Have you read Inflame? It takes place later in the same series as Sacrifice (but as with the other stories in the series was written before Sacrifice). Chapter one is sex completely from Ten2's point of view and maybe reading it will help you in figuring it out?
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Date: 2008-08-09 06:37 am (UTC)It's here: http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/105746.html
Another one I've written completely from the male pov is Take Me Dancing found here: http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/27075.html