Ok, I love love love this chapter...but now I'm waiting for it to all come crashing down (this maybe because i watch way too many shows by Joss Weadon, possibly =D) I keep getting this mental image of Rose in a wedding dress and the doctor with his memories back saying that he has to leave, and Rose just crying (or locking his ass up, finding the Tardis and getting back to her universe depending how grumpy i am =p)

Great job! I cant wait to read the next bit =)