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Title:  The Most Important Woman in the Universe (1/1)
Author:  Amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Donna Noble, Ninth Doctor/Rose Tyler, Jack Harkness
Genre:  Genfic, fluff, tiny touch of angst
Beta:  [livejournal.com profile] amyo67 
Rating:  PG
Summary:  Donna Noble crosses paths with a slightly unusul trio at a London café.  Set after Journey's End for Donna and before Boomtown for Nine, Rose and Jack.
A/N:  This fic is a birthday gift for [profile] ageless_aislynn.  Happy Birthday, hon!
 

The Most Important Woman in the Universe

 

 

Donna Noble is sitting down eating her lunch in one of the best underrated little restaurants in London and minding her own business when she sees them standing outside. She knows the grumpy, funny looking older man—well, older than her by a good five years—isn’t someone she’s ever seen before, so why does something in his bearing seem so familiar? He’s trailing two companions, a bottled blonde girl in a threadbare denim skirt and a brilliant scarf who can’t be more than twenty and a dark-haired, dimpled man who rings just about every bell she owns and a few more she might have to install just for him.

 

She watches curiously as the girl takes the hand of the man in the leather jacket and swings it back and forth, smiling cajolingly up at him and pointing across the street. For a moment it looks like she’s pointing straight at Donna, but it’s the café she’s pointing out. The man glances across and then back at the girl and his irritation seems to fade away in the face of her smile. When his own blinding grin comes out it’s like sunlight breaking through a storm cloud and it suddenly dawns on her that he’s actually very beautiful with his rough, chiseled features.

 

From the way he looks at the girl it’s obvious that she has him wrapped around her little finger.  From the way she looks back it’s obvious that she’s more than just a little bit in love with the man and when she turns away to say something to Dimples it becomes clear that Leather Jacket is in so deep he’ll never get out again, but doesn’t want the other two to know it. Donna smiles into her coffee. She loves people watching, making up back stories about them, and rearranging their lives without them ever knowing about it. She sighs. It was something she used to do with…with…

 

She rubs at her forehead as a painful flash of a headache comes on and she quickly grabs for her purse. The doctor told her to take one of her pills at the start of one of these migraines and so she pops open the bottle and swallows one down with a mouthful of too hot coffee. What had she been thinking about? Oh, they’re coming into the café. She straightens herself around and smoothes down her hair, then adjusts her breasts making sure they’re even and she’s showing just the right amount of cleavage. Leather Jacket and Blondie are obviously besotted with each other but she might just happen to catch the eye of Dimples. A few minutes of silent flirting will go a long way towards improving her day.

"Told you we'd find it," Leather Jacket says.

"I found it," Blondie corrects him.  "Your sense of direction is nearly as rubbish as your driving skills."

"Oi!" He scowls until she turns her smile on him again and he softens in the face of it.

They order a bunch of food at the cash register and settle at a table diagonal to hers a few minutes later with three loaded trays. Dimples and the girl sit next to each other facing her, and Leather Jacket sits across from the girl holding her hand across the table. She likes this set up as it means she has an unimpeded view of Dimples. Up close he is even more gorgeous than she thought and when he catches her staring unabashedly at him, he gives her a slow, sensual grin. Donna blushes from the sheer heat of his smile and looks out the window.

 

Her eyes are magnetically drawn back to him. He really is beautiful. She takes another sip of coffee and when he gives her a rather lusty wink her hand clenches the little polystyrene cup so hard it breaks. Hot coffee spills all over her hand. “Ow,” she cries out, trying to stuff the burned digits into her mouth.

 

Dimples is up in a flash, cold water in one hand and a serviette in the other. He sits down in the chair across from hers and wipes the spilled coffee off her hand, dipping her fingers into his water glass. “You okay?” he asks and his accent is shockingly American.

 

“Just a bit burnt,” she manages to say. Her eyes meet his and she knows she could get lost in them for days. He’s so gorgeous up close that she would swoon if she were that sort of a woman. She might just do it anyway for the fun of it. She shakes her head as Leather Jacket and Blondie crowd around with concern.

 

“You all right?” the girl asks and the genuine sympathy in her eyes touches something deep inside Donna’s heart. Something tells her this little girl is going to get her heart horribly broken one day and there will be absolutely nothing that Leather Jacket can do to stop it from happening.  She has a feeling it'll somehow be even worse for him. She sighs.

 

“Yeah, fine,” she says. She pulls her hand out of the water. “No harm done, see? Only a little pink.”

 

“Can I buy you another coffee?” he asks and that flirty smile is back.

 

“Anytime you want, gorgeous,” she responds and he laughs heartily.

 

Leather Jacket rolls his eyes and tugs Blondie back to their table muttering something that sounds like but can't possibly be, "Intergalactic playboy," while Dimples heads to the counter and orders her another drink. When he returns he says, “You struck me as a chocolate kind of girl.” He puts the drink down in front of her. “I’m Jack, by the way.”

 

“Donna,” she says. They make polite chit chat, but everything the man says is actually laden with intense innuendo. She’s just considering whether or not she’s going to be lucky enough to get lucky with him when Leather Jacket stands up.

 

“We need to get going, Jack.”

 

Jack frowns at the older man but one look at his face has him jumping to his feet. “Right, Doc,” he says.  He smiles down at her. “Don’t suppose you’ll give me your number? Let me call you the next time I’m in town.”

 

Despite her better judgment she writes it down on the sales slip that came with her meal and hands it over. “Come on, Jack,” the man he’d called Doc says from the doorway.

 

“You are bound and determined to spoil all my fun today,” Jack complains good-naturedly as he heads to the front door.

 

“More like every day,” the girl pipes up. “So where to now? I thought we were going to meet the most important woman in the universe today.”

 

Jack heads through the door first and Leather Jacket holds it for Blondie. He looks at her like she’s daft. “What have I told you about false expectations, Rose? You just did.” The door slams shut behind him and Donna sits there gaping after them. He can’t possibly mean…there is no way he can mean…her. Can he?

 

Nah, that’s just nuts. She sits at the little table sipping her mocha and wishing that just for once, just this once, something like that could be true. She glances down at her watch. Lunch break is over. Time to get back to it. As she exits the building she can’t help but turn her head sharply as an achingly familiar noise echoes down the street. It’s a noise that haunts her dreams, but just like in those dreams, when she turns to look there’s nothing there to see.

 

She shakes herself and heads back to work. She’s working as a temp at a place called U.N.I.T. It’s only her first day but she thinks she’s going to like it there.


 
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Date: 2009-07-08 07:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] catyuy.livejournal.com
Oh this is wonderful.

Date: 2009-07-08 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2009-07-08 07:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazypenguin09.livejournal.com
OMG!
word do not express the amount of awesome in this story,
bravo, well done, bravo

Date: 2009-07-08 08:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you. And I love your icon.

Date: 2009-07-08 08:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thette.livejournal.com
No fair, you had me crying and laughing at once.

(Though I did wonder how exactly Nine knew Donna was the most important woman in the universe, but then I decided Rose wanted to meet her, and he let the TARDIS find her.)

Date: 2009-07-08 08:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Well, that makes me happy, if I can bring up both emotions in one brief little ficlet. That's exactly it. The TARDIS knew where to find her.

Date: 2009-07-08 08:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostwolfchats.livejournal.com
Lovely - althoguh I don't understand how Nine knew about Donna... but nevermind! I'm glad she's working for UNIT :-D

Date: 2009-07-08 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Nine knew the most important woman in the universe existed. Not quite the same thing as knowing about Donna. Rose wanted to meet her, so the Doctor asked the TARDIS to find "the most important woman in the universe." Far be it for Nine to question the TARDIS's judgment or deny Rose anything.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mitashade.livejournal.com
Awwwww I love it. :)

Date: 2009-07-08 10:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lorelaisquared.livejournal.com
Brilliant! I adored this. I'm fascinated by Donna post JE and I really like what you did with this. Plus, flirting with Jack was priceless. Heartbreaking and hilarious at the same time. I'd love to see a sequel to this. Awesome work.

Date: 2009-07-08 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
I'd like to think Donna has found her niche, found some way to be amazing all on her own, because she deserves to have that in her life. And I loved making her and Jack flirt. Normally I don't write Donna that way with Jack. Usually she's all, "Knock it off, Sunshine, and put your clothes back on. I've got better things to do than you." But this was fun. Thank you.

Date: 2009-07-08 11:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctorsdiva.livejournal.com
Fabulous. I'm writing Jack at the moment. He really is a brilliant character and full of hidden depths - none of which he showed here *sniggers* just his wonderful sexy self. Post JE Donna is a real enigma and I love your take on her. *sighs happily*

Date: 2009-07-08 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*giggles* Nope. Nothing beyond the basic what you see is what you get model. Deep Jack is reserved for epic fics. *laughs* Besides, Donna isn't looking for hidden depths at the moment!

Date: 2009-07-08 11:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mkejenkins.livejournal.com
That's so beautiful.

Achingly poignent

Date: 2009-07-08 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. It's weird to write fluffy and sad at the same time like this.

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Date: 2009-07-08 11:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] captain91.livejournal.com
oh! oh! i love it
the timey-whimeyness, especially with jack, is fabulous

thanks for a bit of fluff. i needed it!

Date: 2009-07-08 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. Jack and Donna would have owned the universe given half a chance.

Date: 2009-07-08 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kholly.livejournal.com
Oh, young Jack flirting with Donna, what a great idea. She deserves that kind of attention even if nothing can come of it.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Exactly! It may violate all of my head canon to date, but it was fun to write the flirting.

Date: 2009-07-08 12:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sapphire-child.livejournal.com
Oh. Oh. Oh. This is wonderful, seeing S1 era Nine/Rose/Jack interacting with Donna! I especially love Donna's take on Rose and how smitten she is with Jack XD nothing much changes eh?

Loved it loved it loved it.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Donna was a very clever observer of character and I think she would have seen clearly through all three of them right down to their hearts.

Date: 2009-07-08 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittykat2305.livejournal.com
I loved this one, I always love Jack and Donna was my favorite.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Donna is very much missed around here. And I love writing the lightness of season one Jack.

Date: 2009-07-08 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com
Love it. Sweet and a little sad, and oh, so very *them*. Loved Donna's observations on my favorite TARDIS trio. Just lovely.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Donna's a good judge of character. I think she's see them for exactly what they are. *smiles*

Date: 2009-07-08 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melnay13.livejournal.com
:D

I so ship Donna/Jack, lol.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* I normally don't. My head canon says that Jack is actually Donna's descendent but I thought I'd throw that out the window for this fic.

Date: 2009-07-08 03:29 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] scarfman

Very nice.

I too have used that title for a Donna story.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I like yours. Donna would make a great mother.

Date: 2009-07-08 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hazelwho.livejournal.com
This was fantastic! I love Donna, and seeing her with 9, Jack, and Rose was a real treat. I loved her observations on Team Tardis, especially this:

From the way she looks back it’s obvious that she’s more than just a little bit in love with the man and when she turns away to say something to Dimples it becomes clear that Leather Jacket is in so deep he’ll never get out again, but doesn’t want the other two to know it.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
The four of them would have made an awesome Team TARDIS. I would have loved they way she'd change the dynamics on board. Thank you.

Date: 2009-07-08 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] demeter918.livejournal.com
Oh dear. Okay, that hurt a little. But it was a wonderful hurt!

Date: 2009-07-08 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I suppose anything with Donna after JE has to have a touch of angst in it, doesn't it?

Date: 2009-07-08 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amyo67.livejournal.com
I know I told you in beta, but I really love this.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you, sweetie.

Date: 2009-07-08 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctor10-crazt.livejournal.com
Oh, that was brilliant! I love it!

Date: 2009-07-08 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks, hon.

Date: 2009-07-08 07:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spiritofeowyn.livejournal.com
Lovely. :D No way 9 could have known but lovely all the same. Donna is rather perceptive.

Date: 2009-07-08 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, my theory is that Rose wanted to meet the most important woman in the universe so she asked Nine and Nine asked the TARDIS to find her and take them there. For once the TARDIS got it right (because the TARDIS would know the importance of this woman) and took them to the right place and once they got inside Nine would have sensed her importance to time and space but not why. But that's all back story since this is Donna's point of view.

Date: 2009-07-08 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] funniefriend.livejournal.com
Amazing! You are brilliant! Love it like coffee and chocolate and cookies and ice cream! Beautiful

Date: 2009-07-08 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad you liked the story so much. *smiles*

Lovely

Date: 2009-07-09 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com
That was great! I loved the 'characterizations' by Donna...Dimples and Leather Jacket et al :)

Re: Lovely

Date: 2009-07-09 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Well, you just know she's take the most striking thing about them all so she'd know what to call them in her head as she was figuring them out. Thank you.

Date: 2009-07-09 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com
*SQUEE!* Oh, that's wonderful! \o/ Donna and Nine and Rose and Jack, eeee!!! I love it so much, thank you, thank you, thank you!!! *bounces excitedly*

I love this glimpse into both Donna post-JE (working for U.N.I.T., yay!) as well as Nine, Rose and Jack pre-Boomtown (which seemed like such a great, fun time for them ;) ). And I just love Nine acknowledging Donna as the most important woman in the universe! *sniffles a bit* And of course I adore the way Donna observes all of their interactions and how she characterizes their relationship: Leather Jacket and Blondie are obviously besotted with each other. Trufax, Donna, trufax. *nods* ;)

a dark-haired, dimpled man who rings just about every bell she owns and a few more she might have to install just for him

Hee!

When his own blinding grin comes out it’s like sunlight breaking through a storm cloud and it suddenly dawns on her that he’s actually very beautiful with his rough, chiseled features.

Awww, that's SO true! *draws hearts around Nine* ♥!

Thank you again so very much! :D *huge hugs!* ♥♥♥!!!

Date: 2009-07-09 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
You're welcome, hon. I just really loved the idea of the four of them all being in the same room. Glad you liked it.

Date: 2009-07-09 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pncwho.livejournal.com
Lovely story! I liked Donna's nicknames and observations of the TARDIS crew. And I really like that Donna's working with UNIT now; maybe eventually she'll regain her memories?

Date: 2009-07-09 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
I don't know if she should or not, but at least she's in a place where her life won't languish so much and maybe she can make a difference.

Date: 2009-07-09 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] michellemtsu.livejournal.com
I loved this. Jack and Donna are too adorable. But Jack and anyone is pretty adorable. ;)

Great job!

Date: 2009-07-09 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I like writing any interaction between Jack and Donna. They were robbed of any significant screen time and I would have loved to see them together more.
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