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Title:  This Alien of London (pt. 4)
Author:  Amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose, Jackie Tyler, Mickey Smith
Genre:  Romance
Betas:  [info]amyo67
Rating:  Adult, this part R for semi-graphic sex
Summary:  Rose and Nine return to London after their first few adventures and get caught up in the Slitheen invasion.
A/N:  This fic was written for the Time in Flux ficathon over at [info]doctor_rose_fic.  The goal was to take your assigned episode and rewrite it, or part of it, having the Doctor and Rose get together in it without totally skewing canon so much that the next episode couldn't happen.  I got Aliens of London.  Recognizable dialogue is from that episode.

Previous chapters:
1.  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/283238.html  2.  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/284081.html
3.  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/284716.html

Chapter Four

 

 

He took off his jacket and hung it over the back of a chair and then removed his boots and socks before sitting on the bed beside Rose, who had kicked off her trainers and socks while he’d been busy. As he reached for her pink t-shirt she said, “Do we have time for this?”

 

“Time machine, Rose,” the Doctor said as his hands slid onto the skin of her stomach. “There will always be time for this. I will make time for this.” He grinned at her then focused on her stomach again, slowly sliding her shirt up to just beneath her breasts and leaning down to kiss the smooth expanse he’d just bared.

 

His lips had almost reached her when she spoke again. “I thought once we landed we became part of events?” Rose said. The Doctor sighed and sat back up.

 

“Not really part of events yet,” he said. “I mean, sure, I had a peek, but we haven’t actually interacted with any of the aliens yet.”

 

She gave him a hard look. “Are you trying to justify this just so you can shag me?” she asked him.

 

The Doctor sat back on the bed, withdrawing his hands completely. “Are you looking for an excuse to stop it?” he asked sulkily.

 

“No!” she said in exasperation. “It’s just…world saving. It’s what we do. Isn’t it supposed to come first?”

 

He let the obvious pun he could have made go with great difficulty. She was clearly serious. “I had to recalibrate one of the TARDIS’ systems to track the flight of that space ship in the past. It’s going to take at least an hour to run the program. We’d just be out there twiddling our thumbs or trying to make peace with your mother. I’d much rather be in here with you.”

 

“Me, too,” she said. “And making peace with mum, that’ll take time.”

 

“I’ll make peace with you mother, Rose,” he said.

 

“Yeah?”

 

“Yeah. Later.” He’d try anyway, for Rose. Didn’t know if anyone could actually succeed at making peace with Jackie Tyler. Bit of a harpy, that one. Although he did have to admit she had cause.

 

“Thank you, Doctor. That means so much to me.”

 

“But right now, I just want to make love with you. That all right?”

 

She nodded. He smiled at her and slid his hand up her jeans-clad leg until it came to rest at her zipper then unfastened the button and pulled the tab down, the zipper extraordinarily loud against the quiet sound of their breathing.

 

“Only…” And he stopped and looked at her steadily until she continued. “I’m nervous.”

 

“You’ve had sex before, haven’t you?” he asked. He didn’t think she was a virgin, but stranger things had happened.

 

“Well, yeah, but…not a lot. Mickey liked…” She stopped, blushed, and then forced herself to continue. “He liked blow jobs and then after that he couldn’t again…usually…so we didn’t…you know. Much. He fell asleep a lot and by the time he woke up I just didn’t really care anymore.   Sorry, you probably don’t want to know…” She trailed off then forced herself to meet his eyes. There was both amusement and jealousy warring in their depths, and deep sympathy.  She looked away.

 

“He didn’t take care of you?” the Doctor asked carefully.

 

Rose shrugged and wouldn’t look up. “Sometimes,” she mumbled. It was obvious she didn’t want to talk down about Mickey in that particular arena. It was also obvious he’d left her high and dry more times than were forgivable. That wouldn’t be happening with him. “Don’t think much of him then. Mickey the only one you’ve been with?” he asked gently.

 

“So you do know his name!”

 

“I know his name,” the Doctor admitted. “Is he?”

 

“No, but…Jimmy got drunk so much that he couldn’t get it up often and we didn’t very much either. It just…wasn’t…and sometimes he would…he wasn’t very nice to me and well, some of the things he did to me…it made me not want to. I wasn’t with him long,” she said playing with the necklace she wore. His key, he noted.

 

“He hurt you?” He was horrified at the idea of anyone hurting Rose. 

 

Rose didn’t meet his eyes and wouldn’t answer his question. “Anyway, this is different. This is…this is you. And I’m human and you’re not.”

 

“The parts will fit, if that’s what you’re worried about,” he told her.

 

“That hadn’t even occurred to me,” she said rolling her eyes at him. “I didn’t think you’d bring me here if they didn’t. But you are 900 and you’ve lived a long time and you’ve, I’m sure you’ve…done this.”

 

“You can rest assured I have, in fact, done this,” he said wryly. The corners of his mouth twitched but he kept his expression neutral. He didn’t want her thinking he was laughing at her worries.

 

“A lot.”

 

“Enough.” 

 

“I’m…I’m afraid I’m not very good at it.”   She bit her lip. “If I had been, maybe Mickey would have wanted to more.”

 

“Rose.”

 

“Sorry, I shouldn’t be talking about him when we’re gonna…” Her eyes met his again. “I don’t want to disappoint you.”

 

“Never.”

 

“But I—.”

 

“I want you, Rose,” he said. “I don’t care if you know what you’re doing or not. I’ll teach you what you need to know. My body responds differently in some ways than a human anyway. Different erogenous zones.” Rose looked up at that then glanced at his groin. “That one’s the same,” he said following her line of sight and she gave him a small smile.

 

“It’s all happening so fast,” she said.

 

“I won’t put pressure on you. If you think it’s too soon, if you’re not comfortable with taking me as a lover yet, that’s all right. I can wait.”

 

“I don’t want to wait,” she said pounding the bed with one fist. “I’m just…” She huffed, blowing her fringe up out of her eyes, but it just fell back down again. He reached out and smoothed it away from her face so that it stayed back.

 

“Scared?” She nodded. “I’m not going to hurt you,” he said.

 

“My heart can’t take another man who doesn’t…who isn’t…who’s only in this for himself.”

 

“Rose Tyler, I will never leave you wanting. I can promise you that right now. I’m very good in bed,” he said.

 

Rose smirked at his self-confidence, some of her fear evaporating. “So, you’re Mr. Impressive, then?”

 

“I’m always Mr. Impressive.”

 

She giggled and then took his hand.  “I have to ask.  How compatible are we?” she asked then.

 

“I already told you we were,” he said, confused.

 

“No, I mean…” She flitted her gaze up to meet his eyes then looked away. “I’m too young to be a mum.”

 

“Oh,” he said. “That. It’s genetically possible, but highly improbable,” he said, “but you’re not ovulating right now so there’s no risk of a pregnancy.”

 

“What? How can you know that?” she asked.

 

“You put out certain hormones when you are. I can smell them,” he said.

 

“You can smell hormones?” she asked.

 

“Alien,” he reminded her. “And not everyone’s. Not unless I’m really trying. Just yours. I’m attuned to you because we live together.”

 

“Oh.”

 

“Any other questions?” he asked her.

 

“Why do you wear a watch when you’re a Time Lord?” she asked.

 

“I meant about us and sex,” he said in exasperation, removing the item in question from his wrist and placing it on the night stand.

 

“I’m just curious,” she said.

 

“It’s just…decoration. Like the rings on your fingers.”

 

“That all?” she pressed.

 

“Reminds me of home,” he said. She backed quickly away from the subject as he knew she would.

 

“So if I was ovulating, is the pill something that would work against your sperm?” she asked.

 

“No, but I can release seminal fluid without any sperm in it when you are. There’d be no risk of pregnancy,” he said.

 

“How do you do that then?”

 

“Release the right hormones into my bloodstream,” he said with a shrug. “Just requires a bit of meditation beforehand.”

 

“Meditate your way to birth control?” She sounded dubious.

 

“Something like that,” he replied. “Or I could wear a condom.”

 

She nodded. “That’d be best.”

 

“You want I should wear one today?” he asked.

 

She bit her lip again. If she wasn’t careful she was going to cut herself. “Would you mind?”

 

“Of course not. It’s up to you. It’s always up to you,” he said.

 

She nodded again, looking relieved. “Okay, then, I’d like you to.” He fished around in his bedside drawer and pulled out a box. He pulled one out and held it up to the light, checking for the expiration date. It’d been years but these were from Vega Thesperon and they were guaranteed for decades. They were still good.

 

“So, we can start now?” he asked a trifle petulantly. He wasn’t too keen on beginning again if she was just going to stop him with more questions.

 

“Yeah,” she said with a smile.

 

He grinned at her, pulled off his jumper, and then laid himself back down on the bed beside her and took her face in his hands. Gently he brushed his lips across hers and slid one hand under her top. His tongue slid into her mouth as his fingers found her nipple. With just the tip of one finger he rubbed lightly across the top of the little bud before lightly kneading the entire breast in his hand.

 

One of Rose’s hands reached up to cradle the back of his head while the other moved across his back. Her hand was warm against cool skin and her fingers were very soft as they settled in the small of his back. He felt himself jerk towards her as her fingers danced there. She’d instinctively found one of the places that pleased him most to be touched. He sighed into her mouth as her tongue circled against his and she sought to explore him.

 

He let her into his mouth, let her search out what pleased him as she swept across the roof of his mouth, then over the tiny peaks and valleys of his teeth. He let go of rational thought when her hand steadily made its way down his back and came to rest on his bum. Her hesitation seemed to disappear and when he was sure she was ready, he pulled back from her and slipped her t-shirt up over her head. Rose clutched at the sheet, trying to cover herself, but he caught the hand and stilled it.

 

“I want to see you,” he said.

 

“But I—.”

 

“Please.” Her hand fell back to her side and she bit her lip. “Just like I imagined,” he said gruffly. “Beautiful.”

 

“You imagined this?” she said.

 

“Been thinking about them since you wore that low cut dress in Cardiff,” he admitted. He took her into his arms again and kissed her, marveling at the sensation of her breasts pressing into his chest. Slowly he kissed his way down her body, his mouth pausing at first one nipple just long enough to raise it to a hard, high peak, then focusing more firmly on the other while his hand played with the first. Rose sighed and rubbed her hand over his hair, the other gliding up and down the muscles of his upper arm.  He’d shifted too low for her to reach his bum anymore, he thought with some reluctance.

 

He didn’t think he would ever tire of touching her this way, but he knew that if they really were going to save the world he couldn’t take nearly the time that he wanted to. He could spend hours learning her body, but right now they only had one. He promised himself that as soon as this was over he’d take her to the edge of a plasma storm and let the TARDIS surf the waves while they made love all night under that view.

 

When Rose was squirming in a ridiculously high state of arousal he backed off and rid himself of the last of his clothing then pulled off her jeans and knickers. He debated asking her whether or not she was sure one more time, but he was too selfish to actually say the words out loud. She raised her arms to him and opened her legs and that was all the answer he needed.

 

 

 

It had all happened so fast. Not the sex itself, but the decision to have it, the decision to make love with the Doctor. The act itself had been deliciously long. He was a considerate and tender lover and she’d been made love to more thoroughly than she’d known it was possible to be made love to. It was the first time she’d ever seen him sweat as he’d collapsed atop her, naked and sated and leaving her content in ways she couldn’t even have begun to imagine beforehand, and she was quite pleased with herself. This was something she was going to want to do with him again. A lot.

 

She smiled as she pushed at him and he rolled away, coming free of her body. As he settled onto his back she curled into his side, arm flinging about his waist and leg wrapping around his calf. His arm curved up onto her back, holding her close as his other hand stroked her arm and played with her hair.

 

“That was…”

 

“Yes, it was,” the Doctor agreed. She decided not to try to qualify it further.

 

“No going back, huh?” she murmured.

 

His hand stilled in her hair. “Do you want to?”

 

“No. Hell, no. I made my choice. It’s always gonna be you, Doctor.” His hand began its gentle stroking again.

 

“Good.” He kissed the top of her head and she felt his arm tighten, pulling her closer to him if that were humanly possible. Or alienishly possible. Was that even a word? She was having to make up words now to describe how they were together. Mental, she thought. All of this was completely mental. And she loved it.

 

A soft beeping sound infringed on their awareness. The Doctor groaned. “What is it?” she asked.

 

“Program’s finished running.” There was so much reluctance in his voice that she smiled softly against his skin.

 

“Time to save the world?” she asked.

 

“Yeah, but after we’re done, I’m going to take you—.”

 

“Sounds good to me,” she interrupted cheekily and he laughed.

 

“We’re going to spend an entire night doing nothing but this,” he said.

 

“Mmm,” Rose said. “That’s an idea I can support one hundred percent,” she said. With a sigh she sat up and started searching around for her clothes. “Best get on with it,” she said as she located her undergarments and pulled them on. They dressed with extreme reluctance and made their way out to the console room, hands firmly entwined.


Ch. 5:  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/285893.html

 
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Date: 2009-08-27 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catyuy.livejournal.com
I think how you wrote the sex worked perfectly.

***** 5 stars.

Date: 2009-08-29 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. It felt right.

Date: 2009-08-27 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessalrynn.livejournal.com
YES!

A: They're completely ADORABLE like this.
B: Yeah, that's pretty much what I'd be willing to BET Rose's sex life was like before, although with me, the jury's still out on Mickey and her relationship.
C: They're completely ADORABLE like this.
D: You know what, fade to black really works here, I think. Surprisingly enough, it really really works. Sorta like the whole confessions thing, which works with their whole relationship so young.
E: They ARE COMPLETELY ADORABLE LIKE THIS!!!
F: I love it, I do, now what?

Date: 2009-08-29 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* So the upshot is they're adorable? I think it probably was very hit and miss. I don't think Mickey had a lot of experience before Rose. I think that's why he was so hung up on her. She was his first.

Now you go read chapter five and the epilogue. *smiles*

Date: 2009-08-27 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jennyshepard.livejournal.com
I totally adored the dialogue *before*. Though I have to admit that I like the, you know, "hot" stories (oh dear, what am I saying here...) I always thought that it might be possible Rose isn't as experienced as it sometimes seems in fics.
And a sexual relationship with the Doctor probably isn't really comparable to the ones Rose had with the boy(s)on Earth (no, wait... sorry, that's just the fangirly fantasy that Mr. Impressive is real :D).
So I really loved it... Although I also had to laugh a bit... imagining this dialogue with Nine... that's so cute! *giggles*

Why do you wear a watch when you’re a Time Lord?
Yeah, thanks, that had me laughing so loud that I actually was shocked by myself ^^

Great chapter! :) More please! *smile*

Date: 2009-08-29 02:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Hot has it's place but with this being so early in their relationship it didn't feel quite right for the nature of this fic. I go where the muses lead me and this was the result.

That watch line comes out of the fact that CE wears his watch (same one) in almost every movie or TV show he does. So I noticed it on him a lot in Doctor Who and I always wondered why he'd wear it as a Time Lord.

Date: 2009-08-27 08:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ehmi.livejournal.com
That was uber sweet, and I loved it! I like it when Nine is sweet. <3

Date: 2009-08-29 02:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. So do I.

Date: 2009-08-27 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rowofstars.livejournal.com
I have no idea why but awkward Doctor-Rose sex discussions make me giggle like an idiot. I love how you wrote this and the background on Rose's sex life.
The fade to black was good. I really don't think it needed more.

PS - Nine is being so adorable in this I just want to squish him!

Date: 2009-08-29 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. They are fun, and funny, to write. I'm glad about the fade to black. It just really felt like the right choice here.

Date: 2009-08-27 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silencing.livejournal.com
I loved how you handled that conversation that they forced you to let them have. I do think it's rather important that he knows her background, and I thought it was an interesting take on Rose's love life.

And the cut to black worked well. Quite lovely, can't wait for more

Date: 2009-08-29 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks. They were pretty adamant about it so I let them have their way. So many fics practically have Rose being this experienced sex goddess. I've been guilty of that myself. But really, she was nineteen years old. I don't think she probably had much. Some, since she'd had two steady boyfriends, but not a lot.
Edited Date: 2009-08-29 02:18 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-08-27 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petnurser.livejournal.com
Fantastic!

Date: 2009-08-29 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2009-08-27 10:20 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] nonlinearmusing.livejournal.com
Timid and inexperienced Rose was well-written. The Doctor was so tender and gentle with her. Aww.

Hawt and tender. :)

Date: 2009-08-29 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I think he would be, knowing how young she is, and of course with how hung up on her he is.

Date: 2009-08-27 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annaoni.livejournal.com
That was just lovely. And their little talk.. perfect :)

Date: 2009-08-29 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2009-08-27 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] michellemtsu.livejournal.com
For where they are right now, I thought it was great. And I have another reason to dislike Mickey! ;)

Date: 2009-08-29 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks. I had forgotten how petulant Mickey was in the beginning until I rewatched this episode. I'm glad he does finally grow up.

Date: 2009-08-27 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] klb89.livejournal.com
Let's hope they hurry and save the world so they can get back in bed! Wonderful!

Date: 2009-08-29 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you.

Date: 2009-08-27 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com
Very sweet first time! I love how gentle and loving he is with her here.

Personal fanon concerning Rose's sex life is a bit like yours--sex with Jimmy was usually hard and fast and Rose's satisfaction was hit-or-miss, usually miss. I also picture him, especially as he got into drugs, wanting a lot of things she didn't want to give, but did because she was in love with him. I can also see him threatening to go elsewhere if she didn't do what he wanted.

As for Mickey, my personal fanon is that he was a virgin before Rose. (Hey, that would explain why he was still hung up on her as of JE, which is what I read.) Eager to please, but inexperienced, and Rose herself wasn't experienced enough to let him know what she needed, and too shy to ask about things she read in Cosmo.

In other words, she had sex and sometimes enjoyed it, but never had a really good lover. Before the Doctor, of course.

Date: 2009-08-29 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I do think this is probably a lot closer to how things would be than I normally write them. Rose has a lot of confidence in certain things, but I think she'd be shy about this with the Doctor.

Date: 2009-08-28 01:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctor10-crazt.livejournal.com
Perfect for today. How do you always know?

That was beautiful. I loved it.

Date: 2009-08-29 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you very much. If it was needed on this day, I'm glad of it.

Date: 2009-08-28 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kholly.livejournal.com
“There will always be time for this. I will make time for this."
I mean really, what good is a timeship if you don't take advantage of it.

Poor Rose. You did a great job of walking that awkward line of not wanting to talk about Micky but needing to talk about where she was at and get all her questions answered. I liked bow tender and patient the Doctor was, or tried to be.

Puts a nice new spin on that plasma storm phone call. I'll have to rewatch with this in mind.

(and the fade to black totally worked)

Date: 2009-08-29 02:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Exactly. What's a couple hours here and there? Thank you. The Doctor tried his best to be patient with her, but he does have his own issues with self-doubt when it comes to Rose. He was very good about setting those aside here and being exactly what she needed him to be once he realized what the issues were.

Yeah, I always hated that whole blackmailing Rose into leaving her mum's so they could go watch that storm. I wanted to make it a little better. And of course, I can't resist doing a fixit there in my epilogue.

Thank you.

Date: 2009-08-28 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jellybean728.livejournal.com
Yeah, this is pretty much perfect.

Especially Rose's past experiences. She is, after all, only 19. Now, I remember being 19 and my boyfriends at that time, and yeah...that's pretty realistic.

“Any other questions?” he asked her.

“Why do you wear a watch when you’re a Time Lord?” she asked.

“I meant about us and sex,” he said in exasperation, removing the item in question from his wrist and placing it on the night stand.


I laughed SO hard at that!!!!

Date: 2009-08-29 02:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I was hoping it would come off as realistic. Glad you liked that exchange. CE is almost always wearing a watch so I've wanted to use that for a while now. This seemed like the perfect place to put it to break the seriousness of the moment a little bit. And seems like something Rose might say when she was dealing with nerves.

Date: 2009-08-28 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com
okay...that made up for leaving us hanging :) This is great!

Date: 2009-08-29 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad.

Date: 2009-08-28 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingfriend.livejournal.com
I'm loving this interpretation of this episode. I apologize for not saying anything until now, RL got away from me a bit.

Their conversation was rather adorable, I really like how nervous Rose is and how patient he is with her hesitation. So often I forget that she is only 19 and this gentle reminder was done perfectly. And as much as I like smut, I felt like the fade was just perfect. I feel like the conversation made it such an intensely private thing and it would have been intruding... so, really, well done, you.

I am also really enjoying how generally understanding you have made the Doctor in this whole thing thought the specific cite from this chapter being his willingness to make peace with her mother for her. He really is quite sweet.

Date: 2009-08-29 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad you had a moment to stop in and leave a comment. RL is pesky like that, always getting in the way. *smiles*

I think if Rose and the Doctor had really become lovers at this point, he would have tried harder to make peace with Jackie sooner, so it made sense to me that that would be something that should change.

Date: 2009-08-28 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yenly-gozal.livejournal.com
Oh, this is so fun! They really wanted to talk, didn't they? What a conversation... I lost it when Rose asked about him wearing a watch, LOL!

Looking forward to see more and of course, the under-the-plasma-storm smut :D

Date: 2009-08-29 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yeah, they did. I tried to just go with the sex, but they were having none of it. And as usual, they were right. *smiles* Thank you.

Date: 2009-08-28 06:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hazelwho.livejournal.com
Yeah, ditto to what everyone else already said... Young Rose with the not-so-great experiences was realistic and well done. Tender, loving Doctor was incredibly sweet. The watch line was the funniest thing I've seen all month, and it was such a perfectly Rose thing to say. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Date: 2009-08-29 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad you liked the watch line. I didn't expect it to be such a hit, even though I thought it was funny.

Date: 2009-08-28 09:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostwolfchats.livejournal.com
How have I missed this?

I loved all the questions!! Poor Doctor, having to wait so he could answer them all :-D

Date: 2009-08-29 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
I think it was the going away for a week part of your life. Thank you. I think the Doctor was quite happy with what he ended up with, though. Patience was good for him here.

Date: 2009-08-28 12:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyprydian.livejournal.com
“Any other questions?” he asked her.

“Why do you wear a watch when you’re a Time Lord?” she asked.

I roared with laughter at that. Insert obligatory random nervous pre-sex question indeed. HA!

What a conversation those two had, and ditto to what everyone else has said.

Date: 2009-08-29 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it. I really loved that particular question. Thank you.

Date: 2009-08-28 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mitashade.livejournal.com
“Any other questions?” he asked her.

“Why do you wear a watch when you’re a Time Lord?” she asked.

“I meant about us and sex,” he said in exasperation


ROFL. I *sporfled* like mad at that for some reason. XD

Lovely. T'was perfect.

Date: 2009-08-29 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* It does seem to be a well-recieved line. Thanks so much.

Date: 2009-08-28 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maniacalshen.livejournal.com
This was cute and VERY sweet, and I needed that desperately, so thank you.

Date: 2009-08-29 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
You're welcome, honey. And thank you.

Date: 2009-08-28 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lorelaisquared.livejournal.com
Okay, this was deliciously sweet. I'm suddenly absolutely loving vulnerable Rose here. That whole conversation between them about her prior experience was so perfect (and so adorable) given her age and the earliness of this episode in the series. She really hasn't been traveling with him for very long. :)

This was wonderful! And we're getting another chapter? *squee* I'm so excited. I can't wait for more! :)

Date: 2009-08-29 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. It definitely felt right for how early it was in their relationship that they would have this sort of conversation. I think I've put them at about four or five weeks here of travelling together. All very intense, together 24/7, but still only a few weeks.

Yep, one more chapter and an epilogue that I've posted together.

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Date: 2009-08-29 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] qtrhorserider.livejournal.com
This was a very gentle chapter. Despite her "experiences" I've always seen Rose at this stage as being innocent. The Doctor has enough experience to cherish that and be exactly who she needs,

Date: 2009-08-29 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Yeah, I think she probably was more innocent than she's generally written (by me as well as others).
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