Fic Update

[amberfocus]

Now that the worst of the flu is leaving me I'm back to working a bit on my WiP's.  I've gotten a fair way on the next chatper of Zeppelins so should have that completed in the next couple of days, likely by Wednesday and I've done some on Vortex, too.  I'm in the thinking stage for You're What?  They have to go back to Earth now for the wedding Jackie's putting on for them.  I have a feeling something may go wrong when they do.  And I don't think Jackie's going to be very happy.

I ought to get back to the rewrite of Shop Girl, too.  I ought to have another chapter of Andromeda Rising put up soon.

I'm seriously considering splitting ch. 3 of Body Glitter in half and making a forth chapter.  I did some retinkering with it today (i.e. added lots of extra smut) and the chapter ended up being almost 3600 words.  Since the other two chapters are running about 1800 words I could easily split this third one into equal portions.  Oh, they'd both be smutty, never fear! *laughs*  And I'd have something to post two more mornings running.  Regardless, it's back in beta but I should have it back and be posting either some of it or all of it sometime in the morning.

Meanwhile, sneaky peek here:

 

He sits back on his knees for a moment, finds her eyes and says, “Spread your legs for me, Rose.” His voice is dark, drenched with desire and full of command. Without any other thought in her head but to allow him access, her thighs fall apart. He gasps, nostrils flaring as he takes in more fully the scent of her desire. He lowers his head, spends a full minute just breathing her in before his hands move again, sliding from knee to inner thigh and settling at her folds, using long fingers to lightly open her to him.

 

“Beautiful,” he breathes as he drinks her in. His eyes search out hers once more before he settles between her legs and reaches out with the very tip of his tongue to make contact with her clitoris. Rose nearly leaps off the bed and the Doctor’s rumbling laugh at her sensitivity is soon overcome with the serious business of making her writhe and squirm and squeal and thrash as he seeks out all the little marvelous ways of bringing her pleasure with his tongue.

 

Comments

[ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com]

BRB *is ded*

;) So glad to hear that you're feeling better and that things are beginning to move along for you with all your WIPs! :D And yay for the retinkering, particularly when it means more tasty smuttiness! \o/

Can't wait to read it, whether it's in one or two more parts! :D *hugs!* ♥!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Thanks. It's really...very smutty.

[catyuy.livejournal.com]

So very glad you are feeling better...........and now I die from reading you snippet of fic...*is drooling and dead*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Thank you. Flu is evil but not as bad as pneumonia, so recovery is faster. I'll be posting it sometime tomorrow morning Pacific Time.

[honorh.livejournal.com]

*psst!* It's "peek" that you're looking for. A "peek" is a quick look. A "peak" is the top of a waveform or a climax. Which means this is a peek that will lead to a peak very soon for Rose. And I'll be in my bunk.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I know, it's a typo but I never did figure out how to edit the cut words from rich text. I'll see if I can figure it out.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Erm...no, it wasn't in the cut, was it? *growls at self* You know, part of me thinks it really ought to be called a sneak pique, since it's really piquing your interest. *laughs*

[amyo67.livejournal.com]

I don't know if you're still on, but I just finished the beta and sent it back to you. If you decide to split it, let me know if you need any help deciding where the split should be.
I am so glad that flu is under control. I've been hoping it wouldn't get you down too long. I worry.
*Huggles You*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Oh, I know exactly where I'd split it. The parapgraph where Rose says, "My turn?" *grins*

[amyo67.livejournal.com]

You are brilliant. *APPLAUSE*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Or evil. *snickers*

[doctorsdiva.livejournal.com]

Don't really mind how many parts - but please, please, pretty please POST!

My interest is definitely piqued, as I peak waiting for a peek!

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Not quite yet. I still have to do a final proof.

[corusca.livejournal.com]

I just realized that I've been terrible at reviewing lately, and I'm sorry! I've still been reading though, and loving! :-/ Anyhoo, I'm glad you're feeling better, make sure you keep getting lots of rest!

Oh, and I cannot WAIT for the next part of Body Glitter :-D My actual response to this snippet was a whole lot of syllables that don't equal words so...yeah, kudos.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

It happens. Though I have missed your reviews. And *ahem* your stories. Any forthcoming soon?

[corusca.livejournal.com]

Weeell, I'm about 2/3 through the next story for Man Who Wasn't There, but my laptop is currently off being repaired so I'm fairly unable to write :-P I'm doing all my internet-ing from my cellphone these days *grumble* Not an easy task, but better than nothing, I s'pose...

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Bummer. I thought it had been a long time since I'd seen any fic from you. Well, relatively long, for you anyway.

[corusca.livejournal.com]

Yeeaaah, I've been having a bit of writer's block too so that's not helping much