Well that was certainly a surprise. I loved the fact that you sucked them into 'Smith and Jones' but this time it is Mickey Smith and Martha Jones. Charlie just wouldn't be denied would he? Martha and Mickey worked so well under pressure, and I am glad the TARDIS decided to cooperate for once.

I thought this part was pretty darn funny. Mickey just can't get past the Doctor and his tentacles:
Mickey finally came away from the doorway and stared down at the tiny child in awe. “He looks so human,” was all he could say and Rose just laughed at him.

“You were expecting tentacles? The Doctor looks just like we do. Of course Charlie looks human,” said Rose.

Now we have Judoon knocking on the door. How many chapters are left?

Thank you for another wonderful chapter!