OK; I'm doing the *Ha, Ha, I'm First!* dance, here!
Wow. Even without actual *smut*, this is a hothothot chapter! And I love that Rose shoves off all the guys hitting on her. Jonathon certainly declared himself her boyfriend fast enough!
Super Hot: '“Bet I could make you come so hard you scream.” “The only one allowed to do that is me,” says Jonathon...."'
Donna is such a super addition to the story; love that woman!
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Date: 2008-08-31 06:45 am (UTC)Wow. Even without actual *smut*, this is a hothothot chapter! And I love that Rose shoves off all the guys hitting on her. Jonathon certainly declared himself her boyfriend fast enough!
Super Hot:
'“Bet I could make you come so hard you scream.”
“The only one allowed to do that is me,” says Jonathon...."'
Donna is such a super addition to the story; love that woman!
Smut not until chapter TWENTY!!??
*Hugs*