I'm so excited that you're turning this into a multi part story! I absolutely love the beginning. All of this is so very much in character. Nine trying to convince himself that he's not turning into a stalker, Rose going on with her life but realizing it's not the life she wants to lead and the TARDIS as always having the Doctor's best interest at heart. I love this part "She’d said no again, and his face…well, desolation wasn’t a strong enough word.". It really gives you an idea of how crushed he'd be it she said no the second time. And the ending, when he thinks it's her following out of the pub just breaks my heart. Can't wait for the second chapter!
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I absolutely love the beginning. All of this is so very much in character. Nine trying to convince himself that he's not turning into a stalker, Rose going on with her life but realizing it's not the life she wants to lead and the TARDIS as always having the Doctor's best interest at heart.
I love this part "She’d said no again, and his face…well, desolation wasn’t a strong enough word.". It really gives you an idea of how crushed he'd be it she said no the second time. And the ending, when he thinks it's her following out of the pub just breaks my heart.
Can't wait for the second chapter!