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The fic I'm working on, and yes, I know I'm not supposed to be typing (it's mostly one-handed typing), just spat out a horrible line and I had to share it...

The music swelled around them and the Doctor swelled against her.

Oh, yes, I do produce some smarmy lines from time to time.  It has now, thankfully, been deleted.  Well, the music is still swelling.  The Doctor's swelling will be handled differently.  Erm...perhaps not handled...just yet.  Bad Lisa.  Stop punning.

Amy, I shall have fic for you to beta tonight if you're around.
 

Date: 2009-04-24 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostwolfchats.livejournal.com
OMG!!

I'll blame the pain, because... *snorts*

Date: 2009-04-24 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildwinterwitch.livejournal.com
*chokes on her yoghurt*

Date: 2009-04-24 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amyo67.livejournal.com
That is a funny, if bad line.
ANd yes I will be around, I am having serious Lisa withdrawals.*giggles*
I hope your hand is feeling a bit better and that all is well with the family.

*hugs you*
Edited Date: 2009-04-24 07:07 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-04-24 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salimali.livejournal.com
Hahaha!!! I know have nachos spat all over the pc screen!!!

Date: 2009-04-24 07:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solarflar3.livejournal.com
Pass the screen wipes somebody!

Date: 2009-04-24 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mkejenkins.livejournal.com
*sporfles*

I think I just hurt something giggling

Date: 2009-04-24 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xebgoc.livejournal.com
BWHAHAHAH ! I think you should leave it in !:)

::is fond of bad puns::

Date: 2009-04-24 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com
Heeeee, I love it! It has a certain charm, in my opinion... ;) Feel better, hon! *hugs* :D ♥♥♥!!!

Date: 2009-04-24 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crimedoc1.livejournal.com
*spits diet pepsi all over the keyboard*

Teeeheeee!

Hope your hand is feeling at least a little better! Take care of it! Don't overdo on the typing!

Date: 2009-04-24 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberwind.livejournal.com
*snorfle*

Oh God, I'm so glad I'm alone in my office right now. Especially since the mental images bore more resemblance to the 'Violet becoming a blueberry' scene in Willy Wonka than to anything even remotely sexy.

That is likely to keep me heartily amused for the rest of the day. Thank you!

Date: 2009-04-24 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melnay13.livejournal.com
Best. Line. Ever.

ROFL!

Date: 2009-04-24 09:11 pm (UTC)

glad

Date: 2009-04-24 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com
to hear you're feeling well enough to have bad lines! How's the hand?

Date: 2009-04-24 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azriona.livejournal.com
*falls over laughing*

*and will be back in a few minutes*

Re: *ahem*

Date: 2009-04-24 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*giggles* Because we all must have a bad line icon. It'll go right next to my Last Line of Doom! icon.

Re: *ahem*

Date: 2009-04-24 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
LJ says it's too big, that it can't exceed 40KB. *pouts*

Date: 2009-04-24 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunfall-e.livejournal.com
This is hilarious. And Crimedoc1, this is why my water glass is on the other side of the room. I do get crumbs on my keyboard, though. Thanks for a good laugh. Love the bad puns.

Date: 2009-04-25 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctorsdiva.livejournal.com
*gets up off the carpet* Oh please, why don't you use it - cheese is excellent and a good source of protein and calcium.

Date: 2009-04-25 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angel932.livejournal.com
Bad line? It sounded swell to me.

::facepalm:: *Sorry about that.*
Edited Date: 2009-04-25 03:27 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-04-25 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessalrynn.livejournal.com
It could work... In a comedy. *smirks*

Date: 2009-04-25 07:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seeing-history.livejournal.com
It's even worse if you've got Lady and the Tramp flitting through your head and you remember how the beaver pronounced the word "swell" with a whistle. God, my brain hurts.

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