Quite well done. Nine is hard to write because there's so little of him (comparatively) but he's still such a BIG character. Spot on here.
And the, um, pre-coital conversation? Brilliant, awkward, and endearing all wrapped up in one. We don't get many "let's talk about this" moments beforehand.
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Date: 2009-08-30 08:47 am (UTC)And the, um, pre-coital conversation? Brilliant, awkward, and endearing all wrapped up in one. We don't get many "let's talk about this" moments beforehand.