amberfocus: (Nine Rose Moon--Don't Take)
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Title:  Reverence
Author: [livejournal.com profile] amberfocus 
Genre:  Smut, PWP, Romance
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose
Rating:  NC-17 for graphic sex in an established relationship
Betas:  [livejournal.com profile] amyo67, [livejournal.com profile] jeprdyfrndly 
Summary:  He lights her up from the inside, firing her synapses with sheer, raw pleasure.
Author's Notes:  Happy Birthday to [livejournal.com profile] develish1.  Hope you enjoy my first smut in months!  Also written for challenge 72 at [livejournal.com profile] then_theres_us.  Prompt under the cut.  Totally not work safe, school safe, or child friendly.






Reverence
 

Rose awakens to the Doctor’s cool breath on the back of her neck and his long, thick shaft growing steadily harder inside her. His arm snakes around her hip, his fingers sliding through her slippery wetness to play with her clit. They’d fallen asleep still joined after a heady night of lovemaking and too much champagne, but now her head is perfectly clear and she can feel every nerve in her body that is connected to his. His pelvis works against her as he lazily strokes her to the edge of orgasm and leaves her dangling breathlessly on the edge.

She reaches one hand back to touch him, her hand sliding along his hip bone. His lips fasten onto her shoulder and she can feel his tongue working against the muscle there, before moving to first her neck, and then higher. He makes love to the shell of her ear and then gently sucks the lobe, while at the same time keeping his slow pace within her body.

“Please,” she gasps. She’s so close.

“Please, what?” he asks teasingly, pulling his mouth away.

“Let me come.”

He chuckles. “Your wish is my command.”

His actions intensify and her nerve endings crackle with electricity everywhere their skin touches. She shatters around him, losing all coherence, all sanity, as everything inside her burns.

He barely gives her time to come down before he withdraws from her body and pushes her onto her back. Her golden hair splays across the brilliant white pillows and he runs his fingers through it reverently. “My turn now,” he says.

She gives him a sated, welcoming smile as he settles between her legs, pushing back into her tightness. He supports himself with one hand, the other lifting her thigh up to give himself deeper access. She groans, the sound coming from low in her chest, as he fills her completely.

Rose raises her fingers to his face, her palm cradling his jaw tenderly, brushing over rough stuble as he begins to move. He lights her up from the inside, firing her synapses with sheer, raw pleasure. Her eyes find his and hold on. The hard steel strength she usually sees there has vanished, replaced with vulnerability, openness and a love so fervent she could never hope to find it better elsewhere. Not that she ever has any intention of looking.

Her thumb slips to his lips and he sucks it into his mouth, his tongue swirling about the digit as he plunges deeper still into her body. He drops her thigh and gathers her close to him, his arms around her back, and she moves her hand to the back of his neck. There is no space between them as he drives himself into her body. His weight is heavy and so right against her.

She cries out at the next powerful thrust. Lust and joy radiate throughout her body. She’s going to come again. She feels that dizzy rise that starts in her stomach and spirals downward to where their bodies join. How he can do this to her over and over she doesn’t know. What she does know is that she can never get enough. He’s an addiction, a drug for her soul, taking her higher, always higher.

His eyes close, breaking his hold on her gaze and she knows he’s right there on the edge. “Come,” he breathes and as if the word was the only thing holding her back, spasms rock through her as she loses all control. He makes the soft, gentle whimper that always comes with his orgasm, the sound only she can cause him to make. She’s barely aware of it as her pleasure courses through her, trying to turn her inside out with the rawness of it. His seed splashes into her and she digs her fingers into his shoulders.

He collapses, what little weight he’d held off her pressing her body deeper into the mattress. She can’t speak, but she needs to kiss him. She nuzzles at his jaw until he turns his face to hers. Her lips find his, her tongue insistent in its pursuit of his. She makes complete and thorough claim to his mouth. The franticness dies down, turns to slow, languid circles, and slowly their hold on each other softens.

He slips from her body and rolls onto his back, pulling her with him, tucking her into the shelter of his arm. She tosses her leg over his, grasps his waist with one arm. He reaches to hold that hand with his free one.

“Rose,” he says. He says it reverently and gently and with so much joy, as if her name is enough to bring him to his knees. She feels his lips against her hair, moving silently. She recognizes the words, the shape of them, though he doesn’t speak them aloud.

“Doctor,” she replies, her fingers tightening in his. She’s going to love this man for the rest of her life. In time they’ll both be brave enough to say it. Until then, this is more than enough.

Date: 2011-03-30 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com
Man I don't know how you so consistently deliver such awesomeness, even when ill. This really is just too lovely for words. I particularly love this line "She feels his lips against her hair, moving silently. She recognizes the words, the shape of them, though he doesn’t speak them aloud."

Date: 2011-03-31 04:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm starting to feel human again and I guess that means getting my fic brain back a bit. I'm so happy you loved that line. It was such a strong image for me, him mouthing the words he loved her even when he wasn't able to say them aloud.

Date: 2011-03-30 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wander-realtai.livejournal.com
Aw, this is beautiful and sweet and just... *happy sigh*

Date: 2011-03-31 04:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. :D

Date: 2011-03-30 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com
Ohhh welcome back! :)

Date: 2011-03-31 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thanks! It's good to be back.

Date: 2011-03-30 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com
Oh, how lovely! I love the slow, lazy feeling of this. Intensity has its place, but moments like this? I can never get enough. And neither can they.

Date: 2011-03-31 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I was in the mood for gentle Nine for a change, instead of caveman Nine. *grins*

Date: 2011-03-30 03:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flydye8.livejournal.com
Lovely and beautiful. Exquisitely done. Love the gentleness of this fic.

Date: 2011-03-31 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Gentleness was exactly what I was going for.

Date: 2011-03-30 11:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mkejenkins.livejournal.com
uuuuuunnnnnngggggggguuuuuuhhhhhhhhh.........

What a treat to wake up to this morning. But d&*#! How am I supposed to go to work with that in my head now?

Date: 2011-03-31 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I don't know, maybe it can help you get through the boring parts of work?

Date: 2011-03-30 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessalrynn.livejournal.com
*applauds* You still have the power to make everything melt! Go, lady, set the reader on fire with your hot words and the smoldering intensity you paint with them!

Date: 2011-03-31 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Seriously, I was beginning to think I'd forgotten how to write smut. It's nice to know I haven't.

Date: 2011-03-30 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloose09.livejournal.com
I really like this line:
How he can do this to her over and over she doesn’t know. What she does know is that she can never get enough. He’s an addiction, a drug for her soul, taking her higher, always higher.

It is what you are able to do to us with your writing. We can never get enough of their passion for each other. Thank you for bring us along.

Date: 2011-03-31 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I always like it when people tell me what lines resonate for them.

Date: 2011-03-30 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildwinterwitch.livejournal.com
Ah, smut from you. It never fails to turn me into a puddle of warm fuzzies and something else. I'm with [livejournal.com profile] othermewriter, the line of the shape of his words in her hair is wonderful. Thank you.

And happy birhtday, [livejournal.com profile] develish1!

Date: 2011-03-31 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad you liked that line. I really loved the sentiment behind having him do that.

Date: 2011-03-30 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geordie-chick.livejournal.com
Welcome back!

And happy birhtday, develish1!

Date: 2011-03-31 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you, my dear.

Date: 2011-03-31 02:22 pm (UTC)
develish1: (Default)
From: [personal profile] develish1
oh my! *grabs fan* after that you are totally forgiven for how long it's been since the last one :)

This is wonderful hon, thank you so much

Date: 2011-04-01 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you. I'm so happy you liked it.

Date: 2011-04-01 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sigmastar79.livejournal.com
Beautiful, goregous, fanastic, do i need to go on?

Wonderful story, absoulately devine

Date: 2011-04-03 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. I love your use of adjectives!

Date: 2011-04-01 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emraldeyedauter.livejournal.com
UNF! I read this the other day and was too incoherent to form a reply. Not sure I'm going to have better luck the second time around. All I can say is welcome back and GUH!

Date: 2011-04-03 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you. Lack of coherence is what I was going for!

Date: 2011-04-01 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yenly-gozal.livejournal.com
My... that was awesome! *sigh*

Date: 2011-04-03 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you! *smiles*

Date: 2011-04-07 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonmom64.livejournal.com
Guuuuuuuuuhhhhhh!!!!!!

Welcome back! You certainly haven't lost your touch!

late comment is late

Date: 2011-04-15 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valiant-queene.livejournal.com
I am so glad to see you writing again.

This was just perfect. Just absolutely perfect.

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