I'm glad Rose didn't just capitulate to the Doctor, the trouble is I feel for both of them. So afraid and so confused, this is going to be a hard job for the both of them, but at least they are beginning to talk about their feelings (albeit not to each other!)
I love the way you are crafting this story, slowly and realistically conveying their fears and confusion of the situation. :)


ps- I love 'Vortex born' too, any more coming??? :)