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I spent a good portion of today recoding Of the Vortex Born, linking chapters, and making a chapter links list. I think this leaves me with one fic that isn't fully linked chapter to chapter. At least I hope it is only one more. If I only knew in 2008 how much easier it was to do it as I went... But I think I've now fixed all the broken stuff that LJ had managed to do to the fic over the last few years and fixed the icons it somehow managed to change to default.

I've been rereading the fic, too, to refresh myself on it, because I've been thinking of it a lot this week. Only up to chapter 25, but I think this will be the fic I try to finish next. I mean, let's face it, it has been sitting there since fall of 2008 waiting to be finished and I really hate that. It has all of six chapters left to go (unless it gets away from me) and I even know how it ends so I don't know why I've not been writing it all these years. In rereading it, I've really gotten back into the story again. Although, gosh, the things I did to poor Jamie! And writing Mickey as the villain. I mean, I know the reason why he was the villain, but I love Mickey. Especially season 2 on Mickey so why did I ever cast him as villain? I guess maybe I didn't like him very much in 2008? Oh, well, it still works for the story.

We went swimming today and I got my 26 laps in so it felt very good. T swam along with me and we made sure to always watch out for other people since it was crowded. I wasn't nearly as sore afterwards this time so I really think my body is getting used to the exercise. The pool was more crowded than I like and I swear there was this one girl about 12 who I wanted to slap. I was standing in the middle of the pool, just talking to my kids and had my back to this girl. She was doing the back stroke and she just swam into me and then she had the nerve to give me this nasty, dirty look and made a rude comment.

I mean, pool etiquette is darn simple. You don't swim on your back in a crowded pool. It's dangerous and stupid and you need to see where you are going when there are too many people. If you do swim on your back in a crowded pool, the person swimming backwards looks before they swim and they certainly don't blame other people for not getting out of their way in a crowded pool if they are not seen. Back swimmers are always responsible for collisions.

I had a word with her mother, who benched her for her rude comment for about five minutes, but I couldn't help thinking that if her mother had been paying attention to her kids in the water in the first place, instead of flirting with the too-young lifeguard who was trying to pay attention to the pool and kept moving away from the woman, it wouldn't have been an issue. Once the kid came back in the pool, with another nasty look at me, mind you, she started goofing off again. She was doing handstands next to little kids and came down on one's head. Then the lifeguard kicked her out of the pool. You've never seen someone pitch such a fit. I wouldn't take a kid like back to the pool without some serious behavioral modification.

I was glad when the pool cleared out enough and the lap lane emptied. T and I went in there to finish our laps. He did about 20. He's becoming a really strong swimmer. He is anxious for next week to come when he will be allowed to actually jump into the pool again instead of lamely walking down the stairs like me. LOL

Date: 2012-07-14 07:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draconin.livejournal.com
Oh, I remember that fic. An intriguing version of Rose and, as I recall, rather confronting at times. I think you did nasty things to Pete as well didn't you? Very definitely looking forward to more of it. I'll have to go back and re-read. Oh dear, how sad. *g*

Date: 2012-07-14 07:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
No, I didn't do nasty things to Pete in this fic. I don't think he's even put in an appearance, though he's there in Moon Colony 2 with Jackie. I tortured Pete pretty badly in Hunger Moon, that's probably what you are thinking of.

Date: 2012-07-14 07:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draconin.livejournal.com
Ah, that must be it. All the more reason to re-read (as if I ever needed one for your work). :-)

Date: 2012-07-14 12:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelkat9.livejournal.com
Oh yeah I have Of The Vortex Born in my favorites on Teaspoon. I'm a bit excited to see you work on this. I do remember Mickey being a bit nasty in that story but it did work for what you were going for. Sympathizes with having to add all those chapter links. I did that for one I have that is over 50 chapters and it felt like it took forever! Good for you for getting it done. Wish I had your persistence. I have another multi chapter that needs it and I am avoiding it.

Date: 2012-07-14 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draconin.livejournal.com
\o/ Just finished re-reading. If you need a beta just yell: I'm good with grammar and on holidays at the moment.

Date: 2012-07-14 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Thanks, hon. I've been editing as I re-read, I didn't have a beta for this story the first time, but will probably need a second beta for new chapters. My DH [livejournal.com profile] thetesh is getting tired of proof-reading, LOL.

Date: 2012-07-14 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
The only one I have left to do, I think, is Repercussions. And I think I did get about halfway on that one when I did it beofre. At least that is a finished fic.

Well, you can always do five or six chapters a day until you get through your multi-chapter. That might make it more manageable.

Date: 2012-07-14 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
LOL, thanks.

Date: 2012-07-15 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] six.livejournal.com
Sounds like a brat, not just a rude swimmer. Oh, I haven't read that fic! Yay new fic for me! \o/

Date: 2012-07-15 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fishface44.livejournal.com
Great news about Vortex! I am a fan and am so pleased to have you come back to it! *hugs*

Date: 2012-07-15 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com
Hey, can you PM me with your email. I'm not sure if I will finish this chapter today or tomorrow, but I'd like to have it for when I'm ready to send it. Also, what version of Word do you use (I have the most current, but can save in any format) or should I just copy and paste it into the body of the email like I do with Amy?

Date: 2012-07-16 09:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] develish1
I don't think I've ever read any of that fic, but it could well be sitting somewhere way down on my reading list where all the other WIP's are lurking, lol

Glad to hear T is doing so well :)

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