ext_52958 ([identity profile] soniced-up.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amberfocus 2008-10-20 06:12 am (UTC)

WOW! That was hot. And just...GUH!

He wants to make love to her again, but with a rueful downwards glance realizes that the phrase, “It’s dead, Jim,” would definitely apply in this situation.

This line had me snorting with laughter. I couldn't help but hear David doing his best Dr. McCoy imperssonation. LOL

That last line has me a bit worried though. Seems like a bit of nasty foreshadowing if you ask me.

I hope you feel better soon hun.

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