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Title:  Exhale (1/1)
Author:  Amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose
Genre:  Smut, Drabble, Romance
Rating:  Adult
Beta:  JeopardyFriendly
Summary:  His hands are tied above his head, his eyes covered in black silk.
A/N:  For Ladychi who wanted smut to counteract real life.  Since alt!Nine and Rose are having a "serious" conversation, and Jonathon and Rose are in the middle of the Eiffel Tower, there wasn't much smut to be had.  So I wrote you a drabble.  Hope it helps, dear.

 

Exhale

 

 

His hands are tied above his head, his eyes covered in black silk. She exhales against him and he can feel her breath ghosting across his skin. It is the only part of her that touches him and he aches for so much more. “Rose.” Her name is a guttural cry for relief, or mercy, or more. He isn’t sure. He never is. Her laughter rumbles in her throat. He strains against his bonds, but she has bound him well. Her mouth pressing into his belly stills him, though escape was never his intention. And as he surrenders, she begins.

Date: 2009-03-06 07:04 am (UTC)
themusecalliope: Vulpes Vulpes (fantastic)
From: [personal profile] themusecalliope
Lightly smutty with a chance of Guh, indeed.

I would also add that a *thud* front will be coming in from the west overnight.

Edit: Oh, wow! First!
Edited Date: 2009-03-06 07:07 am (UTC)

Sighhhhh

Date: 2009-03-06 07:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com
Actually I think that *Thud* front will be coming from the South actually *snicker*

The only complaint I have it the one I have about all your fiction: theres NOT enough!

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Date: 2009-03-06 07:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Hee. Thanks.

Date: 2009-03-06 07:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2009-03-06 07:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ehmi.livejournal.com
Woohoo! <3 Thanks!

Date: 2009-03-06 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Ever so welcome! *grins*

Date: 2009-03-06 07:38 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ladychi.livejournal.com
Oh, that made ME exhale. In relief. Thank you so much. it was ever so lovely and yummy. *thud*

Date: 2009-03-06 07:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
I hope it helped lighten your day a bit, dear! Did you get any other takers? I could use me a good dose of Doctor/Rose down and dirty smut that I didn't write myself.

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Date: 2009-03-06 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mermaidinblack.livejournal.com
Niiiiice! Yum! :-D

(me, aka [livejournal.com profile] loveinabluebox

Date: 2009-03-06 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Oh, hi! Welcome to my LJ. *smiles* And thank you.

Date: 2009-03-06 08:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] simons-flower.livejournal.com
I'm not sure if it's just because it's after midnight when I'm reading this, but the first line? Utter perfection for setting the scene and dragging me right under for the rest of the scorching hot drabble.

*fans self* Um, yeah. Uh... *blinks* Ice water would be good right now.

Date: 2009-03-07 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you. It certainly lets you know what you're getting yourself in for.

Date: 2009-03-06 10:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solarflar3.livejournal.com
WOW! That just goes to show how HOT one hundred little words can be in the right hands!

Date: 2009-03-07 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad you think my hands are the right ones. *smiles*

Date: 2009-03-06 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctorsdiva.livejournal.com
The Hot 100 - thats a great name for smuttydrabble!

This was, as ever, amazing.

Date: 2009-03-07 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Hee. Thank you.

Date: 2009-03-06 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theoneeyedwitch.livejournal.com
Wow. Really brilliant.

Date: 2009-03-07 07:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*smiles* Thanks.

Date: 2009-03-06 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silencing.livejournal.com
My mind's really enjoying the metaphor of tying nine down. I really liked this, especially your wording

Date: 2009-03-07 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* It is a delicious idea, isn't it? Thank you.

Date: 2009-03-06 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amyo67.livejournal.com
OH, that's just lovely. Sorry I disappeared last night, I had a headache and decided to turn in early.
This is just wonderful.

Date: 2009-03-07 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. No problem. Victoria happened to be around. Not that I usually beta the drabbles anyway but she was there so...*shrugs*

Date: 2009-03-06 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yenly-gozal.livejournal.com
Wow! *lick lips*

Date: 2009-03-07 07:08 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-06 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildwinterwitch.livejournal.com
Mmm. Delicious.

Date: 2009-03-07 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2009-03-06 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessalrynn.livejournal.com
*grins ecstatically* Now, that was art. A lovely pose, perfectly drawn. I applaud with much applause.

(And, doesn't it just wreck some theories, as well! Whatever will you do now? *winks*)

Date: 2009-03-07 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Aw, thank you. I do love writing drabbles, especially ones like this.

Well, I dunno about theories. I've always written dominant Nine and mischievous in control Rose on an alternating basis. In loving relationships you take turns surrendering and being in charge. But certain eyes see only what they want to see. *shrugs* Oh, well. Their loss.

Date: 2009-03-06 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mitashade.livejournal.com
...

*comes back to self* What was I saying? Oh yeah... YUM.

OMG picturing Nine like that has given me serious focusing issues at the moment. LOL

Yummy and perfect, as always. Now I'm gonna go back and read more of Wolf Moon to get my fix. :P

Date: 2009-03-07 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*giggles* Thank you.

Focus? We don't need no bloody focus. *grins*

I am working on Hunger Moon this weekend, by the way.

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Date: 2009-03-06 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angel932.livejournal.com
eeeeeeeeeeeerk!

That was the sound of me reading this after a long depressing day.

Just the lift I needed!

Date: 2009-03-07 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
I'm glad it could lift your spirits. Thank you. *smiles*

Date: 2009-03-06 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jellybean728.livejournal.com
That just paints such a pretty picture in my head. (Not that you could have a bad picture of naked!Nine) Naked, bound & blindfolded Nine? YUMMY!!

Date: 2009-03-07 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Yes, he does make a lovely picture that way, doesn't he?

Date: 2009-03-07 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whovianluv.livejournal.com
Guh!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2009-03-07 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thanks.

Date: 2009-03-10 01:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anogete.livejournal.com
Guh. The breathing on him bit is lovely. Great job!

Date: 2009-03-10 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks. If you like the breathing bit, you might like to see it's companion piece Inhale, which is here: http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/74322.html

Have I seen you here before? Your name isn't at all familiar to me. Well, anyway, welcome to my LJ. *smiles*

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Date: 2009-03-10 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonmom64.livejournal.com
And a late *thud* from the Northeast here......

Date: 2009-06-11 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
And an even later thank you.

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