amberfocus: (Nine Rose You and Me)
amberfocus ([personal profile] amberfocus) wrote2008-10-22 09:00 pm
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Fic Update--Prometheus

2,727 words later and they are still in their knickers.  Still standing beside the bed.  Not that it isn't getting hot in there, but honestly, are they ever going to strip off their clothes?  Are they aiming for a fifth chapter?  Get it together Nine and Rose.  It's time to get naked.

Sneaky peaky:


 

The Doctor held his hand out to Rose and she took it, rising to her feet on wobbly legs, the impression of his lips and tongue on her leg still tingling against her skin. His huge hands went to her stomach—how had she never noticed how impossibly big they were before?—sliding slowly up and onto her still-clad breasts. His fingers glided over the silk, gently cupping her and then kneading lightly. Her nipples rose up under his touch and he used his palms to rub little circles over the tightening buds. She arched towards him, her hair, long since a victim to his hands, trailed nearly to her waist as she threw back her head and exposed her neck.

YEAAAAA!

[identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com 2008-10-23 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
You go kids!! Give us a chapter 5 *BIG SMILE*

Re: YEAAAAA!

[identity profile] othermewriter.livejournal.com 2008-10-23 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
cooool first post dibs!! *does happy dance*

Re: YEAAAAA!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-10-23 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, it turned out to just be a really long ch. 4.