amberfocus | Fic Update (Reply)

Well, I finally figured out what was bugging me about chapter twenty-nine of LoF. I ended up cutting out about 1500 words and then rewriting that entire section. I had Rose agreeing to keep a secret from John. And that coming after her major revelation and promise not to keep anymore secrets from him. As good as the plot felt during that scene, it just didn't ring true to the journey these two have taken so far together. Of course that made pretty much another 1000 words obsolete since I changed it. I think the problems are over now. I hope they are. I miss the days of being able to pound out 1500 to 2000 words a day without fail. Writing like this, with only half my brain functioning, is so much harder. I just hope I can finish it today. I think once I'm through this bit of plot it'll start flowing pretty easily again. Just have to get up and over that hill.