I love your style of writing, I also love how it seems to change with each story. Your stories just flow so well and I have a hard time putting them down. I do hope you return with more of this story, and others! (I follow you on teaspoon, I'm excited to follow you on lj as well!)
I like the more mature Martha. I always felt like they didn't do her character justice. I adored her and spent all of her season wishing she could get over the pining. (ugh!!) Hanks for making her so much more and tapping into what she should have been.