amberfocus: (Nine and Rose)
amberfocus ([personal profile] amberfocus) wrote2009-09-14 02:00 am

Crowded--Drabble for Kholly

Title:  Crowded
Author:  [livejournal.com profile] amberfocus
Characters/Pairings:  Nine/Rose
Genre:  Smut, Drabble
Rating:  Adult, R
Beta:  [livejournal.com profile] jeprdyfrndly
Warning:  Not Work Appropriate
Summary:  All Rose can feel is his body.
A/N:  Written for [livejournal.com profile] kholly who bid on me in the Support Stacie auction.

Crowded

 

 

People press close in the rowdy throng, but all Rose can feel is his body; chest pressed tightly to her back, hands at her waist just under the hem of her top, touching bare skin. The Doctor’s fingers are cool, but they send heat raging through her. It’s dark and the crowd can’t see what he’s doing as one hand slips inside the waistband of her trousers. She grinds back against him wantonly; feels his erection hard and ready. He finds her wet and more than willing, and to the beat of the music pulsing all around them, she comes.  



 

[identity profile] honorh.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 09:40 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, hot! I do love me a smut!drabble.

[identity profile] yenly-gozal.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 11:25 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! That's hot!

[identity profile] kholly.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad I work from home and can ignore the Not Work Appropriate warnings.

You are so brilliant with drabbles. It's so vivid with so few words.

[identity profile] amyo67.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 02:05 pm (UTC)(link)
GUH!!!

[identity profile] jessalrynn.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 02:58 pm (UTC)(link)
100 words and she melts the paint!! *grins*

Yummy!

[identity profile] hazelwho.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Like Amy said, GUH!!!

[identity profile] crimedoc1.livejournal.com 2009-09-14 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I think my computer just spontaneously combusted!

[identity profile] angel932.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 02:06 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah....I think I need a shower just about now....

[identity profile] feerocious.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
mmm hot and sexy :)

[identity profile] sellega.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmf.

[identity profile] tardismate.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
The Icon speaks for me...since I am now a pile of ash...

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. It's been a while since I've written one.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much. Drabbles are an interesting creature. Every single word needs to count for so much. It's a wonderful exercise in economy of line. Plus it's fun to see how much hotness you can pack into one little snippet.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I do try! Thanks.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. *smiles*

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Hopefully it's got a few incarnations to regenerate into like the Doctor. Thanks.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thank you.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins*

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles* Thank you, honey.

[identity profile] doctorsdiva.livejournal.com 2009-09-15 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Warm...Very Warm...Bloody HOT. *fans self*

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-16 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. *laughs* Just a bit.
ext_68028: nine_rose_fantasy (nine_rose_together)

[identity profile] nonlinearmusing.livejournal.com 2009-09-17 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
That was one hawt drabble! I might have passed out if it was a full blown ficlet. Well done! Kudos for the prompt. :)

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2009-09-24 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
I was tempted to keep going! Thanks.