Psst...

[amberfocus]

Guess who just sent the 2nd draft of Zeppelins ch. 19 off to Amy to be beta'd.? And it's over 4000 words. 

Teaser?  Yes?  Yes?  Okay:


She meets his gaze, but doesn’t say anything else and hesitantly he reaches out for the bottom button, waiting for her to stop him.  She doesn’t.  He undoes the first button, his fingers slowly working their way up her abdomen, fingertips grazing the smooth pink skin of her stomach.  He stops just beneath her breasts and raises his eyes to hers.  Her beautiful brown eyes are enormous and infinitely trusting and she gives him the tiniest nod and a brief little smile that quickly fades away as she closes her eyes and breathes deeply and he can’t help but admire the rise and fall of her chest.

Comments

[butterflyborn.livejournal.com]

God you're such a tease! We can has moar nao? And have I mentioned enough recently how much I love you???? Even with cliff hangers and the like. *grin* *hugs*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Yes, I am. I'm just waiting on Amy. I'll get it up as soon as I get it back and fix any errors and do a final proof read. And thank you very, very much. *grins*

[yummytimelord.livejournal.com]

Argh! I have to go to sleep! Damn it! It's half one in the morning for me and I've to be up for work in the morning so no wearing away the refresh button waiting for foreplay *sulks* mumble mumble stupid time difference mumble mumble stupid work mumble angst! Ah well I suppose I've something to look forward to when I come home tomorrow... or maybe get up early... hmmm

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Sorry. It should be there for breakfast for you if you have time in the morning. I promise it's a chappy worth the wait, though, even if they don't do it until the next one. *smiles*

[vallora.livejournal.com]

This is for Ch 19. You mentioned the "Get together" would be in ch 20. Are you actually going to give it to us early or are you going to be evil and this is the last line of the chapter.

Please don't tease more than you already do and don't be mean. I had enough meanness from another fic with a gut retching chapter that had me literaly in tears.

I'm so glad I go to work early in the morning. It should be waiting for me to read when I get up. 8-)

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

They will not make love until chapter 20, and then boy, howdy, they will make sweet luuuuuuurve. However, that being said, there are 1269 words following the teaser. I don't think I'm evil here at all, but I am very firm about the no doing it until chapter 20. When you read ch. 19 I think that you will see why it plays out the way it does. And no, there is no meanness in this fic. A bit of peril, yes, but it is my happy/happy fic. Jonathon and Rose will beat all the odds that the Doctor and the other Rose never seemed to be able to beat. Because I say so! *laughs*

[wiggiemomsi.livejournal.com]

Ahhh ... so for those of us also on Pacific Standard Time, you should be posting by ... midnight, perhaps?? Which means California girl me gets to be among the FIRST of your manymanymany fans to read it??

WHOO HOO!!

*Does dance of triumphant triumph!!*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

I'm hoping by nine or ten actually. I've sent it to Jep, too so if I don't hear back from Amy, I may post it anyway if I get it back from her first.

[doctorsdiva.livejournal.com]

Although I love the land of my birth, the time difference is a b**ch. 2.27am here, got to go to sleep, work at 7.30am and still no chapter 19, just a tease - admittedly a very exciting tease. Ah well *does a sleepy I love Zeppelins more than sleep dance*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*grins* It should be there for your brekkie.

[ramblinsuze.livejournal.com]

Tease. ;)

I hope I'll get the chance to read this before dashing off to work tomorrow, but probably not until after work. Darn it.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

Aw, sorry. It'll be worth it if you have to wait.

[amyo67.livejournal.com]

I have sent it over. Maybe Yahoo or hotmail is being slow. I just missed you on YM, but I am back on now and will be the rest of the evening.
And she is making it great for all of you and you will totally love it.

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

It hasn't come back yet. Try again?

[apurplepatch.livejournal.com]

Well, that makes sneaking onto the internet at work completely worthwhile.

*happy dances*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*grins*

[qtrhorserider.livejournal.com]

I won't get to read it in the morning, lunch is right out, and I wanted to go riding tomorrow evening, but I might have to put it off now.

Oh, you are evil. But I like that in a person so..

[lady-dree.livejournal.com]

Ack! The teasing! If i didn't know it's going to be worth it, it'd kill me having to get through my entire workday first. As it is, "come on 4 pm!"

*does happy dance*