Finding Home

[amberfocus]

A/N:  Rose/Nine smut drabble for Wiggiemomsi.  First try at a smut drabble.  Not as easy as it looks.  100 words in Word.

Heated fingers dance across the smooth skin of his belly, eager in their need to stroke the expanse she has laid bare. He thinks to protest, to stop her, but then lips follow hands and he knows no protest will ever leave his mouth. Her tongue trails down and he gasps in surprise as fingers quickly rid him of garments that hinder her exploration. And then she is rising above him, taking him into her body and setting him free of every limit he has ever imposed upon them. He thrusts into her, knows he finally has found home again.

Comments

[butterflyborn.livejournal.com]

Love the icon! *giggle* And by the way, YOU ROCK! succinct AND sensual. full of feeling and so vivid. :-) *happy sigh*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

The icon is bysidewalk_doctor and is probably my favorite Nine/Rose icon that I have other than this one. Yours is pretty fabulous, too, very pretty. And I'm glad you liked the drabble.

[fl-travelgirl.livejournal.com]

I agree about the icon. Hubba hubba :)

Wonderful first try at smut drabble. Almost reads like you've been doing it for awhile. Congratulations! Can't wait to read more. :)

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I haven't been, but I've been reading Lillibet's since she started doing them and wanted to try one.

[honorh.livejournal.com]

It's like you've been learning at the feet of Lillibet. Nine/Rose smut drabbles FTW!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Oh, I have. Actually all of my smut writing is probably a direct result of studying the way she wrote hers, first with her F***let Universe and then her smut drabbles. Gave me the courage to try it. I used to be very uncomfortable even making an attempt, and always faded to black, but I've got the method now, I think.

[wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com]

For MEEEEEE? And a new, *really cool* Rose/Nine icon, too!

HotHotHot! The tastiest little appetizer I've EVER had!

*Does HappyHappy Smut Dance*

Now ... when's dinner?

*Hugs*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Well, I said I would. *grins* Dinner's coming. *snorts immaturely*

[dragonmom64.livejournal.com]

Oh...Well Done! Conveys a lot of hotness...even at only 100 words....phew!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you. It was fun to write.

[nina-ds.livejournal.com]

Heated fingers dance across the smooth skin of his belly,

That's the hottest phrase in the whole thing - sometimes I think with these short pieces, it's all about getting the first and the last bits right. Yes, you've got to get the middle right in terms of rhythm and flow, but the anchor points are really key.

Trying not to fixate on that tattoo shot from Linda Green...

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thanks. *grins* I've had that phrase running around in my head for a couple of days now.