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Title: Body Language
Author: [info]amberfocus
Betas: [info]amyo67[info]jeprdyfrndly
Series: Bodies in Motion
Characters/Pairings: Nine/Rose, Jack
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Fluff, Angst 
Rating: Adult
Summary: An idyllic summer day on the planet Janesta is shattered when the Doctor is injured in an explosion.
A/N: Written for the second round of the [info]storm_and_wolf ficathon. The picture prompt will be posted in the relevant chapter. This is the fourth entry to my Bodies in Motion series, but stands alone fine without having read those. Dedicated to [info]lostwolfchats as a belated birthday gift.

Here is the picture prompt for the story:

 
Ch. 1:  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/304213.html
Ch. 2:  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/307467.html
Ch. 3:  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/311007.html

Chapter Four

A half an hour later the sound of boot heels clanging down the hall jerked them out of the quiet bliss that had settled upon them as they basked in the afterglow of their lovemaking and the first declarations of their love. Jack pounded on the bedroom door. “I’ve thought of something,” his voice came from outside.

“Give the man a medal,” the Doctor said sarcastically.

“Hey, do you want to get healed or not, Doc? ‘Cause I can keep my brilliant revelation to myself, you know.” Jack sounded entirely too pleased with himself to actually do that, though.

“Come in, Jack. If you’ve thought of anything that can help—,” Rose began.

“I have. At least, I think I have.”

“Well, let’s hear it.”

“Well, first, do you think you can pilot the TARDIS blind?” Jack asked. “To a place other than the Vortex, I mean? Because it’s kind of gonna rely on you being able to.”

“Won’t be easy, but a lot of it is pure muscle memory. And I have the keyboard memorized so if I know what coordinates to put in, I should be able to, yeah,” the Doctor said.

“I’ve been reading one of the books in your library, trying to find something that was tickling the back of my mind, but I couldn’t quite place. Something I read when I first came on board and I finally found it again. Something I’d only ever heard rumors about in my time. You ever hear of a place called Ralta?” Jack asked.

For the first time since he’d figured out he couldn’t work the equipment in the infirmary the Doctor felt a surge of hope wash through him. “I’ve heard of it,” he answered cautiously.

“Where I come from most people thought it was just a legend, but sometimes, well, you’d hear about people coming back from there and being miraculously cured.”

“Ralta’s a real place, Jack, but the healing pools…well, whether or not we can get to them is a different story. No one can get past the priests without being deserving,” he said.

“After all you’ve done for this universe, all the people you’ve saved, how can you think you’re not deserving?” Rose demanded.

“I don’t think someone who’s committed mass genocide on two species is going to qualify as deserving,” the Doctor said flatly.

“You did what you had to do for the greater good of the universe,” Rose said loyally.

“Don’t know if they’ll see it like that.”

“Well, we have to try!” she said fiercely. “If there’s any possibility you can be healed than we have to try.”

“We really do, Doc. There’s no one else to tell us how to run the equipment that would save your eyes and I’m not sure how we’d ever find a hospital randomly that could do it. The book gave the coordinates of the planet. We need to go there.”

“Okay,” the Doctor said after a long pause. “Give us a minute to put on some clothes.”

“I’ll wait,” Jack said cheekily. The Doctor heard a thump and a soft oof and grinned. He was pretty sure from the motion next to him that Rose has just hurled a pillow at Jack.

“I’m going, I’m going,” Jack said and Rose chuckled.

The door clicked shut. “I don’t think he’ll ever give up trying to join us in bed,” Rose told him.

“It’s not in Jack’s nature to give up.”

“I think I’d be kind of disappointed if he did give up, really.” He felt the warmth of Rose’s body moving away from him as she stood up. “Come on, Doctor. Get up.” The Doctor scrambled to his feet and took the pile of clothing Rose handed him, quickly getting dressed.

“Do you know where my leather jacket got to?” he asked.

“Jack brought your clothes back. They’re probably in your room. What you’re wearing is the spare set you keep in here for after we almost died shags.”

“Appropriate I’m wearing ‘em then,” he said.

Rose swallowed hard. “Yeah.”

The Doctor reached out for her, his hand thumping into her shoulder, and pulled her close to him. “I didn’t die, Rose. Got off pretty easy, really.”

She buried her head against his chest and he felt her nodding. “Didn’t seem like it at the time.” He hugged her tightly and she clenched him to her fiercely.

After a long moment she released him. “Best get on with it,” he said. Then taking Rose’s hand, he allowed himself to be led back to the console room.




Programming the TARDIS console to take them to Ralta wasn’t as hard as they feared it would be. Since they weren’t aiming for a specific time period, it was a simple hop across space, a far less complicated procedure than trying to hit an actual date…or even century. The Doctor had got them into orbit, but he informed them that a blind landing was going to be difficult, if not downright nasty.

“Rose, I want you to get some safety restraints. They’re in the third roundel from the floor on the left side of the door to the corridor. Jack, I want you to tie Rose down—.”

“Now there’s a sentence I never thought I’d hear you say,” Jack quirked. Rose laughed at the stormy look the Doctor shot in his direction and went to retrieve the harnesses.

“And then I want you to strap yourself to a support strut,” the Doctor continued as if Jack hadn’t spoken. “This is going to be far more than a bumpy landing, I’m afraid.”

“What about you?” Rose asked as Jack hooked a harness up to the strut nearest the console and then fastened it securely around her.

The Doctor put his hand under the edge of the console and pulled out what looked very much like bungee cords. A couple more descended from the ceiling above him at his activation. “These should keep me in place while we land. They give me free reign to move about the console but will tighten up on impact.” He attached the cords to his ankles and around his chest under his arms.

“How come we don’t use these all the time?” Jack asked.

“Where’s the fun in that?” asked Rose.

“I knew I should have talked you into installing airbags when we had the chance on Korvalas,” Jack muttered.

“No one works on my ship that I don’t trust,” the Doctor said darkly. “Which limits it right down to you and Rose.”

“Aw, Doc, I’m touched that you trust me enough to touch your girl,” Jack said.

“The TARDIS,” the Doctor said just to be clear, “not Rose.”

Jack laughed. “Yes, Doctor. I’ve had that point driven home long ago.”

The Doctor made a few adjustments to the controls. “Do you still have that book handy?” he asked.

“Yeah, it’s in my pocket, hold on.” Jack squirmed and managed to retrieve it from the inside of his jacket without having to unfasten himself.

“Good. Read me out the exact coordinates of the healing pools. We’ll land as close as we can to the ancient temple.” Jack read them out and the Doctor carefully input them into the computer. “Ready?” he asked and waited for confirmation from both of them. “Here goes nothing.” The ship dematerialized.



It took them half a dozen tries and a lot of cursing from both Jack and the Doctor, and at one point Rose was pretty sure, the TARDIS herself, before they found themselves arriving at the correct destination. Arriving might be too gentle a word as the TARDIS crashed against a cliff face in a shower of sparks and a small explosion that caused four foot high flames in two different places.

Rose released her harness and grabbed the fire extinguisher and aimed it at the base of the first fire while Jack searched around for something to beat the flames of the second one with. He ended up grabbing a cushion off the jump seat. Even he wasn’t crazy enough to dare use the Doctor’s beloved leather jacket. He smothered the worst of it, then Rose finished up with the extinguisher.

“If you’re done playing,” the Doctor said irritably when they’d finally managed to put the fires out.

“Playing!” exclaimed Jack. “We’re lucky we got here in one piece and you’re the only one who needs to use the healing pools.”

“This damn well better work,” added Rose, “because I think you’ve got a week’s worth of repairs ahead of you and I don’t see how you’ll manage them if it doesn’t.” She was trying to hold back her temper, knowing he didn’t mean his irritable words. The stress of trying to land had hit them all quite hard. “At least we’re finally in the right place.”

She slipped her hands into the Doctor’s and said, “Come on. Let’s go.” Jack led the way out of the ship, the Doctor and Rose trailing behind him. He kept up a steady stream of chatter so the Doctor would be able to tell where they were going from the sound of his voice.

“It’s maybe a half mile from here,” Jack said. “I can see the temple.”

Rose could, too. It was an imposing structure, made out of yellow and brown river rocks that had been polished by centuries of tumbling through water before being used to construct the ancient building. It soared high into the sky, at least thirty feet over her head and a huge, wide opening yawed in its center. To either side of this massive door burned torches lit with cold green flames.

Rose kept up a quiet commentary of what was on the ground ahead of them as they walked, warning the Doctor of any particular dangers on the path, and threw in descriptions of the forest around them and the temple before them. “Oh,” she said suddenly coming to a stop and her motion stopping the Doctor as well.

“What is it?” Jack asked.

“I thought I saw someone.”

“Probably one of the caretaker priests,” the Doctor said. “They’ll be alert to our presence by now and should be sending someone out to greet us.”

As if the Doctor’s words had been the cue waited for, an old man suddenly appeared on the pathway before them. It looked as if he’d just materialized out of thin air, but Rose could see that there was actually a small bend in the path that had been obscuring him from full sight. He was dressed like the color of the forest, in a simple brown burlap robe that fell to his sandaled feet, a belt made of green jungle vine wrapped firmly about his waist.

“This be sacred ground. Why come ye here?” he asked in a strangely musical voice so deep that it seemed to reverberate through their bodies.

“Please,” said Rose. “We seek healing for this man. He’s been blinded.” She indicated the Doctor and the caretaker priest turned his eyes on the Time Lord.

“Come forward. Let me touch you.” As they approached the man, Rose realized that he was as blind as the Doctor, huge white cataracts covering what had once been very blue eyes. Sudden fear leapt into her heart. If a caretaker priest was not worthy enough to be allowed into the healing pools what might the Doctor’s chances be?

The man’s eyes turned and focused narrowly on Rose. “I can hear your thoughts, child. Yes, I be physically blind. That does not mean I cannot see. Without this blindness I could not view the beyond, past all strictures and bindings, into the true heart of one’s soul. I have the choice over which type of vision I can possess. I chose this life.”

“I’m sorry. I meant no disrespect.”

“None taken. Now, please, bring him here.”

They walked forward until the Doctor stood before the caretaker priest. He reached up for the Doctor’s head, hands sliding into place over his ears, pinkies resting at the base of the Doctor’s skull and thumbs over his eyelids. “Try not to resist me,” the man said. “I need to enter your mind. I need to see who you are.”

The Doctor relaxed beside Rose, allowing the other man the access he sought. The two men stayed locked together for so long that Rose and Jack took themselves to a log on the side of the path and sat down to wait, watching the swaying of limbs as the Doctor and the priest seemed to be swaying to some unheard music.

At last with a gasp and a stagger backwards the link was broken. “I have seen what was necessary,” said the priest. “Though ye have done things that many would consider evil, it was always with pure intent, always for the greater good, always with a righteous heart. Ye have been judged and ye have been deemed of worth to use the healing pools.” Quietly he explained the process that must be used, then the old man turned towards the temple and in his deep, musical voice roared out. “Let them pass!”

The grinding of gears came from somewhere within the temple and the three of them walked inside. In the middle, giant wooden doors had been pulled open and they could hear the rush of water. They walked through the inner sanctum and to the back side of the temple. It opened up back outside onto a river bed. A series of small waterfalls and limpid pools, lined with flat yellow stones, lent the water the look of fine champagne.

They were careful to place their feet on the downward path to the bottom. The three of them stepped into the bottom pool, Jack and Rose on either side of the Doctor. “Keep your eyes open,” Rose warned and the Doctor nodded. Carefully they ducked him under the water and counted out the twenty seconds he needed to stay submerged. He rose then and they helped him climb through the waterfall to the pool above. In the second pool he had to stay submerged for forty seconds. The pattern was repeated until they’d hit the sixth and final healing pool. He stayed under for a full two minutes.

When he finally emerged Rose looked at him hopefully. “Did it work?”

The Doctor wiped the water from his face and slowly blinked his eyes. Gradually the image of Rose’s worried face came blurrily into view. “It’s working!” he cried out jubilantly.

Rose threw her arms around the Doctor and hugged him tightly. “Oh, thank goodness!” she said.

Jack wrapped himself around the pair of them, holding them to him. “That’s great, Doc!”

Finally the three of them stumbled to the shore where a young priestess awaited them with dry, white robes. With each minute that passed the Doctor’s vision became more and more clear. By the time they’d changed and had their clothing lain out in the sun to dry he was almost back to normal. The temple dwellers gave them fruit and cheese and bread and wine to drink and offered them quarters for the night. A stay of twenty hours on the planet following the procedure in the healing pools was necessary for the cure to be permanent.

The Doctor made love to Rose reveling in the beauty of every inch of her body and when he had thoroughly exhausted her and she had fallen into a deep sleep, he eased himself out of bed and went to take a walk by the river that had given him his sight back. Jack stood quietly on the shore, tossing tiny yellow pebbles into the current.

“Can’t sleep?” he asked the younger man.

“Rose loves you,” Jack blurted.

“I know that,” he said.

“She was so afraid of losing you, and then so afraid you were going to send her away.”

“I won’t do that,” the Doctor said. “I want her with me. Always.”

“Her always and your always…they aren’t the same thing.” The Doctor tensed and turned away from Jack. “Doctor, you’re in love with Rose, aren’t you?” Jack asked.

“She’s my world,” he replied.

“How many years does a 21st century human live for?”

“Not enough,” he said grimly. “About a third of what you will.” Jack whistled. “She says she’ll never leave me. And she won’t. Not by choice. Just by time passing.”

“What if…what if she didn’t have to?” Jack asked.

“What do you mean?”

“Healing pools aren’t the only legend carried throughout the universe about this planet,” Jack said. “I asked the priestess about it, just to be sure. I thought she was barely out of her teens. Turns out she’s 845. On the far side of this planet…there’s a spring. They call it the Everlasting. It’s a fountain of youth, Doctor. Rose could…Rose could drink from it. And it isn’t really permanent. You’d have to return every 50 years or so to renew the effect. So if she ever wearied of it, she could change her mind, let herself die, but in the meanwhile…I just thought you should know.”

The Doctor pulled Jack into his arms and hugged the man tightly to him, then let him go quickly before Jack recovered enough from his surprise to try to take advantage to the situation. “I don’t know if she’ll want to, but having the option…”

“You’d have the possibility of a real future.”

“Yeah.”

The Doctor turned to head back the way he’d come. “Are you going to tell her?”

“Not yet. Things are still so new. But one day, when she’s ready to make this permanent, I’ll ask her. Do you think you can keep it quiet until then?”

“I will,” Jack agreed.

“Thank you.” The Doctor left him staring up at the stars and headed back to Rose. He took off his clothes and slipped back into bed, pulling her to him. She cuddled into his body and let out a little sigh of satisfaction. For the first time since meeting Rose Tyler, he realized that if she’d have him, there really was a chance of forever with her. He smiled in contentment. He couldn’t think of anything he’d ever want more.



Date: 2010-01-17 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mkejenkins.livejournal.com
That is soooo beautiful. And yeah! for finding and way for them to be together forever!

Nine/Rose, Forever and Always!

Date: 2010-01-18 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you. Yeah, it's an option for a future, certainly.

Date: 2010-01-17 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emraldeyedauter.livejournal.com
Oh how lovely. The whole imagery of the pools was wonderfully written as well as the self doubt as to whether the Doctor would be worthy of such healing. Of course he is. The conclusion with Jack and the option of Rose having a longer life is so sweet and exactly what we would hope for so they can be together. Well done on another fantastic addtion to the body in motion series

Date: 2010-01-18 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. That image of the healing pools was the first part of this fic that came to me, the minute I saw the prompt. I had to build the entire story around that image, working backwards. For all his confidence in so many areas of his life, he is plagued with a lot of doubt about his actions in the time war, so he really does feel he might not be worthy because of the sheer number of deaths he feels he has caused. Glad you liked the conclusion. I wanted some sort of option for a real future for them.

Date: 2010-01-17 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com
The springs will heal you--if you don't drown in them first! Lucky the Doctor has that respiratory bypass. Lucky, too, that the springs lived up to their billing.

I love an irrepressible Jack. He's so cute when he tries to get in bed with them, but he really does love them. I suppose we might see that spring in a future installment?

Date: 2010-01-18 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, they do have something like snorkels avaialbe for those species that can't hold their breath that long! *grins*

Jack will never stop trying, and yes, he very much loves them both.

As for the Everlasting spring, it's possible. At the moment it's more of a symbol of hope for the Doctor that he won't be alone if she makes that choice. I do want to write a couple more stories in this 'verse eventually.

Date: 2010-01-18 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com
A lovely ending

Date: 2010-01-19 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks. I wanted something hopeful for the pairing.

Date: 2010-01-18 01:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quean-of-swords.livejournal.com
Lovely lovely as always. ^_^

Date: 2010-01-19 02:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you so much.

Date: 2010-01-18 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jovibabe363.livejournal.com
Perfect ending. I knew you wouldn't leave him all blind! *Whispers* Don't tell anyone, but... I cried a little bit at the end there...

Date: 2010-01-19 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
No, of course I wouldn't. Aw, thanks. Tears are good!

Date: 2010-01-18 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angel932.livejournal.com
Wow - what a great plot twist! More! More!! More!!!

Date: 2010-01-19 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. This fic is completed. I will add another story or two to this universe, but not for a while.

Date: 2010-01-18 04:40 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] juliet316
Very nice ending, including a possiblity of forever for them!

Something occured to me while I was reading this last part. I know you said in the post for title suggestions for future stories in this series that there probably wouldn't be a regeneration story, but has the Doctor talked about regeneration with her? Because you know, if Rose does take the option of the spring, that might be a nice thing for her to know, if she wants to make their relationship permanent.

Date: 2010-01-19 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'd like them to have that optin. Nope, he hasn't talked about regeneration with her at all. It would make a good plot for one of these stories though.

Date: 2010-01-18 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hazelwho.livejournal.com
Lovely ending to this story! I really like the dynamic Jack has with Nine and with Rose in these last two chapters.

The whole series has been fantastic. I hope your call for titles means there may be more installments in the future.

Date: 2010-01-19 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. I like using Jack as more than just part of the scenery so I'm glad you liked his dynamic with them. Yes, I hope to write more stories in this universe. I'm quite fond of these particular version of Nine and Rose.

Date: 2010-01-18 05:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silencing.livejournal.com
You always paint such a lovely picture, and this ending was gorgeous. Another lovely fic!

Date: 2010-01-19 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you very much. I like making the stories as vivid as possible, sort of painting them with a wordbrush. I struggled with the ending a bit until I figured out that it should be Jack just telling the Doctor about the youth spring and not the Doctor offering it to Rose just yet. It worked much better this way.

Date: 2010-01-18 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kk-animation.livejournal.com
Aww... good job Jack on saving the day and bringing the possibility of "forever" future for Rose and the Doctor.

Date: 2010-01-19 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Jack's pretty great, isn't he? *smiles*

Date: 2010-01-18 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magali29.livejournal.com
Such a planet should exist in real life, don't you agree? At least, the doctor is cured. You know, the Doctor was all emo about humans withering and dying but I always thought; "come on, he knows tons of planets, can travel in the future, there's got to be future technology allowing humans to live longer without aging too much!"

So why didn't he go with Rose to such places, to allow her to live longer?

Date: 2010-01-19 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Oh, yes, it should. Yeah, I think the Doctor could have extended Rose's life span in a thousand different ways if he'd just put his mind to it. But that would have meant really admitting that he loved her and never wanted her to leave his side. It was much easier for him to just be Emo!Doctor than deal with his emotions. (No, I'm not bitter at all at Ten).

Date: 2010-01-18 06:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yenly-gozal.livejournal.com
Talk to her, Doctor. I'm sure that she'll agree.

It was a beautiful place (the picture prompt). This ends well. Great story. Looking forward to read the next story in "Bodies in Motion" series.

Date: 2010-01-19 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. One day he'll give her the option.

Date: 2010-01-18 09:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] feerocious.livejournal.com
That was lovely. I love the idea of the healing pools and the thought of Rose having the chance to live a very extended life with the Doctor is great. :)

Date: 2010-01-19 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I figure there's some kind of science behind why they work. Some kind of healing organisms in the water or nanotechnology or something, but I like presenting it as mystical. It's the same for the Everlasting. And as long as it gives the Doctor a cure and hope, that's all that really matters.

Date: 2010-01-18 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] debs7.livejournal.com
I love and adore that you have that option left open for them. I like to think in this particular series the Ninth doesn't regenerate for ages and ages and Rose lives for a long time.

Date: 2010-01-19 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks. No, no regeneration for Nine in this series! Nine lives on and on. And they get a happily ever after. Canon? what canon? I don't need no stinking canon.

Date: 2010-01-18 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostwolfchats.livejournal.com
Squeeeeeeee!! Happy ending with an added dose of happy :-D Love ya!!

Date: 2010-01-19 03:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Well, fluff, you know, is the perfect ending to hurt/comfort.

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Date: 2010-01-21 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonmom64.livejournal.com
*sniff*
Beautiful! As others have said....Nine/Rose forever! What a great story!

Date: 2010-02-01 03:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Definitely forever in this universe.

Date: 2010-01-27 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janeeyre17.livejournal.com
This was wonderful (I love h/c fics).


I have to admit though that when the Doctor mentioned telling her when the time was right my heart seized up a bit. All I could think of was him regenerating, and then Ten putting it off until it was too late.

Date: 2010-02-01 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I love writing hurt/comfort. Though it's usually Rose that is hurt.

That's the beauty of fanfic. In this particular universe he doesn't regenerate for decades and only then of old age and they live happily ever after. Because I said so. *grins*

Date: 2010-02-21 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geordie-chick.livejournal.com
I love that you say so and what a great series and a lovely story.

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