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                                                     Chapter Eleven

James Lumin sinks into the glass of his office window, the coolness of it a welcome balm to his frazzled synapses. He hopes it won’t be much longer before Dr. Smith arrives. He stares off into the distance, watching the London skyline on fire, feeling the vibrations of the Earth that still echo through him a good thirty minutes after the crash. They are minute enough that it would take sensitive equipment to even measure the aftershocks of the violent landing. But he feels them. He always feels them. This is not the first time they have come. If he survives this, it will not be the last.

He doesn’t need any equipment to sense them, of course. He never has. He knows what is going on, has known even from before the moment the craft had entered orbit three days ago, cloaking themselves from all but the finest of his satellites. The presence inside them has been screaming for days. Even here, protected in his glass and steel tower, the psychic emanations are nearly maddening. If he leaves the building before the reentry wailing is complete, the cries will deafen him.

He knows he will have to pull himself together soon. He needs a working biosignature masking device before the beings in those ships have a chance to recover and seek him out. Not just for himself but for what is hidden deep in the complex. Dr. Smith can help him with that. He is almost finished with the repairs and the man is brilliant enough to pick up Lumin’s own slack, figure out what it is exactly that is missing.

He had thought he would have time before they found him, thought that he’d at last have the technology in place to protect himself forever from the trackers, time at least to guide Dr. Smith to making the appropriate intuitive leaps that he was sure the man was capable of. Just a few more months and he’d have been safe. Now…now he doesn’t know if he’ll ever be safe again. He doesn’t know if Earth will ever be safe again. Finding Dr. Smith when he had had given him so much hope. Are those hopes to be forever shattered now when they are finally almost in reach?

He’d been so delighted to discover the untapped potential of Dr. Smith. It was as if the man had appeared from nowhere just when he’d needed someone with his capabilities. How it is that someone so gifted had escaped his notice for so many years continues to elude him. Everything about him has checked out. All of his records are intact. But Lumin had not known about him.

And he prides himself on knowing about anyone with tech abilities. Even the students in his scholarship programs, the ones with the most potential, he knows by name and by sight, even if they don’t yet know him. He has his eye on three in particular that could help him with his project, has contracts ready to be presented upon graduation. But Smith had not even been on his radar.

Of course, there is also the little matter of the man’s health scans. The irregularities clearly mark him as someone whose personal energy field has at some point in time been severely altered. Some time in the not too distant past. It is enough of an alteration that the scans read the man as having the cellular decay rate of a one month old infant. And that is impossible unless, like Lumin himself, the man isn’t actually human. Or truly was born only one month ago, but that’s impossible.

A knock on the door and the clear tones of Donna Noble alert him to the fact that Dr. Smith has at last arrived. He slips out of the glass, pulling himself together, light and radiant energy coalescing into human form. He is exhausted but he can hold his shape without full rest at least for the next few hours while he puts his plan into motion.

He only hopes he isn’t acting too late; for himself, for the secret locked away in the vaults, but mostly for his much beloved adopted planet. Because if the creatures that are after him ever were to find what he’s been hiding all these many years, they’d tear apart the very Earth to possess it. And though he had once vowed his very life to protect his charge, he does not think it worth the destruction of humanity or the little blue green world that has brought him so much joy.



“Yes, Donna, bring him in.” The cool, cultured tones of James Lumin issue forth and Donna steps into the room. Rose hangs back, hesitant, but with a firm grip on her hand, Jonathon tugs her into the room with him.

“Ah, Dr. Smith. I’m glad you could--.” The man breaks off and appraises Rose coolly for a long minute. She does the same.

His pictures don’t do the man justice. The phrase larger than life comes to mind. James Lumin is a tall man, taller than Jonathon by a good few inches. He’s also rather well built, filling the expensive suit jacket near to bursting, simply radiating restrained power. There is something almost…blinding about him at first, but the impression vanishes almost as quickly as it comes.

Lumin is standing by the windows that look out in the direction of the fire, the glow of which can be seen from where Rose stands by the doorway. His hair is a golden brown and his eyes an even paler shade of golden brown. There is a slight bluish undertone to his skin as if he seldom sees the sun, but the man reeks of vitality and health. His biography puts him at fifty years old but his appearance puts him at forty.

He shakes his head then a slow smile creeps across his face. “Well, this is a surprise. Welcome to Illuminate, Rose Tyler.”

“What?” she asks shocked. “You know who I am?”

“You’re a fourth year recipient of the Illuminate Young Minds Scholarship Foundation. Of course I know who you are,” he says. “I keep tabs on all of the recipients. There’re only twenty of you. What I don’t know is why you’re here.”

“Rose is my girlfriend,” Jonathon says. “We were on a date when I received Donna’s text. I couldn’t take her home. She lives on the other side of that.” He gestures towards the fire. “Your message sounded urgent so I didn’t want to take the time to drop her by my flat. And honestly, I want her with me until it is safe out there.”

“Probably a smart choice,” Mr. Lumin says. “It’s not safe out there right now. It may be a long time before it is.”

“I’ll wait out in the hallway,” Rose says nervously letting go of Jonathon’s hand and taking a few steps towards the doorway.

“Thank you. I won’t keep your man long, Miss Tyler,” he says with a broad smile. “And I apologize for interrupting your date.”

“Come keep me company,” Donna Noble says to Rose as she retreats from the office and the doors slide shut with Jonathon inside.

Rose smiles gratefully at Donna. She feels completely out of her element in the beautiful building. Well, she’d probably be fine in one of the labs, but the extensive lushness of this particular floor is mind-boggling.

“I thought you were just Jonathon’s office manager. You work directly for Mr. Lumin, too?” Rose asks the pretty red-head.

“My official capacity has me managing Jonathon’s entire floor. All information systems flow through me; all documents are tracked by me, all files. But on occasion, I do special work for Mr. Lumin. No one knows the systems like I do and he likes to bypass the nonsense of regular channels sometimes,” she explains casually. “Plus I don’t whinge about coming in after hours. He pays double time. Triple time on on-call nights.”

“It’s lovely up here,” Rose says changing the subject. She’s always been uncomfortable talking about money, mostly because she’s never had much of it. “All these plants.”

“Oh, it’s a veritable jungle,” Donna says pushing at the fronds of a large-leafed tree in an elaborate pot. “It drives the maintenance staff barmy. Hugo says if he’d wanted to be a gardener he wouldn’t have gone into janitorial services, but he loves it here as much as we all do.”

“Hugo?”

“He’s head of maintenance for the complex. Mr. Lumin believes in keeping a living environment inside. There are birds and butterflies in the atrium next building over. It’s a good place to go for thinking or for eating lunch when the cafeteria is too loud to concentrate. A lot of our dreamers go there. I imagine you will.”

“I will?” Rose is beginning to feel like a parrot, repeating Donna’s words like this.

“When you come to work here after graduation,” Donna explains.

“Assuming I get hired, you mean,” Rose corrects.

Donna tilts her head. “You do know that no one else has ever received the Illuminate Young Minds scholarship four years running, don’t you? Some students manage two; most only one. Mr. Lumin has quite the keen interest in you, Rose. You’ll be asked on, don’t you worry about that.”

Rose frowns. “I guess Professor Cullen, my robotics professor, did make a huge fuss over me because I kept getting that,” she admits. “I didn’t realize. I was just so happy to have earned it so I could keep going to school.”

“Yes, I remember those days. Scraping by to put myself through college and then ending up temping for years when technology advanced in a direction I didn’t study in. Of course, I’m happy now. I love my job here. Mr. Lumin is a very good man to work for. A very good man, period,” Donna says in a tone that makes Rose wonder at precisely the relationship the woman might have with Mr. Lumin. Not that it’s her business.

“It’s a funny old world,” Donna says. “I never dreamed that Jonathon’s Rose could be the same Rose Mr. Lumin’s mentioned keeping an eye on. Should have. It’d take a girl like that to catch his eye.”

“Dunno about that,” Rose says. “Caught his eye when all he knew of me was that I was a shop girl.”

“I’m sure that’s not what kept it though.”

Rose blushes and seeking to change the subject fingers a big purple flower on one of the plants. It looks like an orchid but it’s the size of Rose’s head. “What is this?” she asks Donna.

“Something from the South American Conglomerate. A region called Alagoas. It’s a state in Brazil, I think. It was grown from seed after the 2003 fire that took out much of the remaining Mata Atlantica rain forest; what wasn’t already given over to the growing of sugar cane. Most of the plants here are rescued, endangered species. It’s a type of orchid, cattleya labiata. No one’s ever grown one with flowers this large. But Mr. Lumin has a spectacular green thumb. He can make anything grow,” Donna tells her.

“You sure know a lot about plants,” Rose comments.

“Only the special ones up here. I’ve done the research on their growing requirements for Mr. Lumin,” Donna says with a shrug. “Lots of useless information tucked away up here,” she adds pointing to her head. “But what Mr. Lumin wants, Mr. Lumin gets. It’s all part of the job.”

“Sounds rather demanding,” Rose replies.

“Sounds it. Surprisingly, it’s not.”

The door behind them opens and Jonathon emerges, a curious look on his face, as if he’s contemplating a puzzle. He smiles happily when he catches sight of Rose again and strides quickly to her side, capturing her hand as if he missed holding it rather desperately while they were parted.

“All done?” she asks him.

“Yep,” he replies. “He’s going to be out of the office for a few days and he has a specific project he wants me working on while he’s gone.”

“All right, come on,” Donna says. “I’ll let you back out of the building.”

The trip down in the lift is a quiet one and at the door to the courtyard Jonathon pauses. “We can walk you to your car if you like,” he tells Donna.

“Oh,” she replies. “I’m not done here. Mr. Lumin and I have unfinished business. I’ll probably just bed down in one of the overnight rooms. See you in the morning, yeah?”

“Okay.”

“Lovely to meet you, Rose.”

“You, too, Donna,” Rose replies.

Donna locks the door behind them and they make their way across the deserted campus and back to the car park. When they arrive at the car, Rose realizes that Jonathon is very distracted when he doesn’t even try to kiss her, just opens the door for her and hands her inside. She hopes the rest of the evening doesn’t go the same way. She was rather looking forward to a bit more kissing. She blushes at the thought of what his kisses do to her.

Jonathon backs out of the parking lot and pulls up to the guard. Rose signs out and he drives the short distance to his apartment building. It’s not long before they are on the lift, then on the sixth floor and entering his flat. Although he is still holding her hand, Jonathon is a million miles away.

“Hey,” she says softly, “I’d like you here with me.”

He turns into her then and snags an arm around her waist, pulling her up against him. “Sorry, Rose,” he says. “Sometimes when my mind gets going on an invention I lose focus on other things. But I promise, for the rest of the night, all of my focus is on you.” And the intensity of his regard is suddenly almost too much.

Her hands slide across his chest and then hook up behind his neck and he leans down and gives her a gentle kiss. It is not nearly as fiery or as passionate as his previous ones and she finds herself a bit disappointed as he pulls away. “We need to talk about sleeping arrangements,” he tells her.

“And sleepwear. I have nothing to sleep in,” she replies.

A slow smile washes across his face and his eyes darken. “Oh, I don’t mind that idea at all. You sleeping in nothing.”

Rose breaks away from him and smacks his arm lightly. “Not gonna happen any time soon. Now, do you have something I can borrow to sleep in?”

He walks into the bedroom and she follows him and sits down on the bed while he roots around in the bureau. He holds up a t-shirt hopefully. “That’s barely long enough to cover my bum,” Rose complains.

“Kind of the point,” he says and he has that look on his face again, the one that says he wants to strip her naked and make love to her right this minute.

“Jonathon,” she growls. He sighs and turns back to the dresser and pulls out a pair of pajamas. He hands them to her. “Thank you,” she says. She stands up and goes on tiptoe to kiss him on the cheek. She heads into the bathroom to change, hesitating before choosing not to lock the door behind her. She trusts him not to invade her privacy.

She can’t help but wonder what it would be like if he did, though. If he were to suddenly barge in on her while she was stripping off her clothes, how his hands would seek to touch her exposed skin, pull her body into his, explore what he had so far not done. “Stop it,” she says.

“Rose? You say something?” Jonathon asks from the other side of the door.

“Sorry, just talking to myself,” she says. “I’ll be out in a minute.” She finishes removing her clothes and slips the long button down pajama top over her head, snaking into it and wiggling it into place. She pulls on the bottoms but they are hopelessly too long for her so she takes them back off and folds them again. At least the shirt goes to mid-thigh.

She looks at herself in the mirror. The top button of the pajamas is quite low, made to be worn by a man. The top of her cleavage is very visible, but not indecently so. She’s shown far more than that in some of her every day tops. Still, this feels different. She’s about to step out into this man’s bedroom half dressed. This man who has declared his intention to take her as his lover when she’s ready. Nothing else in her life has ever felt quite so scary. Not even giving it up to Jimmy Stone.

Not that she has any intention of having sex with Jonathon tonight, but she is well aware of the situation she is in. If she didn’t feel a deep and instinctive trust for the man, well, she’d be sleeping in the loo with the door locked all night. As it is, she wonders if it’d be safe to share a bed with him, or will that be pushing things too far? Teasing him too much?

Rose sighs and pulls the clips out of her hair. The locks tumble down, settling well past her shoulders and she picks up his hair brush. “Jonathon? Can I use your hair brush?” she asks him.

“Of course,” the reply comes through the door. “There’s a spare toothbrush in the second drawer, too. And a few other things you’re welcome to use.”

She smiles. Using the brush feels almost more intimate than anything she’s done in regards to him before; almost more intimate than kissing. Almost, but not quite. When she finishes she roots around in the drawer and finds the toothbrush. She makes quick work of her teeth and rinses the brush. Shyly she places it beside his in the brush stand and her heart skips a little beat as they sit there side by side looking for all the world like the belong together.

Rose tells herself to stop being so silly, that there’s nothing romantic about toothbrushes next to each other in a cobalt blue plastic stand. Only thing is, that's not all she’d noticed in the second drawer. There is an unopened bottle of women’s deodorant and small containers of hand lotion and moisturizer, a lady’s razor, shaving gel, body wash, facial wash, hair gel, hairspray, shampoo and conditioner. And because he’s told her he hasn’t slept with a woman since his wife died, she’s sure those little toiletries were bought with her in mind. She uses what she needs and neatly tucks everything back away trying not to think about what it means that he’s already made a drawer for her in his bathroom.



At last Rose emerges from the bathroom, her clothes in a neat little bundle that she clutches to her chest. She looks around the room and then sets them down on the top of the bureau before turning to look at Jonathon. She hands him the pajama bottoms. “These were too big,” she says by way of explanation.

He is sitting on the edge of the bed, still fully clothed, his eyes on her. Or more accurately her legs. The pajama shirt she is wearing gives him rather a long expanse to study. His eyes drift all the way down to her bare feet with their shiny painted red toenails, and then begin the slow climb back up her body, resting a moment on the exposed cleavage of the low neckline, before rising to her face.

“You still look good in my clothes,” he says throatily. Though not as good, he thinks, as you would look out of them.

“About the sleeping arrangements,” she begins hesitantly sitting down on the bed beside him. Her hand reaches for his and their fingers lace together.

“Rose, I don’t expect anything from you tonight,” he tells her soothingly. “I know you’re not ready to sleep with me. I’ve got my sleeping bag. I’ll be in the other room. You can have the bed.”

“I don’t want to chase you out of your own bed. Let me take the sleeping bag,” she says in protest.

“You’re my guest, Rose. Besides, I like the idea of you sleeping in my bed, even if I don’t get to share it with you,” he says huskily.

“Maybe…” She pauses, huffs out a breath of air, looks anywhere but at him.

“What?”

“Well, I…I wouldn’t mind, you know, just…just…sharing the bed. Just to sleep.” She raises her eyes to his. “Would that be all right? Would it be too hard on you?” she asks earnestly.

Jonathon’s eyes widen. He doesn’t care how hard it is on him, or for that matter how hard it makes him. The chance to sleep in the same bed with Rose, even with nothing happening, is too good to pass up.

“I think I can manage to control myself,” he says dryly. “But, Rose…are you sure?”

“Yes,” she says quickly as if trying to get the word out before she changes her mind. He studies her face looking for any sign of doubt or uncertainty. “I’m sure,” she says more firmly.

“Okay, then.” He lets go of her hand and rises from the bed and taking the pajama bottoms with him walks into the loo. He does his evening ablutions then dresses in the pajamas. He doesn’t normally wear the top to bed anyway and hopes that Rose won’t read anything into it when he appears only half dressed.

He brushes his teeth thoroughly, hoping for a bit more kissing before they go to sleep, and grins foolishly at her toothbrush in the holder, then chides himself for being so silly. He opens the bottom drawer of the cabinet double checking that that is where he put the condoms he bought when he had purchased all the toiletries for Rose. He knows the chance is slim to none that he will be using one any time soon, but on the off chance that Rose loses control and jumps him, at least he’s one hundred percent sure of where they are.

When he reenters the bedroom Rose is already in bed, the blankets pulled up above her chest. Her arms are on either side of her, tucking the duvet close to her body protectively. Her face is set tight. Even though this was her suggestion she is obviously scared.

He decides not to push things by asking for a good-night kiss. Instead he slides into bed beside her and turns out the lamp. “Night, Rose,” he says softly.

“Night, Jonathon,” she whispers back to him. Silence fills the room and he thinks that maybe she has dropped off to sleep. He contemplates the day’s events, the date, the wonderful kissing, the explosion, and the meeting with Lumin. He thinks about everything except the fact that he’s in bed with Rose, that she is a mere two feet from him, and that his body is aching to curl around hers.

Then her fingers find his in the dark and curl around them. And he finds himself grinning into the blackness. And it’s enough, more than enough, that Rose Tyler lies in bed beside him and holds his hand.

Ch. 12:  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/131351.html 
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Date: 2008-09-04 07:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hermya.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwww!!! That last bit is ssssooooo sweet!!

I love this chapter, well done!

Date: 2008-09-04 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hermya.livejournal.com
And I got first comment! :D

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Date: 2008-09-04 07:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inwe-amandil.livejournal.com
Lovely chapter as always, though I fear this may be becoming my new addiction. :) correct me if I'm wrong though but I think at the end you meant Lumin not Lumic?

Date: 2008-09-04 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, if it is an addiction, there are many right there in line with you waiting for their next fix. *grins* Glad you are enjoying it so much. Yeah, thanks on the typo, I corrected it.

Date: 2008-09-04 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com
Awwwwww! I love how they're both so moved by their toothbrushes sitting side-by-side! And of course, I love the final line. *le sigh* So glad you were finally able to get past the trouble on this one! *applause* Can't wait for the next, as always! :D ♥!

Date: 2008-09-04 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yeah, they are both such romantics at heart and the really like the little things like that. So do I, of course. Jonathon really does get goofy about holding Rose's hand, doesn't he? That's a definite leftover from being the Doctor. Good news is I'm 2200 words into chapter 12 so we're looking at Friday night if all continues to go well.

Date: 2008-09-04 08:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicis-anatomy.livejournal.com
Hm, interesting ... So Lumin isn't from earth? Well, I didn't see this coming. Now I'm curious what he told Jonathon that distracted him from Rose.
The chapter was great and sweet. The last part was just ... lovely. All the small bits and pieces Rose discovers in the bathroom, the toothbrushes, the sleeping arrangement, sharing pajamas, and finally her hand finding his. Those two are so meant to be! And I'm glad they already knew this :)

Date: 2008-09-04 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Nope. He's a being made out of pure light energy that has the ability to transform into a human as needed. Jonathon is thinking over the problem of adapting one of his inventions. I'll go into that more in chapter 13.

Glad you liked the sweetness between them. Sometimes I worry that it's a little too much but then I think, no, it's Rose and Jonathon. This is how they are.

Date: 2008-09-04 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uglytomboy.livejournal.com
Beyond sweet. I can only aspire to be this talented at writing. Loved it :)

Date: 2008-09-04 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. You're very kind.

Date: 2008-09-04 09:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salimali.livejournal.com
Woah! Lumin-alien! I didn't see that one coming! And what is he keeping down in the vaults? I'm assuming thats what he's asked Jonathon to work on, must be something big for Jonathon to be so distracted. Also Lumin knows something's not right with Jonathon, I hope he doesn't say anything. Earlier in comments you said Jonathon wouldn't regain his memories, I'm falling on the side of him not regaining them just being a magnificent human being.
The last paragraph was just beautiful, but my bets are on them waking up all curlied into each other *ahh*

I'm glad you got over your problems with this chapter, it was brilliant x

Date: 2008-09-04 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Nope. Most people were convinced he was John Lumic even though I kept saying he wasn't and that his name was a clue. As for what is in the vaults, that will gradually become clear. He is the protector, the guardian of it, sworn to keep it safe until such time as it is needed.

Jonathon will not have full memory recall. He will have flashes of insight from time to time that are very Doctor, but he and Rose and Donna and Lumin will be dealing with this without Time Lord ingenuity.

As for how they wake up, well...there will definitely be a lot closer in the bed than when they fall asleep. Hee. And thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Date: 2008-09-04 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackcat-1.livejournal.com
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I squeed out loud when I saw you'd posted this! Oh, love, love, love. The developments are intriguing and I adore the characterisations. More please!

Date: 2008-09-04 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins*. Glad you enjoyed. And I'm well into chapter 12. At this rate I should be done by sometime on Friday.

Date: 2008-09-04 11:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostwolfchats.livejournal.com
Sigh. So sweet.

Date: 2008-09-04 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2008-09-04 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebeccaclark.livejournal.com
Loving this absolutely to pieces and back. We can has more soon plz?

Date: 2008-09-04 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Yeah, probably Friday. Ch. 12 is going very well. And is kind of sexy.

Date: 2008-09-04 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonmom64.livejournal.com
Mmmmm.....such sweetness to start my day....

So Lumin is an alien...but who is after him? Reminded me a bit of the Family, except they weren't that destructive...

Date: 2008-09-04 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, I've named the aliens that are after Lumin's charge. They are the Caligo (from the Latin) and are, well, rather caliginous. They are quite destructive also. Some of it a by-product of what they are, but some of it is quite deliberate.

Date: 2008-09-04 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nattieb.livejournal.com
*sigh* you have managed to make toothbrushes romantic, how do you do that?

And Donna for the win. Love that lady.

Date: 2008-09-04 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*giggles* I dunno. But I like taking little things like that and giving them significance in a romance. It's fun. Donna is the awesome in any universe.

Date: 2008-09-04 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunnytyler001.livejournal.com
Awwww!!! Such a lovely ending!

Date: 2008-09-04 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2008-09-04 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com
Lovely, lovely chapter! But ... WHO is Lumin? Sounds like a friendly shape-shifter!

*Hugs*

Date: 2008-09-04 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Lumin is a being made entirely of light energy. He has the ability to shift into human form by transforming his energy into matter for several hours at a time before he must shift back into his natural state to recover.

Date: 2008-09-04 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morrighangw.livejournal.com
Aww!!! They are seriously too adorable in that last scene.

Date: 2008-09-04 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thanks.

Date: 2008-09-04 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hezmanagirl.livejournal.com
Whoa! Very interesting twist with Lumin. Perfect name btw - Lumin = light alien. I like that!

Another great chapter and even more UST!

Date: 2008-09-04 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yep. I've said from the start there was a reason his name was part of Illuminate. *grins* Glad you like it. Thank you. And wait until you see the sexual tension in the next chapter. Hee. It gets a little sexy there for a bit.

Date: 2008-09-04 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tookieknits.livejournal.com
Awww! They're both so entranced by the toothbrushes next to each other. That's adorable!
Lumin...Hmmm....I can't wait to find out what he is.

Date: 2008-09-04 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*giggles* Yep. These two want domestic with each other quite badly and what's more domestic than that? Hee. Lumin is a being made up of light energy. He can transform into matter for several hours at a time and appear human. He's the good guy.

Date: 2008-09-04 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prynne12.livejournal.com
I very rarely comment, but I love this fic--and I gotta wonder, how is it that them NOT making love is really almost as hot as the inevitable smut chapter is going to be?

Date: 2008-09-04 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. It's a process of drawing it out and building up the anticipation, I imagine. And often kissing is so sensual to write about it can be the best part of smut scenes anyway. And also, just to let you know, it will be smut chapters, plural, the first time they make love. *grins*

Date: 2008-09-04 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soupforlife.livejournal.com
This was a very sweet chapter and you have set the storyline up nicely concerning Lumin. Although I wouldn't complain if we had nothing but Rose and Jonathan. I look forward to the next update and hope that sharing a bed hasn't been too hard for them!

Date: 2008-09-04 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Well, nothing but Rose and Jonathon would mean I'd have a very hard time drawing out the sexual tension because all they'd want to do is jump each other, though come to think of it that's still pretty much all they want to do. Hee. Well, I think sharing a bed is going to be quite the interesting experience, especially for poor Jonathon. *giggles* Let's just say I'm having a lot of fun writing chapter 12.

Date: 2008-09-04 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epiphany-gun.livejournal.com
Nice. You really are going to drag it out and make us wait for the sexing aren't you?

Date: 2008-09-04 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks. For the actual sex? Yes. For sexiness and groping? There's quite a bit of that in the next chapter. *grins*

Date: 2008-09-04 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] electrictoes.livejournal.com
This so brilliant. Worth waiting all day for, I saw the update at work and had to wait until now before I could read it.

I loved that they both noticed the toothbrush thing. So cute.

Date: 2008-09-04 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad it was worth waiting for. Glad you liked the toothbrush thing. That seems to have gone over quite well.

Date: 2008-09-04 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heather916.livejournal.com
Hmmm... it seems my suspicions about Lumin might not be too far off the mark...

And I love the ending. He is too sweet. And so is she.

This chapter is wonderful! This story has definitely become my new obsession.

Date: 2008-09-04 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Well, he is the good guy. He's definitely not evil. Glad you liked the sweetness and the story.

Date: 2008-09-04 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taliah-rose.livejournal.com
Oh this chapter was just scrummy! I'm facinated to see where you're going with this, I just LOVE IT!

Date: 2008-09-04 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. There'll be adventure, excitement and really wild things (to quote Douglas Adams). Oh, yeah, and lots of smut, eventually.

Date: 2008-09-04 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maniacalshen.livejournal.com
It's so hard not to grin stupidly when they're both so excited about their tooth brushes sitting side by side. Because it's ADORABLE. XD

Date: 2008-09-04 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Go ahead. Grin stupidly. I won't stop you. *laughs*

Sweeet!

Date: 2008-09-04 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phoenixfire9266.livejournal.com
The Cute Factor is also very high in this chapter... I love the romance and sweetness... Jonathon is a very adorable man... But, he would be different, wouldn't he?? Even though he doesn't remember, he is part Time Lord... hmmm.... i'll have to think on that for a bit!

Lovely as always...

Re: Sweeet!

Date: 2008-09-04 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
He's like the Doctor without the hang ups or inhibitions. There was always a lot of sweetness between him and Rose as either Nine or Ten. I like to bring that out to a more human degree here. *grins* But he will have the Storm in him. We see it to a small extent when others hit on Rose, but it'll come out full force the first time her life is threatened. Trust me.

Re: Sweeet!

From: [identity profile] phoenixfire9266.livejournal.com - Date: 2008-09-06 03:31 am (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2008-09-04 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctorsdiva.livejournal.com
Can't stop smiling - Romance is not dead, it just keeps spilling out of your brilliant brain, through your brilliant fingers and into your incandescent fic.

Date: 2008-09-04 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Nope, romance is very much alive! Thank you.
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