So much to say! First of all, you're psychic! I was just finished with Chapter 20 when up popped 21 on my flist. I finished reading it, squee'd for like 20 minutes (my roommate is coming to recognize the Doctor/Rose smutty dance), went off to write an entry in my LJ with the excess energy and so I wouldn't like, fall all over myself fangirling when I came back here, and then came back here to review. *whew* That was a long run-on sentence.

Anyway, I absolutely adored this. I suspect my OTP is now Lumin/Donna. I just love seeing her in love... putting all of her brassiness to use in disciplining a fully-grown man who probably needs a good whack about the head every once in a while. I think she'll be fine when she meets the aliens, by the way. Minor freak-out aside, she's still Donna. She eats awesome for breakfast and washes it down with awesome sauce.

Also: the smut. Guh. Can I please, please... just borrow Jonathan? Just for a bit. I swear I'll bring him back in one piece.

The sweetness of that scene, really... and the Guhness -- comes from the dialogue in between the sex, where they talk about sex with love and sex without love. It was brilliant. Absolutely adored it.

I suspect Donna isn't the only one who eats awesome for breakfast. Wonderful job, you!