." And the Doctor falls out of bed. But it wasn't meant to be a baby!fic type so, no. Anyway, glad you enjoyed the story and thanks, I hope everything else gets better soon, too. I've got my first four physical therapy sessions scheduled and I start on Monday.

Date: 2011-12-07 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katherine b (from livejournal.com)
Absolutely loved it! The Doctor is so adorkable. The exchange when he boosted Rose through the window was particularly good. Thanks so much for sharing; reading this helped brighten my day. :D

Date: 2011-12-07 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. He kind of deserved that after being rude about her weight. Glad if it could improve your day.

Date: 2011-12-07 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] todaysgoneby.livejournal.com
This was wonderful! I love the wedded bliss we find them in, and I am so happy for the Doctor's reunion with The Coat. I also loved their snarky exchanges. Great work!

Date: 2011-12-07 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. It's how I like to picture them, happily, but snarkily married and doing crazy stunts.

Date: 2011-12-07 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] todaysgoneby.livejournal.com
Indeed! It is the Doctor and Rose after all!

Date: 2011-12-08 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yep. So really they have no choice.

Date: 2011-12-07 06:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com
Aww! Cute fluffy fluff.

Date: 2011-12-07 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I got hit full on by the fluff bunny.

Date: 2011-12-07 08:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valiant-queene.livejournal.com
I very much enjoyed how I wasn't sure just what they were doing most of the time, but I did understand how important it was to the both of them! And I'm glad that they found The Coat.

I am so very very happy that you are writing again! This was an epic return to writing.

Date: 2011-12-07 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yeah, I kind of wrote it that way on purpose, though once I put on the title and the prompt you'd know, but I still didn't want to come out with it until the end. Thank you. It is great to be writing again. I love doing it so much.

Date: 2011-12-07 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinyopals.livejournal.com
Awww, that was pretty cute! :D

And omg the pregnancy exchange was my favourite.

Date: 2011-12-07 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Yeah, he kind of deserved that. Never comment about a woman's weight while she is doing you a massive favor, Doctor.

Date: 2011-12-07 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wander-realtai.livejournal.com
Awww, and I didn't even know I was in the mood for fluff 'till I read this. Adorable!

Date: 2011-12-08 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, that makes two of us as I didn't even know I was in the mood for fluff until I wrote it. Thank you.

Date: 2011-12-08 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] onabearskinrug.livejournal.com
awwwwww! I love this!!! And you're right, why would you exchange legal currency for something when you can steal it instead?? :-D

Date: 2011-12-08 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thanks. Yeah, Rose may have all the money in the world now, but it's way more fun to do ti their way.

Date: 2011-12-08 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_thirty2flavors/
Awwww I liked this a lot! I like how the different bits of Pete's World function to make this midnight robbery possible, and I liked Rose going along for the ride because she recognizes it as important to the Doctor. Totally the kind of fun hijinks I imagine they get into all the time. And like everyone else, I loled at the pregnancy gag.

Date: 2011-12-08 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you. I like to imagine them doing this stuff all the time and almost never getting caught at it. And he totally deserved that pregnancy joke.

Date: 2011-12-08 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spellweaver731.livejournal.com
Amazing! I loved it. I don't know why it never occurred to me that they could get Janis's coat in Pete's world. I love this so hard, they were so perfect in it. I could hear the Doctor and Rose in every line, I could see their facial expressions.

Date: 2011-12-08 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, to be honest, I hadn't really thought about it before I saw the prompt and then I'm like, of course there's a duplicate Janis! Thank you. I'm glad it was that vivid for you.

Date: 2011-12-08 03:18 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-12-08 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2011-12-08 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sapphire-child.livejournal.com
This is too gorgeous. I love the idea that Tentoo goes on his own little quest to find the coat in the parallel universe :P fantastic! Just the right blend of action, schmoopy romantic stuff and good old fashioned Doctor/Rose fun. ^___^ such a nice finish to my night!

Date: 2011-12-09 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tracy-lousia.livejournal.com
Superb story. TenII is so adorable. I love everything you write.

Date: 2011-12-10 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 3pirouette.livejournal.com
Fantastic fic! So cute, and I love that it's just the two of them trying to do something that sounds so simple, but ends up being hard.

I also live Rose's running thoughts about what she's wearing. Stupid action movies making women run around in dresses and heels... you know those directors are men! Wonderful job!

Date: 2011-12-14 04:20 am (UTC)
redcirce: Rose: bamf (Rose bamf)
From: [personal profile] redcirce
This was absolutely lovely. Fun and fluffy and perfect. Love their "mission" and how excited the Doctor is. Also love Rose's pragmatic response to ripping her dress. ;)

“Oh, Rose,” he said softly. “All I ever needed to be happy was you.”

::melts:: Perfect ending!

Date: 2011-12-22 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emraldeyedauter.livejournal.com
Haha, adore this. All that fuss for the coat but I can totally understand the Doctor going hunting for it. Luckily Rose knows him so well and look at the happy ending for both of them.

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