Fic Update

[amberfocus]

There will be smut tomorrow.  The paint on the wall behind my laptop seems to have melted.  I think there may be a connection between these two things.  Looks like Three Hour Tour may be turning into...oh, 8 chapters or so.  But not all of them will be smutty.  There is a PLOT.  But the next one is...very, very smutty.  Possibly smuttier than chapter 3.

Sneaky peeky:

She sought out his eyes and he blushed under the heat of her gaze and turned his head away. “No,” she said. “Please. No shyness now. Not with me. Never with me. Look at me, Doctor.” Rose bit her lip, nervous despite her request, as he brought his eyes back to meet hers. She swallowed hard under the intensity of his gaze then, but now he wasn’t afraid to hold it. Steel blue eyes met with soft brown ones. She smiled at him with such love. Dare he think love? She’d said it in the heat of passion, perhaps it had just slipped out, but her eyes told him a different story. He couldn’t help but smile back. How he deserved her love he would never know, but he wanted it as much as he wanted her.

Comments

[amyo67.livejournal.com]

Gee, could the fact that you picked this particular part have anything to do with the fact that it is probably the only passage that isn't rated M? LOL *giggles*

[amberfocus.livejournal.com]

*snorts with laughter* I wanted it to be work safe. I think there was another paragraph or two I could have used. Let me check. Umm...there are a grand total of five paragraphs I could have used, with only two of those five being slightly on the risky side. That was the safest one however. The rest were all...definitely not work safe.

[amyo67.livejournal.com]

*gigglesnorts* I'm just relieved to have that non-meltable monitor now. LOL