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Title:  Three Hour Tour (2/?)
Author:  [livejournal.com profile] amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose
Genre:  Action/Adventure, Romance, Smut
Rating:  Adult, this part
Betas:  [livejournal.com profile] amyo67, [livejournal.com profile] jeprdyfrndly
Summary:  The Doctor and Rose are shipwrecked after taking a three hour tour.
A/N:  Written for the [livejournal.com profile] sistersofguh Doctor/Rose End of Summer Smut-a-thon.  Probably a total of 3 chapters.  Not work or school safe and mind the kiddies.  Ch. 2 and 3 use the prompt by [livejournal.com profile] housemaid79 which was:  Nine/Rose:  First time - Nine is not a sex god...and Rose not much more expert herself (and yet, in the end, a good time is had by all).

Ch. 1:  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/377809.html
 
Chapter Two: No Objection

Kissing the Doctor was different than she’d imagined it would be. Rose had expected suave sophistication and thorough knowledge of what he was doing. After all, he’d boasted to her that he’d danced before and all of the innuendo that had flown between them time and again had made it sound like he was vastly experienced, or at least somewhat experienced, with women. This kiss was tentative and a little bit unsure. His lips were softer than she’d expected and he was far gentler than what she was used to.

Not that she was any expert with kissing either. She’d had exactly two boyfriends. Jimmy had pretty much only been interested in one use for her mouth and kissing hadn’t exactly been it. They hadn’t lasted long. Mickey had been an aggressive kisser, so aggressive sometimes her jaw had ached afterwards, but he’d been a sweet and considerate lover otherwise so she’d never complained. This was…nothing like that.

It wasn’t that the Doctor’s soft, hesitant kisses didn’t do marvelous things to her insides. They did. She just wanted…more. There had to be something in between. Her hand slipped up his body to cradle his face and with more bravery than she really felt she skipped her tongue across his bottom lip. He startled a bit, pulling his head back just for a few seconds, his mouth forming a surprised o. Rose followed him forward, pressing her lips slowly back to his again.

She peppered him with little kisses and when his lips began to relax, flipped her tongue out again to test the seal of his lips. This time he didn’t pull away from her, instead letting his mouth slip open enough for her tongue to dance through. She went slowly, afraid of startling him again. Just because his species “danced” didn’t necessarily mean they made love, or even kissed, quite the same way as humans. Maybe tongues weren’t a part of it for him.

If they hadn’t been, they were now, she thought, as the Doctor gathered up the courage to start exploring her own mouth with his tongue several seconds later. Rose made a garbled sound of delight and let him find his way around. Her fingers fisted in his jumper, trying to bring him closer. She succeeded somewhat as his lower half slid closer to her and she felt the very distinct form of his desire against her.

Rose picked up his hand and slid it under the hem of her t-shirt. The Doctor froze as his fingers encountered the bare skin there and for a moment she wondered if she’d gone too far too fast and this was all going to end in an embarrassed round of recrimination for her forwardness.

“Doctor?” she asked suddenly timid. She made a tiny little sound of frustration and then the Doctor returned to kissing her fully. As his hand began to move up her body she felt a soft shiver of anticipation whisper through her. It took him a bit of time, but eventually his large, long fingers were splayed across her breast. She’d stripped off her bra before settling down to sleep so there was nothing to hinder his access now.

Slowly he edged his fingertips along her breast, circling lightly from the outside in. He squeezed softly, molding the soft mound this way and that, cupping and stroking and finally pushing her shirt up to expose her breast to the night air. His thumb tweaked across the nipple and she let out a sudden, startled cry as desire swept straight to her core.

The Doctor froze at her noise then abruptly pulled away. “Did I hurt you?” he asked.

“No!” she practically shouted at him. He tensed. “No,” she said more gently. “It feels…really good. You feel…really good.”

They stared at each other in the dark.  When the Doctor didn't touch her again she could come to only one conclusion.  “You don’t…want to, do you?” Rose said sadly.

“Don’t be daft,” he said. “’Course I do. It’s just…I’ve never done this—.”

“I thought you said you’d danced,” she interrupted.

“I have! It’s just been a while,” he admitted slowly. “And never with a—a human.”

“So I’m not good enough?”

“Don’t be stupid.”

“Don’t call me stupid!” Rose snapped back.

“I didn’t mean it like that,” he said.

“You keep pulling away like I’m doing something wrong!”

“Maybe I don’t know what I’m doing right!” he exclaimed. “I’m messing it all up. Look, it’s complicated, Rose. I want to be with you. I’m just…I’m not some sex god. It’s not going to be magically good and perfect and right. I don’t know what I’m doing here. The mechanics are the same, more or less, but…I don’t know what feels good for you. I don’t know what you’ll like or not like and I don’t want to hurt you. I don’t want to cock this up and never have the chance to be with you like this again.”

Rose’s breath hitched. He wanted more than this one time with her? She had hoped that tonight wasn’t just going to be a one off, but with him voicing the words, happiness flowed through her. She reached out and took the Doctor’s hand, squeezing it softly. “I don’t want a sex god, Doctor. I don’t want perfect. I just want you. You and me, figuring it out as we go, just like we do with everything else. When you lo—.” She broke off, her heart beating frantically at her slip. “Look, if anything hurts, I’ll tell you. Until then, feel free to do what feels natural to you.”

“Really?”

“I trust you, Doctor. I’ve trusted you with my life since we met. Now I’m trusting you with my body. I want this. I want you. Make love to me, Doctor.”

She reached for his head, her fingers scrabbling against the soft, short hair. She pulled his head back down, this time towards her breast. The Doctor guided her breast into his mouth, his tongue swiping across the nipple. Rose arched up into him, her hand clamping onto the back of his neck to keep him in place. She whispered words of encouragement as he made swift circles about the hardened bud. His other hand began to cup and knead the second breast and she felt arousal flooding her kickers.

He pulled back after several minutes. “Can we get rid of this?” he asked, fingering the shirt that was bunched up above her breasts.

She sat up and shucked it the rest of the way off and then she reached for the hem of his jumper. He raised his arms and she tugged it off over his head. Her hands found his chest and she ran them all over his newly exposed pectorals, ribcage and stomach. He sucked in his breath as she touched him and when her fingertips ghosted over his nipples he made a shocked sound of pleasure. “You like that?” she asked quietly.

“I like that,” he said, his voice so dark it sent her heart racing again. She pushed him on the shoulders until he fell backwards and she lay beside him, half on him. Hesitantly she reached out and flicked her tongue across his nipple. He hissed and his hand came up to rest on the back of her head. She continued to give him little cat-like licks as her hand wandered up and down his torso. She liked the way his muscles tensed and twisted under her touch.

His hand drifted from her head to make its way down her hair to the soft skin of her back. He stroked her spine and she squirmed when he moved to her ribs. “Ticklish,” she said against the hard little nub in her mouth. He did it again and she giggled then gasped as his hand quickly slid further down and squeezed her bum. “Think we should get rid of these, too,” he said, slipping his hand back up to her waistline and plucking at the cargo pants and knickers.

Rose slid her hand down to gently cup the front of his jeans. He made an inarticulate sound as her fingers rested on his maleness. She caressed him softly then moved her hand to his belt. “These could go, too,” she murmured.

They pulled apart and as Rose skimmed out of the rest of her clothes, the Doctor kicked frantically at his jeans as they tangled around his ankles. She smiled at his haste and stilled his legs, pulling the heavy fabric clear of him. At last they were both naked.

The moonlight filtering through the trees left them mostly in shadow, just the hint of shape and form visible. Rose hoped she’d get a chance to see what he looked like come morning. Then she decided she didn’t want to wait until morning. “Can we go down to the beach?” she asked.

“You want to go swimming now?” he asked, a slight bit of exasperation in his voice.

“No, I want to see you,” she admitted. “I want to see all of you.”

She could see the sudden gleaming of his teeth as he smiled. “Best idea you’ve had all night,” he said.

“Better than making love?” she teased.

“Second best,” he quickly amended. He scrambled to his feet and helped her to hers and they carefully picked their way barefoot down the little trail that led to the beach.

Once in full moonlight they just stared at each other. It was the Doctor that broke the silence. “You are…oh, Rose.” He swallowed. “You are so beautiful.” He reached out and stroked her breast and then slid his hand down to her hip.

She smiled then stepped back. “Let me look at you.” He did and she studied him thoughtfully. He was lean and long, his waist narrow, his hips not particularly wide. He was visibly erect and sizable enough that Rose gave a wide grin. Maybe seven or eight inches, but not too thick. He was hairless there and his balls were tight and close to his body. His long runner’s legs were muscular and strong, but the one thing she’d probably fantasized about more than anything was his bum. “Turn around,” she said softly and with a smirk he did.

“Oh, nice arse,” she said reaching out and firmly taking two solid handfuls of his buttocks and he jumped, then relaxed under her touch.

“Doesn’t disappoint?” he asked and she could hear the grin in his voice.

“What?” she asked in consternation.

“Caught you ogling a time or two, Rose Tyler,” he said.

“You did no such th—.” She stopped herself. “Well, maybe you did.” She fitted herself to his back, pressing her breasts into him, and then slid her hands around him, down the hollows of his hipbones and then further still to cradle his penis in one and his balls in the other. She gave him a swift stroke and he cried out.

“Rassilon, Rose!”

“You okay?” she asked loosening her hold.

“Oh, yeah,” he said turning in her arms to face her. He dipped his head and caught her mouth again, and this time when he kissed her, the hesitation was completely gone. Her arms crept up to circle his neck and she melted into the kiss for several long seconds. She was gasping for air when they parted.

He pushed her back from him and his eyes danced over her body again. He took no shortcuts, his eyes lingering on her breasts and hips and then at the apex of her thighs, where soft brown curls grew. He spun her about and smiled at her own perkily curved backside. “All that running does make for a nice bum,” he told her admiringly.

“That why we do it, then?” Rose giggled. “To give each other something to enjoy when we’re chasing after each other?”

“Could be,” laughed the Doctor. He dropped to the sand and pulled her down beside him. “Anything in particular you like?” he asked.

Rose blushed. “What…what do you know about human sex, then?” she asked him without answering his question.

“Tab A goes into slot B, wiggle until orgasm,” he said cheekily. “Pretty basic amongst species, really.”

“Yours?” she asked.

“We didn’t…really…do that,” he admitted slowly. “I mean, we could, and as a species we used to, but by my time…not so much.”

“How did you make baby Time Lords then?” she asked curiously.

“We didn’t. Time Lord is a rank, Rose, not a species. We made baby Gallifreyans. Going to the Academy for years and years and years and listening to boring old lectures and learning how to fly a TARDIS and genetic tinkering made you a Time Lord. Or Lady.”

“Gallifreyan?” she asked. She stumbled over the unfamiliar word, pleased that he’d shared this information with her.

“My planet…it was called Gallifrey.”

“Beautiful name.”

“It was a beautiful planet,” he said softly.

They were quiet then for a bit, stroking each other softly and kissing until the intensity got a bit strong and Rose needed to take a break for air. “How…how’d you make baby Gallifreyans then?” she finally asked a few moments later, curiosity getting the better of her.

He snorted into her hair at her question. “Genetic engineering. We had something called Looms. It was…complicated.”

“Ah. Can you have babies then, the old-fashioned way?” she asked pressing her lips to his chest and kissing just above his sternum.

“No. You might have noticed, I’m a male.” He wiggled against her, his hardness pressing insistently into her.

Rose laughed. “You know what I mean. I’m not gonna end up up the duff, am I? I’m way too young to have kids yet.”

“You’re way too young to be with me,” he muttered darkly.

“Don’t you dare,” she said warningly. “I’ve waited too long for you.” She hugged him tightly.

He laughed despite himself and smiled, hugging her back. “You don’t need to worry about it. You’re not ovulating, Rose,” he said.

“How do you know that?” she asked in surprise.

“Your scent changes through your cycle. You were a week ago.”

“You can smell that?”

“Human hormones are very strong, Rose. Least to my—.”

“Big nose?”

“Oi, I’ll have you know there’s a poet on Sarcon 2 that has written poetry about my nose.”

“I know. I was there. Very bad poetry, as it turned out,” she interrupted teasingly. She kissed the tip of his nose. “I like your big nose,” she said softly. “It adds character. Like the ears, too, if you didn’t know it.” He preened. “I suppose this scent thing is that superior Time Lord physiology again?” He laughed and nodded. “So then, we don’t have to worry about pregnancy?”

“Not right now, no. But later on…I mean, if you—if you want to continue this sort of—of relationship with—with me,” he stammered, “then sometimes, yeah, we’d have to take precautions.”

“I’ll keep that in mind.”

“So…you never answered my question before. About sex, I mean. Is there…is there anything in particular you like?” he asked.

“Never had anyone ask me that before,” she said softly.

“Don’t think much of your former lovers,” he sniffed.

“I…I don’t know,” she said. “What I like, I mean.  I know what...what they liked. What do you like?” she asked.

“I know what I’d like to do,” he said.

“What?”

“This.” He slid down her body, pushed her thighs apart, and gently slipped his tongue between her folds. "That is if you have no objection." His words vibrated against her and she reached down to hold his head in place.

"No objection at all," she sighed.
 
Ch. 3:  http://amberfocus.livejournal.com/379912.html 

Date: 2010-09-05 05:35 am (UTC)
juliet316: Made for me by < lj user= alizarin-skies> as a result of bidding on her for the Support Stacie auction.  Not shareable (Doctor Who: NineRose: Spark)
From: [personal profile] juliet316
Wow, you've made this both so incredibly hot and incredibly sweet at the same time. Look forward to part three.

Date: 2010-09-05 05:36 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-09-05 06:10 am (UTC)
got_swagger: (DW:  Nine/Rose - And We Never Stopped)
From: [personal profile] got_swagger
Oh, this is marvelous. Sexy and sweet at the same time! I love the honesty between them and how it's new to the both of them.

Date: 2010-09-05 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com
Aww. I generally like "Nine is a sex god" fics--hey, fantasy fulfillment, okay?--but I really like the sweetness and awkwardness of this. Looks like they'll be figuring things out soon enough.

Date: 2010-09-05 07:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com
An utter delight as always, adore the hesitancy and sweet tenderness between them. Also have to agree he does so have a lovely arse!

Date: 2010-09-05 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wildwinterwitch.livejournal.com
I really like that you're taking the time to have them have this very sweet conversation; also, the Doctor's insecurity is ver endearing and it makes him seem more real -- particularly with the Gallifreyan form of reproduction in mind.

Oh, and thanks, Rose, for the moonlight... (goes to find that song).

Date: 2010-09-05 08:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] housemaid79.livejournal.com
I nearly did somersaults when I saw that you used my prompt. (Yay!) They are so sweet here - both really enthusiastic, but also a bit unsure. I can't help but feel like this is very "them" - very easy for me to imagine it unfolding this way.

I just love this - so, so much! Can't wait 'till part three... (What a place to end a chapter!)


*oh, and by the way, this line just about killed me:

“Tab A goes into slot B, wiggle until orgasm,”

Date: 2010-09-05 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ahedonia.livejournal.com
I'm with HonorH and the others: sweetness, awkwardness and honesty are really doing it for me here. :)

Date: 2010-09-05 11:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mkejenkins.livejournal.com
Oh my....that was lovely.

WHERE'S THE REST?!!!!!!!

Date: 2010-09-05 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susanb03.livejournal.com
Hmmmm nice chapter :)

Date: 2010-09-05 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] michellemtsu.livejournal.com
Lovely as always!

Date: 2010-09-06 03:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jiji-bean.livejournal.com
I have nothing new to contribute: adoringly sweet and sexy hot at the same time. Nine is just *sigh* nine ♥

Date: 2010-09-06 04:21 am (UTC)
milieva: Purple flowers in a glass on a purple table. (DW: Nine Bright)
From: [personal profile] milieva
Absolutely gorgeous. I love the honesty same as everyone else, and of course the Doctor's comment about putting tab a into slot b had me giggling.

Unfortunately I read this while in the midst of a photoshop binge. Which I suppose could be a good or bad thing, depending upon your point of view. But that particular quote inspired this:

ETA: It's yours if you want. You've been a wonderful help so far with my venture into Nine fic.
Edited Date: 2010-09-06 04:24 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-09-06 06:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maniacalshen.livejournal.com
This is strangely cute. They're kind of adorably clueless and hesitant. Mix that with their gentle banter, and you get a very nice chapter!

Date: 2010-09-06 11:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yenly-gozal.livejournal.com
Oh wow! I can't wait to see the next part and the actual smut... It's gonna be hot...

Date: 2010-09-06 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scifiangel.livejournal.com
Oh, did you have to stop there. Just at the good part. Post soon!

Date: 2010-09-06 02:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spellweaver731.livejournal.com
I love this! I really, really love this. So often in fic the Doctor (and Nine especially) is all manly-man god of sex, all aggressive and passionate. And while I often like that a great deal it's wonderful to see this, it's more like the man we see on screen, who gets embarrassed by flirting and doesn't know how to pay a complement, the man who gives Rose these longing smoldering looks but doesn't know what to do about it. I can't wait for the next part and not just because of the impending smut, I just love the way you are writing their relationship here.

Date: 2010-09-07 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyprydian.livejournal.com
“Tab A goes into slot B, wiggle until orgasm,” he said cheekily. “Pretty basic amongst species, really.”
*Snerk*

Date: 2010-09-07 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valiant-queene.livejournal.com
Wonderful!

A sex god doesn't make for a great experience alone. I am glad that this was kind of awkward and fumbling and learning together.

Date: 2010-09-08 01:46 am (UTC)
ext_348818: Jack Harkness. (permission to sin)
From: [identity profile] canaana.livejournal.com
I don’t want to cock this up and never have the chance to be with you like this again.

This was so beautiful it took my breath away.

Date: 2010-09-10 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emraldeyedauter.livejournal.com
Objections lol got to be kidding. This is so sweet and it's nice to see Nine unsure of himself at times, puts them on a more equal footing which I think is lovely especially during their first time.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I like to think both of those elements would be included in their first time.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:13 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-09-12 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. It felt really important for them to be so honest with each other here. So many times miscommunication can screw things up and I didn't want that for this.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Well, yeah, so do I, based on how many I've written. *grins* But it's fun and a bit of a challenge going in the other direction, too. They will have no problem figuring things out.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Well, yes, it is such a nice one and it's good of him to display it as often as he does in shows. *grins*

Date: 2010-09-12 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. The characters made me do it. *laughs* I like having a bit of insecurity in the Doctor. He's knowlegable about so much but when it comes to this the playing field is a bit more even.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Well, it was such a good one and it felt right for the direction in which the story was going in.

Glad you enjoyed that line. [livejournal.com profile] milieva made into an icon!

Date: 2010-09-12 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you. It makes for an interesting combination.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Hee, always so impatient. Wait until you see chapter four!

Date: 2010-09-12 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. I agree, he is, especially like this.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*laughs* I love it, thanks. And I'm glad the fic is working for you. I'm also happy I can be helpful with your Nine fic, which I am also enjoying a great deal.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. It's interesting writing Nine as adorably clueless. It's usually Ten who is like that, so it was fun to mix it up a bit.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*laughs* It's going to have a few chapters. I have to cut them somewhere. Thanks.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. It's fun having him a bit flustered and unsure of himself.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Nature loves to repeat a pattern! *laughs*
Edited Date: 2010-09-12 09:27 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-09-12 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Yeah, they are very sweet together like this. Thank you.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so happy you think so.

Date: 2010-09-12 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
*laughs* Well, it is a very intimate thing so...you never know. Well, you do, since I'm writing it, but still... Thanks. Making them fumble a bit is fun.

Date: 2010-09-12 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mkejenkins.livejournal.com
OMG! I LOVE THE ICON!

Date: 2010-09-13 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thought you might.

Date: 2010-09-14 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carly21.livejournal.com
Finally catching up with this...
I really love how careful they are with each other and Nine's lack in experience!
Love their banter as well and this line:
“Tab A goes into slot B, wiggle until orgasm,” he said cheekily.

FANTASTIC! XD

Date: 2010-09-25 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thank you. Well, Nine can't be a sex god every time, right? *laughs*

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