amberfocus: (A Sky Without Zeppelins 2)
amberfocus ([personal profile] amberfocus) wrote2008-10-05 05:21 pm
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Psst...

Guess who just sent the 2nd draft of Zeppelins ch. 19 off to Amy to be beta'd.? And it's over 4000 words. 

Teaser?  Yes?  Yes?  Okay:


She meets his gaze, but doesn’t say anything else and hesitantly he reaches out for the bottom button, waiting for her to stop him.  She doesn’t.  He undoes the first button, his fingers slowly working their way up her abdomen, fingertips grazing the smooth pink skin of her stomach.  He stops just beneath her breasts and raises his eyes to hers.  Her beautiful brown eyes are enormous and infinitely trusting and she gives him the tiniest nod and a brief little smile that quickly fades away as she closes her eyes and breathes deeply and he can’t help but admire the rise and fall of her chest.

[identity profile] amyo67.livejournal.com 2008-10-06 02:11 am (UTC)(link)
I have sent it over. Maybe Yahoo or hotmail is being slow. I just missed you on YM, but I am back on now and will be the rest of the evening.
And she is making it great for all of you and you will totally love it.

[identity profile] amberfocus.livejournal.com 2008-10-06 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
It hasn't come back yet. Try again?