amberfocus: (Jackie Tyler Mother)
amberfocus ([personal profile] amberfocus) wrote2010-02-06 03:32 am

I Dare You

Title:  I Dare You
Author: [livejournal.com profile] amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Doctor/Rose, Jackie
Genre:  Drabble
Rating:  Teen
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] jeprdyfrndly
A/N:  So I've had no time to write this week and barely any time to think and was kind of stuck there heading into the weekend until Victoria gave me these instructions.  Any version of the Doctor and Rose, a dangerous dare, they have to make a break for it, it must include Jackie, and oh, yeah, see if you can do it in a drabble.


 

It’s a simple dare. A toss of golden hair from her. A smirk from him. A glance back over her shoulder to make sure he’s watching. A tiny nod of encouragement. A smile, tongue caught between teeth, that accepts that dare.

“So, Mum,” Rose says. “Just how mad would you be if the Doctor and I were forcibly married on some alien planet and decided it was as good an excuse as any to resolve all that lingering sexual tension and shag the daylights out of each other?”

“What?!”

 The Doctor has to admit it’s the fastest they’ve ever run.

 


[identity profile] thette.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 12:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it! And it works just as well with both her Doctors, even though you said it's Ten/Rose.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 03:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I kind of wrote it that way on purpose, but ultimately decided to go with it being Ten because he's just that little bit more immature than Nine.

[identity profile] whitetaz.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Bwahaha!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
*grins*

[identity profile] yavie-namarie.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 12:29 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. If you expanded this into a bigger story, you would totally win at life, just saying. =P
This totally made me grin, especially since Ten really would have quite the incentive to run. Even with a regeneration, I'm sure he can remember the Jackie Tyler slap rather vividly.

[identity profile] captain91.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
ooh can i second expanding? i'll sned you virtual cookies

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[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles*

[identity profile] mkejenkins.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles*

This is awesome! Would love to see the story behind it!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I don't have the time to take this any further right now, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] xebgoc.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
::gigglesnort:: :)

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] sunfall-e.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I agree with everyone else. Please continue this.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I just don't have the time right now.

[identity profile] galadriella1.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
We need more of this... really lots more of this.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

[identity profile] maniacalshen.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol, I don't think they thought this one through. XD

"She'll get over it!"

"When, do you think?"

"..."

"..."

"Well, good thing we have a time machine!"

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:14 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Nope, I think they were busy having a giggle fit and daring each other to do more and more outrageous things and this sort of happened.

[identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 05:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohhhh your bad! Very very bad! I LOVED IT!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you. It's not my fault, really. It's all Victoria's fault!

[identity profile] amyo67.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
ROFLAO *giggles* That is funny.

Pure genius.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, sweetie.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] ageless-aislynn.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Heeeee! \o/ *massive gigglesnort* Oh, I bet indeed that's the fastest they've ever run, lol!

I kinda see it as Nine/Rose as well for some reason but it definitely works for Ten, too! :D (Or, you know, Ten2... ;) ) ♥!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:16 am (UTC)(link)
It really is. It was like lighting off a stick of dynamite. Yeah, I wrote it so it would work with any version of the Doctor, but I was leaning more towards Ten because of his immaturity level.

[identity profile] irishlullaby.livejournal.com 2010-02-06 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
hehhehehe brilliant! Though... I agree with [livejournal.com profile] thette. It could totally be either doctor. Similarly I also agree with [livejournal.com profile] yavie_namarie. There needs to be a longer version!!!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:17 am (UTC)(link)
I know it could be, I wrote it like that so it would work for either one of them. Thank you.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] 10-rose.livejournal.com 2010-02-07 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
Fantastically Brilliant!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-11 04:18 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks so much.

[identity profile] emraldeyedauter.livejournal.com 2010-02-07 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
I'm all for a longer story too. I can see this following on from proof positive although it doesn't have to be so. Great little drabble.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
I do wish I had the time to do that, too, but I don't. Glad you liked the drabble, though.

[identity profile] pncwho.livejournal.com 2010-02-08 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! Hell hath no fury like the wrath of an angry mother!

I saw this as Nine/Rose, especially being posted right after Proof Positive. That, and I suspect Jackie'd be more angry about Nine/Rose than Ten/Rose.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 05:39 am (UTC)(link)
Definitely not. Well, I wavered quite a bit before settling on Ten. So it's written mostly as just the Doctor and I really only tagged it as Ten to have a place to put it.

[identity profile] jovibabe363.livejournal.com 2010-02-08 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
More! More!! MORE!!!

Brilly fab!!!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, but that's all she wrote.

[identity profile] janna-hawkins.livejournal.com 2010-02-09 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! I can definitely see that happening with Nine. Run, Doctor, run! It's...the Jackie Tyler Slap of Dooom! :D

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
I think it really could have happened with either of them. *smiles*

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thanks.
milieva: Purple flowers in a glass on a purple table. (DW: IP Ten and Rose laughing)

[personal profile] milieva 2010-02-11 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
*giggle snort* I really don't have words...

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 05:41 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles* Glad it made you laught.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 05:41 am (UTC)(link)
*grins*
juliet316: Made for me by < lj user= alizarin-skies> as a result of bidding on her for the Support Stacie auction.  Not shareable (JackieTardis)

[personal profile] juliet316 2010-02-14 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
Hahahah!

Run Doctor, Run!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 05:42 am (UTC)(link)
Run for your life has a whole new meaning for him!

[identity profile] kk-animation.livejournal.com 2010-02-15 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, oh that is great! I can just picture Jackie hurling various things from the kitchen at the Doctor as he is running with Rose trying to help him.