http://maniacalshen.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] maniacalshen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amberfocus 2009-08-16 11:08 pm (UTC)

“That was uncalled for,” she said, dropping his hand and going to walk on the other side of Jack.

Ooh, good on Rose. Some people would have had her crumple a bit there rather than giving a semi-mature reply like you did.

By the way, loved the conversation about the storage room. Which went downhill really fast. XD

“You brought a damn tribble on board,” Rose said.

[...]

“Don’t be silly, Rose. These aren’t tribbles. More like gremlins.


::Sporfle:: And there's actually too much well-crafted interaction for me to comment individually on in this chapter. Just know it rocks.

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