amberfocus: (Nine Rose with Hearts)
amberfocus ([personal profile] amberfocus) wrote2008-11-21 08:26 pm
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Happy Birthday Lostwolfchats--Smutlet Just for You

Title:  She Offers This (1/1)
Author:  amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose
Genre:  Smutlet, PWP, Romance
Rating:  Adult, NC-17
Betas:  Corusca and OtherMeWriter
Summary:  Um...the Doctor and Rose have sex.  That's pretty much it.

A/N:  This started life as a double drabble but ended up being five paragraphs.  Each paragraph is exactly 100 words.  Lovingly dedicated to Lostwolf.  I've adored you as a writer since your very first chapter on Teaspoon a little over a year ago.  I've had more fun with you than any other author and I hope you have the best birthday ever.  *big hugs*


                                                           She Offers This

He slides into the bed, the depression of his weight telling her that he’s there beside her. She’s exhausted from a long day of saving the universe, running, and generally getting into and out of trouble, but she doesn’t hesitate to roll onto her back and grant him access to her body. His hands move at lightning speed, pushing her flimsy sleepwear out of his way so he can hook his fingers into the lace of her knickers and rip it away. His fingers seek her sex and she doesn’t complain at their coldness, immediately opening her legs for him.

 

He is impatient, she can tell, for her body to respond to him and he brings his mouth down hard on hers in an open-mouthed kiss that leaves her breathless. His kisses always steal the air from her lungs in his greed. When he breaks it his mouth trails along her jaw to the pulse point of her neck, towards the flesh of her shoulder, then downward. His lips suckle at her breast, his tongue rolling around the heightened nipple, his fingers working against her clit. “Rose,” he gasps. “Need you so much.” His fingers plunge inside her in desperation.

 

There isn’t much in the way of moisture yet, but he cannot seem to stop himself and she will not deny him when his need of her is so great. She spreads her thighs further apart and arches up into his hand. “Doctor,” she says. “My Doctor.” It is hard for her to think of any other words when his body is this close to hers. Her arousal flares into life and she is grateful as it works its way down his fingers and eases his movements within her. She reaches for his torso and tugs his body into place.

 

He removes his fingers and pushes himself inside her in one sharp, hard thrust that has her gasping for breath. He gives her no time to adjust before his body is moving fast and furiously. She knows it is his fear of losing her that he acts out as he pounds himself into her body. His words in her ear echo what his shaft is telling another part of her. “Almost lost you. Never leave me. You are mine.” He repeats them like a mantra as he takes her body. And she won’t. She’ll never leave him. Because she’s his.

 

He plunges harder and harder as he races for completion. Her legs lock around his waist and he groans as it grants him deeper access. She flies apart, her orgasm coming upon her suddenly and from out of nowhere, or perhaps from his complete and total possession of her body, heart, and soul. It doesn’t take him long after that, a few more wild thrusts that nearly push her head into the headboard. He shudders violently and collapses on top of her. She lets him rest there, holds him tightly. It is what she offers, because he, too, is hers.

[identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 05:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, my dear ....

Uh ... *Gurgle?*

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:28 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you.

[identity profile] wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh ... ummm ... by the way, it's my birthday ... too?

*Offers chocolate chip cookies*

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
Uh huh, you tried that last time. Pull the other one, it has bells on. *laughs*

[identity profile] rowofstars.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
*guh*

I love it when fanfic writers have birthdays. It's like we all get presents. :D

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:30 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. *grins* Well, I know I like writing them as gifts.

[identity profile] kimori1024.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
*guh* Oh, that is absolutely beautiful and sweet and oh so very hot! ^_^ Love it!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. Hey, any chance of an update soon for One Night in Paris? *bats puppy dog eyes*

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[identity profile] simplyn2deep.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 05:32 am (UTC)(link)
that is a GREAT birthday gift!

wow

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:31 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It was fun to write.

[identity profile] crimedoc1.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
*thud*

And I'm supposed to go to SLEEP now?

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:33 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I wanted it to be here for when she wakes up and since she's in England it shouldn't be too much longer. But for the rest of us here in the states and Canada, yeah, you're supposed to sleep after that with very pleasant dreams about one Christopher Eccleston.

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LOVELY

[identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
A lovely present for a lovely writer by another lovely writer.

Thanks for a great present for all of us.

OMW

Re: LOVELY

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:34 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. You're sweet. And thanks for the beta help!

Re: LOVELY

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[identity profile] soniced-up.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:43 am (UTC)(link)
Ummm...

I'll be in my bunk.
Edited 2008-11-22 06:44 (UTC)

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
*giggles*

[identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 07:00 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that is nice. Very nice. Smutlets are like chocolates--one can never have enough. Thank you!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Hope it helps you feel better if you're still nuts from the other day. Didn't have anything in me that day to help.

[identity profile] maniacalshen.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 07:08 am (UTC)(link)
When you said she was exhausted and he needy, I couldn't help but think that it'd be funny if she swatted him away like a bad puppy and just rolled over. I guess that's more likely a few years into the relationship. XD

But by the next paragraph, I wasn't thinking of much at all. ;)

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 08:02 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Well, it wasn't that sort of fic, though I am tempted to do a crack!fic now on that idea.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks.

Hugs and kisses

[identity profile] lostwolfchats.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 09:04 am (UTC)(link)
SQUEAL!!!!!!!!

Thank you - for writing me something, for the dedication, which was lovely and for being such a wonderful 'never met her but that doesn't matter' friend :-D

Now I will read it.

Re: Hugs and kisses

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, you're so welcome. I get so much enjoyment out of your stories and our friendship.

[identity profile] lostwolfchats.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 09:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oo - and you know that is my favourite kind - a little bit hard and rough and possessive.

Lovely!

Thank you so much :-D


It makes up for the fact I am THIRTY FIVE!!! a little :-D

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Yes, I know. I did tailor it to your particular likes. *laughs* I'm glad you liked it. Thirty-five isn't so bad. I'll be 39 in February!

[identity profile] solarflar3.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 10:05 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! That was hot and angsty! Love it!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Hope it improved your day a bit, too, since you were having such a rough one.

[identity profile] jessalrynn.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 10:20 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful. Short and sweet and a teeny bit angsty and just lovely.

I think I like it when there are author birthdays! *grin*

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Oh, I love it when there are author birthdays or sick days that inspire smut. Or inspire me to write smut.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks.

[identity profile] ramblinsuze.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 11:54 am (UTC)(link)
Yummy yummy yummy.

I must have just missed this before going to bed last night. Darn it. No hot Nine dreams.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Well, you know you can have hot Nine dreams without prompting from me, too. *grins* It's allowed.

[identity profile] dragonmom64.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
sajgdtyfbhsbh..........

Words fail me......

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles* Thanks.

[identity profile] wildwinterwitch.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Erm, yeah. Very intense, and you've captured his desperation very well.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It was that desperate need I was going for.

[identity profile] yenly-gozal.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks.

[identity profile] tardismate.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh...ummmm...yes....its....meep...GUH!

'tardismate is unable to respond coherently at the moment. Normal service will be resumed as soon as possible. Please leave a message after the tone. BEEP.'

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
*laughs* Meep guh? New language? *grins* Thanks.

[identity profile] doctor10-crazt.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 07:19 pm (UTC)(link)
guh...

*lying on the floor, unabe to move, drooling at pictures flitting through mind*

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
*hands over big fluffy towel to wipe up drool with* Thank you.

[identity profile] lillibetm3.livejournal.com 2008-11-22 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh that was just perfect. So dark and sexy and loving too. :)
Loved it!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I do adore writing him this way.

[identity profile] angel932.livejournal.com 2008-11-23 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! This is very powerful.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. It did turn out quite intense.

[identity profile] qtrhorserider.livejournal.com 2008-11-23 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
Guh!!! That was well, OMG! Lucky Lostwolfchats. Happy Birthday Lostwolf, by the way. Thanks for sharing your prezzie.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-11-24 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I wrote it just the way she likes it. *smiles*

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